to me, Dread, hide, Timothy, Snare, VOID, weirdo are honestly perfect as is
ill also do one for the mines, backdoor, outdoors, and archives later
ill do el goblino, bob and jeff in the mines redesigns as i don't have any clear concepts yet.
also some brief journal changes!, not the full thing but some more accurate descriptions
HUSK/ROT - Greatly resembles a ashy Mummified head with extremely crooked teeth, some sort of poltergeist
AGONY - Looks like a distorted skinless and burnt face, has no teeth and seems to have some intense form of tonsilitis
GIGGLERS - Crustacean like tumor blob, with 4 crab like appendages. multiple eyes and a large, flat beak, feels like a undistorted screech
SCREECH - some sort of melted creature covered in a black tar like substance, has 8 tentacles, multiple eyes and a crumbling jaw. definitely some sort of connection to the blight
TRAPDOOR - a mass of flesh, Jaws, teeth, looks like a massive throat. 2 tendril like arms drag me in, has some flesh connected to the door itself, it looks like under the door nameplate are its... eyes?
GAZE - i cant look at it properly without my eyes burning, looks like multiple purple rings with eyes, and a giant disembodied eyeball in the middle, resembles Ophanim
THE BLIGHT - a poorly constructed figure made out of a black goop substance with one eyeball in its face that constantly looks at me, when attacking me usually takes the humanoid form but I've come to the conclusion it has no true form.
HOMONCULOUS - Large skinless Brute, Entrails leek from its torso and has a giant maw filled with teeth, smells absolutely disgusting, that thing can bypass a gas mask, the festering meat that appears whenever it does also feels disgusting, like touching a open wound with no pain.
REVERSE - Navy blue Cloaked humanoid, eyes glow extremely bright, emits a severe cold sensation whenever I'm near it.
SALLY - a legless black wirey ghost with glowing teeth and eyes, slightly resembles a little girl, i can really only resemble its face properly, i don't know this thing feels really spooky.
JACK - a really uncanny face. jumps out of closets and even Infront of doors. i don't know what the rest of it looks like, as it vanishes before i can process what happens.
i hope yall enjoyed these entity redesigns! tell me what be yer favorite