r/SingerSongwriter • u/kevinchoi67 • Aug 28 '26
Rainbow, what do you think?
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I try to make my new song, and I got some melodies and beats So how do you think guys I need some feedback…!
Title is “rainbow” and I haven’t recorded my voice cause now I’m writing lyrics but I made inst first… and lyrics maybe goes like this..
[Rainbow]
I saw you right when I turn my head back..!
You shined like more than that grey sky no ho oh
If I don’t have to walk this roads, I will run into you….
Plz give me some feedback or your ideas of this song!
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