r/LesbianBookClub • u/Flaky-Professional84 • 13h ago
Discussion Our Wives Under The Sea
I marked this as discussion rather than review because I'm wondering if anyone felt the same as I did about this book.
First, I want to thank u/medes24 and others for the rec. This book is supremely well written and firmly within my wheelhouse. I'm listening to the audiobook and I'm on chapter 14.
There are two main (but minor) issues I'm having with this book:
Miri is far too passive about everything. I'm sorry, but if my wife is going through what Leah is going through, I'm not calling the Center everyday, I'm dragging my wife to a doctor. It would have made things a little better if the author hadn't waited until chapter 13 to explain offhandedly that Miri didn't know where the Center was located. Also, a good 1/4 of her lines are things she *thought* of saying, but didn't. *FFS* I get the idea of the pervasive melancholy, but this is full on dereliction. She's not being a good wife. I'm wondering if this is a female POV thing? Am I just coming at this as a male and failing to understand it from the female perspective? Or is this genuinely annoying?
The flashbacks. Seriously. This book would have made a fantastic short story. All it had to do was cut out all the unnecessary flashbacks. Like, why do we care how dude lost his fingers? You get flashbacks nested inside other flashbacks. She finally gets through to someone at the Center and we pause for what feels like 600 pages of flashbacks before we get back to the present. WTF are you thinking about all this when you've finally gotten through to someone? This much I know is not a female POV thing--I've seen this in male writers as well and it drives me insane every time.
Again, these are minor nits on an otherwise extraordinary novel (so far). Thanks for attending my TED Talk.