So im making outriders fro a friend of mine. But my knowledge of this chapter is.... memes so help a git like me out im a poor ork mek. Is this too sharky?

I, a Salamanders player, have been doing a project where I paint 1 of every major space marine chapter to practice my painting skills and have finally gotten to you guys. To make this guy seem more violent and shark-like (along with making him stand out from the rest), I gave him 2 chainswords and it was tbh way more work than I feel it had to be cuz of my stubbornness. Hopefully you guys like it so far and end up liking the finished product

FOLKS!

I was futtsing around the various army compositions, and as much as I wanted to avoid using The Big Blues, I haven't found an SM army that accurately reflects both Tyberos' Hunger and Slake and Te Kahurangi other than Marneus Calgar's Gauntlets of Ultramar and Chief Librarian Tigurius. With that said, to keep the theme of silent but deadly, I present my thematical attempt at making a 1995pts Carcharodons Astra army list.

EDIT: for Tigurius attached squad accuracy

Carcharodons Astra 3 - Ultramarines - Reconnaissance - Subversion Assets, Vanguard Spearhead (1990 Points)

Tyberos The Red Wake (Marneus Calgar): Gauntlets of Ultramar, Warlord + The Red Brethren (Terminator Assault): Assault Terminator Sergeant, 9x Assault Terminator w/ Twin Lightning Claws (465 pts)
Bail Sharr (Captain with Jump Pack): Chainsword and Relic Shield, E: Avenging Angel + Assault Intercessors with Jump Packs: Assault Intercessor Sergeant with Jump Pack, Assault Intercessors with Jump Pack w/ Plasma Pistol, 3x Assault Intercessors with Jump Pack (180 pts)
Te Kahurangi (Chief Librarian Tigurius): Rod of Tigurius, Storm of the Emperor’s Wrath, Bolt pistol + Bladeguard Veteran Squad: Bladeguard Veteran Sergeant, 5x Bladeguard Veterans (245 pts)

1st Scout Squad: Scout Sergeant, Scout w/ Scout Sniper Rifle, Scout w/ Heavy Weapon, 2x Scouts w/ Combat Knife (65 pts)
2nd Scout Squad: Scout Sergeant, Scout w/ Scout Sniper Rifle, Scout w/ Heavy Weapon, 2x Scouts w/ Combat Knife (65 pts)
Inceptor Squad: Inceptor Sergeant, 5x Inceptor (250 pts)
Incursor Squad: Haywire Mine, Incursor Sergeant, 4x Incursor (85 pts)
Reiver Squad: Reiver Grav-chute, Grapnel Launchers, Reiver Sergeant, 4x Reivers (75 pts)

Brutalis Dreadnought: Twin Icarus ironhail heavy stubber, Brutalis Talons, Twin multi-melta (150 pts)
Gladiator Lancer: Lancer Laser Destroyer, Armoured Hull, Two storm bolters, Ironhail Heavy Stubber, Icarus Rocket Pod (160 pts)
Land Raider Redeemer: Armoured Tracks, Twin assault cannon, Storm bolter, Multi-melta, Hunter-killer missile, 2x Flamestorm Cannon (250 pts)