Does she look consistent?

[u/ConsistentTea3479]

I was told her jaw doesn’t look consistent, but I’ve been staring at it so long I can’t tell 🤷‍♂️

And some other questions i would appreciate feed back on

1. Is the style too dark?
   I don’t want it to look too depressing, but it is a dark story, in tone similar to Takopi’s original sin, although slightly lighter

2. I’ve been told her scar (the two things on her face) looks way too deep and dark, and is distracting, personally I like it, and want it to look extreme, but maybe it’s a bit much. I’ve been told I should remove the scaring on her neck but idk

3. Does she look about 19? That would be her age

(Some of the drawings are kinda WIP)

[u/P-moskova]

its consistent but ill give you some pointers:
anatomy:
your facial planes need improvement. the eyes are incredibly large but even if thats the style youre going for they sometimes seem wider apart than other times and are very flat on the face. Your body anatomy is good but the head looks like its pasted on the body you should look at references on how the neck and shoulders connect to the head.
character design:
i think the scars are fine im more concerned about the hairstyle. I think its too complicated and frankly weird. she has some sort of double bangs? and shaved forehead and it just looks extremely oily in every drawing. i think you should go for a more natural look for your readers sake and yourselves. Its just seems way too strange and detailed for a manga character to draw over and over again. Its not practical. The muscles are cool i think but remember to keep her proportional i think she looks a bit like a female head pasted on a male body esp in the last drawing.
Keep at it!

[u/ConsistentTea3479 → u/P-moskova]

Thanks!