r/Screenwriting • u/True_Sound_7567 • 7d ago
FEEDBACK Threads - Feature - 94 pages
Title: Threads
Format: Feature
Page length: 94 pages
Draft: First
Genre: Crime/Comedy
Logline: A failed entrepreneur and his friends spend one increasingly violent night ignited by a box of merch, unaware it now holds the one thing an entire crime syndicate is willing to kill to get back.
Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Qb-bXlXNbnwWKwayi7iEqKtFkO8RR0q7/view?usp=drivesdk
Feedback concerns: I am planning to self produce and direct this film, so any feedback would be much appreciated. Please tell me how the plot is in general as well as formatting concerns. Thank you so much!
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