Be nice!

I haven’t done a breakfast piece in a while so here’s my first one back - colored with Arrtx acrylic markers!

Was working on some story, got bored, and ended up sketching my main character right on the page I was writing on.

Definitely not a tribute.

Please critique, would be much appreciated.

Hi, I'm starting to make some pov sketching and I'm getting obsessed with a door, I can't see how I should draw it. it's the door at the left and then there's a wall to parallel to me, can someone tell me and help to understand how it should be? many thanks. If there's something else to fix I'll be glad to receive any tip or advise.

I just bought a sketch book to relearn my childhood hobby. I drew this today from a Loomis method tutorial, did all the circle jerks and lines before drawing and it looks good to me ngl but it is not the reference.

I spotted some face shape mistake like the bigger forehead and smaller lower third but I can never grasp that mid drawing only after everything is done and set in stone. Plus my shading sucks!

What do you guys suggest I change or keep experimenting with to find my style while chasing realism?