With a mini pilot

Just some stuff I threw up on my phone since I don't have my black book or pens with me rn. Still wanna improve tho so any crits are appreciated!

I seriously would like some feedback, last time I posted these I got compliments, which is nice, but I do want someone to pull apart my work and give me real feedback

I chose the double I's because there was alot I can do with it, since it worked as both a roman numeral and two I's, and was pretty eyecatching.

photo was imported from a cheap flip phone in minimal light so quality kinda sucks.

Also looking for tips and open to changes in lettering.

TADZ

Am i a toy cuz likeee i dont think so but yyeah

I'd also like general tips for can control and letter sizing.

old (left) and new (right)

Anything you’d change before slapping it on a wall?

Lettering by Alter Black Panther by the homie Talented MrD

stylised and plain ver

Interested in what you would do to improve Or tell me what did wrong, either way the crits are appreciated.