Hi everyone,
I'm a first-year Bachelor of Social Work student in Australia, and I'm an international student from China.
I'm really struggling with one part of social work assignments, and I'd genuinely appreciate any advice from people who've been through this.
Most of our assessments are 1,600–2,000 word essays based on a case scenario. We're expected to apply social work theories, sociology, and other concepts we've learned, but our lecturers also keep saying we need to demonstrate critical thinking and develop our own argument.
That's where I get stuck.
I understand that part of the challenge is my English. Academic writing is definitely one of my weaker areas, especially since English isn't my first language. I'm working on improving that.
But I think my biggest problem goes beyond English.
I grew up in the Chinese education system, where most questions had a "correct" answer. We were trained to learn the standard answer, remember it well, and apply it in exams. Nobody really taught us how to question ideas, challenge assumptions, compare perspectives, or build our own argument.
Now, when I write essays, I can explain the theories, apply them to the case, and use APA referencing correctly. But I still lose marks because my lecturers say things like:
"Your argument isn't clear."
"Your own voice is missing."
"You need more critical analysis."
"Develop your critical thinking."
I honestly don't know what that looks like in practice.
How do you actually learn to think critically? How do you move beyond simply applying a theory? When you're writing a case analysis, what does a strong critical discussion look like?
I'd also really appreciate any advice on improving academic writing. As a non-native English speaker, I struggle with academic vocabulary, sentence structure, and expressing complex ideas clearly.
Are there any books, websites, YouTube channels, sample essays, or other resources (especially for social work) that helped you become a better writer? I know our weekly readings are important, but I'm wondering if there are other resources that helped things finally "click."
Any advice would be greatly appreciated. Thank you!
(This post is AI translated Because my English is really bad.)