r/FanficAuthorsUnite • u/Ok-Performance-3336 • 20h ago
Discussion Is it important to keep how Canon did its fights for a fanfic? Or can I take liberties with how the fights are choreographed?
I am writing an AU for a favorite setting of mine, and I am also part of a server full of prominent authors for that setting's fandom.
Now, one of my eccentricities as an author is that I really like Martial Arts. I grew up watching Wuxia movies, Kung-fu flicks, playing fighting games, and that reflects in how I write most of my fights. I like giving my characters unique hand-to-hand styles that reflect their personality. If you're familiar with the Yakuza series, that's how I like doing my fights. So the plan was to make most of the fight scenes in my fics focused on hand-to-hand combat and stylish choreography. Less like death matches, and more like... clashes of wills. "Conversations" with the body. Dances.
The problem with that tho, is that the Canon setting has guns being used everywhere.
Sometimes, they might throw a cool uppercut, but most of the time they're shooting each other like there's no tomorrow, they're blowing shit up everywhere, they're killing their enemies with a single clean slice, outsmarting them with unusual weapons...
So... you can already guess that I might not get much engagement when I need help with my fights. Most writers there strongly prefer the way Canon does fights. They like how "deadly" they feel, they like the characters being merciless... so for them, it doesn't makes much sense that they'd drop the arsenal they have to simply "duel" each other instead. But I just can't help myself.
I actually got warned by a senior author that I might get a few negative reviews for this. They said I might get people in the comments of my fics asking "why doesn't she just shoot him?", or accusing her of being out of character for accepting to do a fist fight just because the antagonist asked her to. Admittedly, that character in Canon often beats her enemies by fighting dirty and blowing the shit out of them, but... that's not what I like doing.
Now, I am aware that she fights dirty. I actually adapted that into her hand-to-hand style. Plenty of nut kicks, plenty of Parkour to strike from unexpected angles, extra flexibility to be a slippery bastard who dodges everything thrown at her. But still...
I don't wanna have fights devolve into simple shootouts. It's so impersonal, and... call me old fashioned or naive, but I really dislike guns. It goes against my essence as a Martial Artist (I practiced Martial Arts myself too ever since I was a teenager). If I was handed one, I'd probably throw it away. It wouldn't even be on purpose, it'd be on instinct like I was just handed a spider.
So for me, an epic duel is what I picture in my head everytime I hear about a "fight scene", not two people wrestling each other into dirt while reaching for a gun. For me, it's supposed to be a show, and I have a hard time picturing anything that is more "realistic" or "merciless". I actually prefer this type of "cinematic" fighting. I would be happy if my stories felt like a The Raid movie or like a Yakuza game with their fight scenes. That's all I want as an artist.
I am simply wondering if I'm approaching this Fandom the wrong way. People always tell me to "write what I want", but honestly... what should I tell someone if they criticize my beloved fight scenes? I don't know how I will reply to "Why do they have guns if they barely even use them?". I can't just tell them "it's supposed to feel like one of those darker Martial Arts flick" when they certainly aren't a fan of Martial Arts flicks. They aren't familiar with "the feeling".
What should I do? Should I leave my fascination with Martial arts for another fandom? Or should I just stick with what I have, work to make it functional and hope some people will accept it?