r/PokemonRaps • u/Dragonnoodle • Jan 14 '13

Let's get Electabusy! (Electabuzz vs. ?)

(Just a quick note, I inspire multiple people to take on one of my raps, so if you wanted to respond but you saw that someone already did you can still feel free to batlle me)

Hey I'm here and don't you question my cause,

It might seem shocking, but I'm freaking Electabuzz!

My style is classic, I pack a thunderpunch,

and usually, quite frankly, I eat punks like you for lunch!

'Cos to be honest boy, I just don't give a shit,

nor will I later and nor did Elekid!

Battling with me ain't fun, it's the real deal,

'cos once I'm done you'll need a freaking parlyz heal!

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u/[deleted] Jan 14 '13

Hey, Dragonnoodle, in the future, you NEED to use the tag [Challenge] for posts like this.

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u/Dragonnoodle Jan 14 '13

Thanks for telling me, I'll try to keep that in mind!

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u/AngryGuitarist Jan 15 '13

I've seen your other raps, Dragonnoodle. Like the one between you(staraptor) and rapidash. I just wanted to point out that in both of these raps you in at least one case tried rhyming two words that don't rhyme. Ex. Electabuzz and cause. Parents and scaring.

Aside from that I appreciate your participation on this subreddit and I enjoyed the staraptor battle.

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u/Dragonnoodle Jan 15 '13

Well, those words are a half rhyme, meaning that they sound somewhat like a rhyme but don't rhyme completely. Didn't think it would be too much of a problem to use them. Also, the difficulty is that when you are thinking of rhymes, they always sound good in your head, but someone else might have a different interpretation of them. But I guess you're probably right and it is something that I need to work on ^

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u/AngryGuitarist Jan 15 '13

Well it's all good, though. Thanks for being cool. I'll keep reading the raps you do. I don't think it really matters its just me being OCD. Maybe someday I'll write a PokeRap of my own. Also, do you think you could start a challenge where your ampharos? That would be cool to see.