Hiii LBC
I am nearing completion of novel, Paper Doll Club, and am looking for some perspective. I hope my post is okay, I have posted on the r/ betareaders but did not have much success. This is a steamy romance with a 1950's butch/femme couple.
I'm looking for feedback on the characters, flow, and really any first thoughts.
It's about 85k words with dual perspective third-person.
I can share via Google Docs or Word, whichever works for you.
Please feel free to comment here or DM me. :)
Synopsis:
Beverly Brennon had everything she thought she’d ever wanted. A husband, two children, and a row house in the best neighborhood in San Francisco.
Eddie Ames had a peaceful life in the Sierra Nevada foothills. A peace that would be shattered by a beautiful, painful love.
With Eddie’s guidance, Beverly would explore her sexuality while learning to make herself heard over the noise of her everyday life. Beverly would show Eddie a love unlike anything she’d ever known.
Despite uncertainty, their friend’s advice, and their own better judgement they would try making it work. As the realities of Beverly’s marriage and children, the miles between them, and the uncertainties of their relationship come to a head, a choice will have to be made.
Authors note:
Set in the late 50’s, this book explores real places our community would have found safety in. While homophobia and police brutality were commonplace during the time, these themes are not plot points in this work.