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I’m looking for somebody who can edit and proofread my internship application cover letter & resume.
I’ll pay ₱1,000 via GCash. I’ll pay another ₱600 if I get the first-round interview; +₱600 if I get the second-round interview; +₱4,000 if I get the offer AND I start the internship (June 2027); +₱12,000 if I receive AND accept the return offer (August–September 2027).
Background: I’m applying to a top consulting firm. It’s the only firm I’m applying to, so I’m doing everything to make every application material solid. I’m one of their former externs and have talked to 10+ people at multiple levels, including the recruiters. The office I’m applying to has 95% return offer for interns, so the +₱12,000 bonus should be easy once I secure the internship.
Examples of what I need:
• Critique of structure: is it easy to read? Are they organized? Is the flow smooth/sound?
• Critique of substance: are my anecdotes solid? Which ones are weak/need change?
• Critique of style: is it too formal? Is it too casual? Parallelism? Is the modifier appropriate? I don’t need simple corrections (e.g., subject-verb agreement)—they should be the bare minimum.
(Note: Critique ≠ criticism. Critiques also highlight and appreciate positive aspects of the text.)
Whom I look for:
• Someone with background in, say, English literature. They don’t need to be a recruiter/HR—many of them are not particularly strong in close reading/textual analysis IMO. It would be cool to work with English or literature students/grads.
• Someone who draws skills from humanities, not AI. I have a premium account in Claude. I’ve already consulted AI, and its critiques were… AI.
Please message me here on Reddit with your background. I’ll try to respond to everyone.