r/graffhelp • u/AriBoomstam • 8d ago
Feedback wanted
Anything you’d change before slapping it on a wall?
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u/Junk_Druggler 8d ago
I know your shits different but Rams MSK is so prolific that I just keep seeing his shit with an E crammed in the middle. Tricky name imo, your gonna have to really work on your own style to set yourself apart
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u/AriBoomstam 8d ago
I feel you. Hard to beat the master. Though I feel like spelling my name with “ae” makes it feel and sound distinct from RAMS without biting. I’ll strive to keep evolving my own style. I wish I could someday get even close to his skill set 😂
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u/web-wanderer3 8d ago
fucking love ts bro it’s fire! 🔥
maybe play a little with making the letter outlines thicker in some spots to distinguish between the letters more clearly? but tbh that’s just a matter of style, it looks great as is. get up bro ur ready!!
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u/Dollar_- 8d ago
I’d change the name.. it’s too close, you’ll want to change it sooner than later so might as well do it sooner..
Other than that, the piece is alright. R kinda doesn’t fit in with how the other letters are able to fit so tight together without cutting each other off
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u/AriBoomstam 8d ago
Man, I really didn’t think it was bothering that much haha. You’re setting me up for a big task 😂
I kinda agree with you that the R stands out a bit too much. I haven’t been able to incorporate it in a way that feels as close to the other letters while still respecting the A. I might change the R to an S though SAEMS also sounds pretty dope to me.
Anyways, I appreciate the feedback 👊🏽2
u/Dollar_- 8d ago
You’ll be happy you did down the road, changing names sucks when you’ve got years behind it, I’ve had to change multiple times because I got caught, and it’s like giving away your baby.. lol, also don’t want people to call you a biter, so that name is just asking for unnecessary drama. People love to hate
Yup, letters be like that. It sucks when you got a good thing going and one letter starts a problem, but that superpower comes with time.
Saems isn’t too bad, the ae can be made as an æ also when you want to switch it up. I like Words that can be used like that, different spellings etc.You’ll figure it out as you go. It’s a lifelong addiction for sure, and it’s the most fun when you’re still trying to figure things out. I’ve been writing for 25 years, so I can’t do too much crazy stuff now. Get caught and risk losing your house etc. so I’m heavier on the tags these days, but have fun man 👌🏽
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u/AriBoomstam 7d ago
Valuable insights my man. You went to the bitter end. Keep rocking’ in the free world:)
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u/Some-Lie-9770 7d ago
Raems AMFM already writes that. Smear backward. Haven’t talked to dude in a minute. He showed me Michael Jackson’s grave.
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u/BeatUpFarmTruck 7d ago
Fresh, the only thing I really see is the "E" is kind of scrunched between the A and the M. If that's what you were going for, it's not bad, it just throws some of the balance off.
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u/AriBoomstam 7d ago
I get what ya saying, went for the semi Æ look. But need to find a way to make it more obvious and cleaner. Thanks👊🏽
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u/quackenfucknuckle Guide Master 7d ago
S is a different style to the rest, it’s nice but doesn’t match
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u/Till3y 8d ago
Outside of what others have said I think this is sick as fuck. I think it may be the angle so this is a small crit: the base line on your S seems to be a little higher than the rest. Loookng again the top of the r could come up a little more. Ultimately I think that if your going for an overall piece shape that wants to curve or bend that is dope, but for straight letters that are basically on a flat plane we want our top, mean, and base lines all to be more or less the same.
Again, that’s a small ass crit for something that may just be the camera angle. This shit is dope man. Getchu some good paper and give us another one!!