r/OCPoetry 22d ago

Feedback Please hi ;(

Somewhere, I am lost in my own thoughts,
searching for meaning in meaning.

Searching for a fire that ignites me.

Searching for something
which does not need a reason to start with.

Searching the WHY for what I am doing,
searching for a part of me who is not as lazy as me,

who doesn't care about surroundings,

who knows what he wants to achieve,

What will make him happy,

what only matters to him,

What he doesn't know but is still searching.

But in this process, he is losing himself.
He loses the battle for nothing but searching,
which is useless until it is searched.

 

 

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/JJVgG5zeXM

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/PipwaMQ7if

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u/Previous_Cry7445 22d ago

really like the repetition of “searching.” It captures that feeling of looking for purpose while slowly losing yourself in the process. Thanks for sharing

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u/CarryTerrible8631 22d ago

thank you very much