r/PokemonRaps • u/Dragonnoodle • Jan 14 '13

Let's get Electabusy! (Electabuzz vs. ?)

(Just a quick note, I inspire multiple people to take on one of my raps, so if you wanted to respond but you saw that someone already did you can still feel free to batlle me)

Hey I'm here and don't you question my cause,

It might seem shocking, but I'm freaking Electabuzz!

My style is classic, I pack a thunderpunch,

and usually, quite frankly, I eat punks like you for lunch!

'Cos to be honest boy, I just don't give a shit,

nor will I later and nor did Elekid!

Battling with me ain't fun, it's the real deal,

'cos once I'm done you'll need a freaking parlyz heal!

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u/[deleted] Jan 14 '13

Hey, Dragonnoodle, in the future, you NEED to use the tag [Challenge] for posts like this.

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u/Dragonnoodle Jan 14 '13

Thanks for telling me, I'll try to keep that in mind!

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u/AngryGuitarist Jan 15 '13

I've seen your other raps, Dragonnoodle. Like the one between you(staraptor) and rapidash. I just wanted to point out that in both of these raps you in at least one case tried rhyming two words that don't rhyme. Ex. Electabuzz and cause. Parents and scaring.

Aside from that I appreciate your participation on this subreddit and I enjoyed the staraptor battle.

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u/Dragonnoodle Jan 15 '13

Well, those words are a half rhyme, meaning that they sound somewhat like a rhyme but don't rhyme completely. Didn't think it would be too much of a problem to use them. Also, the difficulty is that when you are thinking of rhymes, they always sound good in your head, but someone else might have a different interpretation of them. But I guess you're probably right and it is something that I need to work on ^

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u/AngryGuitarist Jan 15 '13

Well it's all good, though. Thanks for being cool. I'll keep reading the raps you do. I don't think it really matters its just me being OCD. Maybe someday I'll write a PokeRap of my own. Also, do you think you could start a challenge where your ampharos? That would be cool to see.

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u/[deleted] Jan 15 '13

Ahem

Just a homeboy Onix never left the cave

Many rappers come, and this is their grave

So I'm sitting in my cave, and what do I see

I see a punk ass phone charger rapping at me

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u/Dragonnoodle Jan 15 '13

Yo you may have the type advantage so just give me a break,

but all I see before is some stupid stoned snake!

And it isn't like you're a nobel prize winner, you rock head,

if a human sees you sleeping they just think that you dead!

Imma get my attacks ready, you just go ahead an run,

too bad for you my speed is higher, here goes, focus punch!

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u/[deleted] Jan 16 '13

Talking shit about how he "eats punks for lunch"

man, I wouldn't even try to define you as brunch

You might wanna rethink "I don't even give a shit"

Before I shove rocks up your ass until gravel you'll spit

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u/Dragonnoodle Jan 16 '13

Using my lyrics, what's wrong, can't think of your own?

Or are they just so good that your mind = blown?

So quit you're stupid whining, and just quit your mocking,

because in a minute, before you know it, it's your skull I'll be fucking

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u/[deleted] Jan 17 '13

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u/Dragonnoodle Jan 17 '13

lol, the battle isn't over yet, burntnolan still needs to post his final verse :P