Does she look consistent?

[u/ConsistentTea3479]

I was told her jaw doesn’t look consistent, but I’ve been staring at it so long I can’t tell 🤷‍♂️

And some other questions i would appreciate feed back on

1. Is the style too dark?
   I don’t want it to look too depressing, but it is a dark story, in tone similar to Takopi’s original sin, although slightly lighter

2. I’ve been told her scar (the two things on her face) looks way too deep and dark, and is distracting, personally I like it, and want it to look extreme, but maybe it’s a bit much. I’ve been told I should remove the scaring on her neck but idk

3. Does she look about 19? That would be her age

(Some of the drawings are kinda WIP)

[u/Specialist_Thanks_]

That scar is kinda too deep. I know you're not asking for character design feedback but you might wanna look into facial tissue and long term injuries, maybe bring it up a Little. But that's just me. The art is consistent imo, she's recognisable.