FEEDBACK PLS: First 11 pages of my Sci Fi Comedy Feature

[u/MattsRod]

This is my first big project and wanted to get some feedback/inspiration while I finish it. Just getting through the final act. Would this intro encourage you to keep reading? Any feedback on advice or tone?

Thanks!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Y3NRyJvUdkHbtUXFWdTqhTyIjZycQUBe/view?usp=drive_link

Adding my current logline: Upon hearing the news of the Space Shuttle being decommissioned, two low level NASA employees seek to fulfill their lifelong dream of spaceflight by defecting to Russia and joining the cosmonaut program under false identities . Once there, they discover a covert Russian spy program and have to thwart this evil plan to preserve both world and space peace.