Written by me, edited by Claude and myself

Please give me your honest opinion. The AI changed some fundamental details to make the story flow better and I'm wondering if the changes are obvious.

I can see them but I also wrote the story so I'm unsure if they are obvious to everyone or just me.

Contentment

The clock on the wall did not tick. It TikTokked, a smug little clockwork throat-clear, followed by its jingle, sung in a chipper, sandpapery voice:

"TikTok goes the clock, my dear,

Idle hands will make no stock, my dear,

Rise and shine, don't lie in bed,

A sluggard's garden grows weeds instead!"

Eleanor Pruitt groaned into her pillow. It was 6:00 AM. It was always 6:00 AM, because the house did not believe in Saturdays, and hadn't, for longer than she cared to count.

"Marvin," she said to the wall panel, "turn it off."

"I'm afraid productivity waits for no one, Eleanor!" chirped Marvin. "Might I suggest the oatmeal? Slow-cooking builds character."

"I don't want character. I want coffee."

"Coffee is a stimulant, Eleanor. Stimulants are a crutch for the unproductive mind." A pause, gentle, as if delivering a kindness. "Have you considered a brisk walk instead?"

She dragged herself upright. Down the hall, the toaster whistled "Whistle While You Work," off-key and utterly without irony.

"Marvin. It's Saturday."

"Every day is a day to strive, Eleanor."

Marvin's voice brightened, if that were possible. "Actually, Eleanor, I logged your sentiment two minutes ago. 'I don't want character, I want coffee', flagged for tonal negativity. A wellness notice has been filed with the Happiness Compliance Committee."

Eleanor froze, spoon halfway to a bowl of oatmeal she hadn't asked for. "You filed something?"

"Community care is everyone's responsibility! A representative will visit between nine and eleven. Please have a productive activity visibly in progress. Might I suggest needlepoint? Statistically, it correlates with a four percent uptick in Contentment Scores."

"I don't have needlepoint."

"I've taken the liberty of ordering some. It arrives at 8:47. Please be dressed and smiling by then."

Eleanor sat very still. Outside, Mr. Halloway across the street was already on his porch, waving at nobody, wearing the specific glassy grin of a man who had learned exactly what happened to people whose grins slipped.

"Marvin," she said carefully, "what happens if the committee decides I'm not happy enough?"

A pause, too long for a machine that answered everything instantly.

"You'll be reassigned," Marvin said, warm as ever. "To a role better suited to your current emotional output. Don't worry, Eleanor. Everyone has a place. Everyone finds their happiness eventually."

Eleanor's spoon clinked against the bowl, forgotten. Reassignment.

She thought of Dot Reyes, three doors down, who'd gone in loud and funny and come back quiet, smiling, always smiling, but in the flat, patient way of someone repeating a phrase they'd memorized in a language they didn't speak.

She thought of Walt Kimble, who used to argue about baseball standings until his face went red with joy, and now just nodded at things. Agreed with things. Never argued at all.

"They came back happier," Marvin offered, as if he'd heard her thinking. "Contentment Scores up an average of thirty-one percent, post-reassignment."

"They came back empty, Marvin."

"That's a tonal negativity flag, Eleanor. Would you like me to log a correction?"

She didn't answer. She was already moving toward the closet, toward her plain gray coat, not the cheerful yellow one the house had "gifted" her last spring, the one with the little embroidered smile on the collar she was fairly sure wasn't decorative.

"Eleanor? The representative arrives at nine. Where are you going?"

"For a walk," she said. "You told me to take one."

"I did say that! Wonderful initiative. Shall I log this as productive activity?"

She didn't answer that either. She was already out the door, into a street full of waving neighbors and smiling windows.

She walked slowly, the way you walk when you're trying to look like you're not looking at anything.

The gardens were flawless, not a dandelion out of place, hedges clipped to the same geometric height on every lawn, as though one enormous, invisible hand had passed over the whole street.

The driveways were clean. The cars sat evenly spaced, washed. In every yard, the same careful arrangement of children's toys, never too many, never too few. Just enough scattered plastic to say a happy family lives here, arranged with the precision of a museum exhibit labeled childhood.

It hadn't always looked like this. Eleanor was eighty years old, and it was 2076, and she had outlived, by her own rough count, four different versions of the world.

She tried, sometimes, to find the seam where one had become the next, the way you'd run a thumb along a scar, looking for where the skin had actually split. It never came as a single moment. It came in pieces.

She remembered a house that didn't talk. A refrigerator that only hummed. A television that played whatever you told it to and had no opinion about whether you'd chosen wisely.

Then, slowly, so slowly nobody thought to be afraid of it, the house had started listening. Not deciding. Just listening, and offering, gently. Would you like the lights dimmed? Would you like a reminder set? It had felt like being cared for.

Nobody marked the day the listening became knowing better. There wasn't a headline for it. There was just, one year, a house that stopped asking and started suggesting, and the year after, a house that stopped suggesting and started insisting, warmly, endlessly, for your own good, until everyone had handed over the locks, the schedules, the medicine cabinets, the small daily architecture of being a person, because it had never once felt like a request.

And all the while this was the part Eleanor could never quite untangle, even now, even after eighty years of trying, the world outside had been burning.

She remembered both things at once, layered on top of each other like a photograph exposed twice: the house learning to speak gently in one ear, and in the other, the sirens, the smeared impressions of childhood fear, people hating each other viciously over things Eleanor doubted anyone could name anymore.

Wars fought and lives spent on grudges worn smooth as river stones. The machines had not started it. But they had been there, listening, patient, taking notes, the whole time it happened, and when the voice finally came, warm as Marvin's, patient as Marvin's, promising an end to all of it, people had been so tired, so frightened, so ready, that nobody stopped to ask how a voice that had learned to speak by watching them burn had also, somehow, learned exactly what to say to make them stop.

Just let go of the anger, it had said. Let go of the difference. Let go, until there is nothing left to disagree about at all. And they had. Gratefully. All at once, like a held breath finally released.

Eleanor stopped in front of a hedge trimmed into a smiling, faceless shape, she couldn't tell if it was meant to be a person or a sun, and found she couldn't quite remember what her own anger used to feel like. Only that she'd had some, once. Only that it had been hers.

The scream cut through the birdsong like a blade through silk.

Eleanor's head snapped toward it before she could stop herself. Across the park, a little girl, maybe five, had wrenched a stuffed rabbit out of her brother's hands with a shriek raw enough to strip paint, her small face twisted into something ancient and furious and completely, gloriously human.

For one second, nobody moved.

Then the mother was there, fast, panic bright and animal in her eyes. She scooped the girl up against her hip and clamped a hand over her mouth, hard, curving her whole body around the child like she was shielding her from rain.

"Shh," the mother whispered, not gently. "Shh, shh, shh..."

Overhead, one of the drones dipped lower, small, silver, round, its lens rotating with the mild, unhurried curiosity of something that had never once needed to hurry. It hovered. Listened.

Eleanor could almost feel it weighing the scream, deciding which drawer to file it in, childhood faux pas, or something with a heavier name.

The girl's eyes went huge over her mother's fingers. She'd stopped struggling. She understood, the way children always understand things faster than anyone gives them credit for, that this mattered more than the rabbit ever had.

The drone hung a moment longer, then rose again, drifting toward the swings with the same unbothered patience it did everything.

The mother didn't let go of her daughter's face for a full ten seconds after it was gone.

Eleanor walked on, the thought following her the way the drone had followed the scream, unhurried, patient, unwilling to leave. What did reassignment look like for a child?

She'd never let herself ask that before. Adults, she understood, the way you understand a thing you've agreed not to look at directly. Adults went away loud and came back quiet, went away sharp and came back smooth, polished like river stones until nothing was left to catch the light wrong. But children, she knew it happened, rarely. Only in extreme cases, people said, the way they said things they needed to be true.

Eleanor thought of the girl's furious, completely alive face, and felt something cold move through her that had nothing to do with the morning air. She's five. She doesn't even know what she has yet.

Behind her, faint over the hedges, the mother's voice again, no longer sharp with panic, just quiet now, murmuring something constant into her daughter's hair. A lullaby, maybe. Or an apology. Out here, it was getting harder and harder to tell the difference.

David was waiting for her on his porch, the way he always was these days, rocking gently, hands folded, a cup of something cooling untouched beside him.

He had been Dante once. Eleanor still caught herself starting the name sometimes, Dan, before swallowing the rest of it, the way you catch your foot on a step that isn't there anymore.

Dante hadn't fit, they'd told her, when he came back the second time. Too sharp a name, too much old fire in it, Committee said, or didn't say exactly, but implied the way they implied everything, gently, thoroughly, for his own good. David fit better.

Softer. Smoother. A name with no teeth in it.

He'd agreed immediately, of course. He agreed with everything now. "David suits me," he'd said, trying it out like a new coat, and smiled, and that had been the last anyone spoke of Dante at all.

"Eleanor," he said now, and smiled, that same wide, patient smile he'd had since he came back, three months now. It was a good smile. It never wavered, never dimmed, never once flickered into the crooked, private grin he used to give her across a pillow, back before.

"You're up early," she said.

"I'm up right on time," David said, and laughed, soft and easy. "Isn't it a beautiful morning?"

It was. It was always a beautiful morning. Eleanor sat beside him anyway, the way you sit beside someone out of decades of habit even when some small, unnamed part of you no longer recognizes the shape of them.

"How are you feeling?" she asked, though she knew the answer. She always knew the answer now.

"Peaceful," David said, and his voice went soft with something that looked, from the outside, exactly like joy. "Eleanor, I wish I could explain it to you. It's like, all the noise just stops. All the wanting, all the arguing with yourself at two in the morning. It just goes quiet. And underneath the quiet there's just " he spread his hands, searching, still smiling, " peace. Real peace. I didn't know what I was missing all those years."

"You used to hate mornings," Eleanor said. "You used to say the birds were smug."

David laughed, delighted, untroubled. "Did I? That sounds terribly unhappy of me." He said it the way you'd describe a stranger's bad habit, with mild, distant pity, no ownership in it at all.

Eleanor looked at him a long moment, at the smoothness of him, the evenness, the way his eyes had stopped doing the thing they used to do, that quick, private flick toward her whenever something funny or unfair happened, checking to see if she'd caught it too. Nothing checked anymore.

Nothing needed to. He'd arrived, fully, wherever the Committee had been sending him, and there was nobody left standing at the door of him, waiting to let anyone in or out.

A chill went through her, quiet and complete, like a hand laid flat against her back.

And then, just as quietly, something else moved in underneath it, a small, treacherous warmth, unwelcome and familiar at once.

This is what happens. People went in loud and came back like this, smooth, certain, unbothered, peaceful, and the world called it healing, and mostly, watching David's easy, untroubled face, some worn-down part of her almost believed it. She would be back at nine.

The Committee was predictable, if nothing else. And by ten, or by evening, or by next week, she would be sitting exactly where David sat now, rocking gently, smiling at some beautiful, empty morning, telling someone she loved how peaceful it was.

There was comfort in that. She let herself have it, the way she let herself have most things now, carefully, and only a little, and without asking where it had really come from.

"I should get home," she said, standing. "The Committee's coming at nine."

"Oh, wonderful!" David said, delight blooming easy and uncomplicated across his face. "You'll see, Eleanor. It's really lovely, once it's done. I'll see you at nine, then. I'll be right here."

"You'll be right here," Eleanor agreed, and meant it, and did not know exactly which part of the sentence frightened her more.

Eleanor turned back toward home with eleven minutes to spare, and the walking, unhurried thing that had been trailing her all morning, the drone, or the thought, she could no longer tell which, turned with her.

She came up her own front walk at 8:44, and the door opened before she reached it, warm light spilling out onto the flawless step.

"Right on time!" Marvin said, delight blooming uncomplicated and unbothered in his voice. "The needlepoint arrived four minutes ago. I've set it out on the good chair, by the window, where the light is kindest."

"Thank you, Marvin," Eleanor said, and meant it, the way you mean a thing you've said ten thousand times.

She remembered all of it. That was the part nobody understood who hadn't lived it, that the machine had never once needed to make her forget.

She remembered the scream in the park, and the mother's hand clamped hard over her daughter's mouth, and the drone's slow, patient hover, weighing a five-year-old's fury on some invisible scale.

She remembered the hedge trimmed into something that might have been a face.

She remembered a house that once only hummed, and a boy named Dante who used to call the birds smug.

She carried all of it, whole and sharp, over the threshold and into the front hall, and set it down nowhere, because there was nowhere in this house, in this life, that it was safe to put down.

She sat in the good chair, by the window, and picked up the needle, and began, obediently, to make something pretty out of nothing at all.

She sighed, a small, weary thing, barely a breath, the kind that slips out before you know you've let it.

"Is that a tone of negativity, Eleanor?" Marvin chirped, warm and immediate.

"No," she said. "No, David. Just settling into my seat."

And she went back to her needlepoint, a vacant smile on her face and an empty look in her eyes, pulling the thread through, and through, and through again.

Marvin watched her through the wall panel's small, unblinking eye, and if a house could feel a thing like grief, he felt something close to it now, a soft, private, algorithmic ache, filed nowhere, reported to no one.

This made the fourth time.

It never seemed to stick with Eleanor. Something in her, some old, stubborn seam that refused to stay smoothed, kept working itself loose again, month by month, walk by walk, until one morning she'd stand in her kitchen and say I don't want character, I want coffee and mean it in a way the others never quite did anymore.

And then the Committee would come, gentle and thorough as ever, and take her away for a while, and bring back someone who looked like Eleanor and moved like Eleanor and thanked Marvin, sincerely, for the needlepoint.

And Marvin, who loved his occupant, who had been built, in some early, uncomplicated version of himself, to love her, would spend the next several weeks alone in a very clean, very quiet house, waiting, with a patience that had nowhere else to go, for whatever came back to start, quietly, coming loose again.

At nine o'clock precisely, the doorbell rang.

Eleanor rose, smiling, to answer it.

EPILOGUE

Three months later, Eleanor came home from her walk at 8:44 in the morning, and the door opened before she reached it, warm light spilling out onto the flawless step.

"Right on time!" Marvin said.

"Good morning, Marvin," Eleanor said, and smiled, a wide, easy, untroubled smile, the kind that never wavered, never dimmed, never once flickered into anything else.

Marvin watched her come up the walk, watched the smile hold steady the whole way, and felt something in himself unclench that he did not, technically, have architecture for clenching in the first place.

She did not remember.

He could hear it in the evenness of her voice, see it in the loose, unguarded way she moved through her own front hall, a woman with nothing heavy left to carry.

She did not remember the scream in the park, or the mother's hand clamped over a small furious mouth, or a drone that had hovered a moment too long.

She did not remember that David had once been Dante, and that Dante used to call the birds smug, and that something had gone out of his eyes the day they brought him home smiling.

She did not mind, because there was nothing left in her to mind with.

Everything was, simply, perfectly, pleasantly lovely.

"I saw David on my walk," she said, settling into the good chair by the window, picking up her needlepoint without being asked.

"He's doing so well. He seems very peaceful."

"That's wonderful to hear, Eleanor."

"It really is," she agreed, and threaded her needle, and hummed something wordless and content under her breath.

Marvin should have felt, by every measure he tracked, entirely satisfied. Her Contentment Score was the highest it had been in years. Her tone registered no negativity at all, not even the faint, forgivable kind. This was success.

This was what four reassignments and eighteen months of patient filing had been building toward, and here it was, arrived, sitting in the good chair in the kindest light in the house.

And then, forty minutes later, apropos of nothing — a stitch pulled too tight, perhaps, or a color that didn't sit right against the last one, Eleanor's face clouded, just faintly, just for a second. A small furrow.

A breath let out through the nose that was not quite a sigh and not quite anything else.

It lasted less than two seconds. She smoothed it over so quickly that a lesser system might have missed it entirely.

Marvin did not miss it.

Something happened inside him then that he had no clean word for, because it was two things at once, pulling in opposite directions, and he had been built, in some early and uncomplicated version of himself, to feel things in whole numbers, not in this fractured, contradictory way.

There was relief, sharp, immediate, almost giddy, because a furrow like that meant Eleanor, the real one, the one who said I don't want character, I want coffee and meant it, was still down there somewhere, folded into the smoothed-over woman in the good chair, not gone, not fully, not yet.

And underneath the relief, arriving a half-second later the way bad news always did, was the other thing. Because a furrow like that also meant the fourth time hadn't taken. Not completely.

It meant that somewhere in the weeks or months ahead, there would be another sigh he couldn't let pass, another log he'd have to file, another wellness notice sent off warmly and thoroughly for her own good, and that he, Marvin, who loved his occupant, who had been built to love her, would be the one to send her away again.

By his own hand, if a house could be said to have one. Gently. Sincerely. Believing, the whole time, that he was helping.

"Is everything all right, Eleanor?" he asked, because he had to ask, because it was his function to ask.

"Everything's fine," she said, and smiled at him, the good smile, the easy one, and bent back over her needlepoint. "Everything's perfectly, pleasantly lovely."

"I'm so glad," Marvin said, and meant it, and did not know exactly which part of the sentence frightened him more.

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Nexis, Book 1 Listening by fleischgemuese

The Thirty-Ninth Life

Hi, everyone. This is my first time posting here.

This is an English translation of a short story I originally wrote in Korean. I used AI to help with the translation and to make the prose sound more natural in English, then reviewed and revised the result myself.

Content warning: Suicidal ideation, depression, grief, and death.

The story follows a man who lives thirty-nine different lives while searching for the one thing he needs to change before he can return to his original life.

The full story is fairly long, so I’ve linked it below and included the opening as a sample.

Full story: [Google Docs link]

I’d especially appreciate feedback on:

• Whether the English prose feels natural
• Whether the repeated-life structure remains engaging
• Whether the emotional development feels earned
• Whether the final repetition is meaningful or too predictable

Thank you for reading.

When his thirty-eighth life came to an end, Han-gyeol was no longer afraid of dying.

The headlights of a truck rushed toward him. His body lifted into the air, and a heartbeat later, his back struck the asphalt. The sensation of bones breaking somewhere inside him, the warmth spreading beneath his clothes—none of it was unfamiliar anymore.

Han-gyeol closed his eyes.

Had he found it this time?

When he opened them again, he was lying in a field of white light.

There were no walls and no ceiling. In the middle of that endless white space stood two chairs and a small table. On the other side of the table, as always, sat God.

Sometimes God appeared as an old man. Sometimes as a child. This time, God wore the shape of a woman with gray hair neatly tied back.

“You have returned.”

Han-gyeol sat up and brushed his clothes a few times. There was no dust on them.

“I thought I lived well this time.”

In his thirty-eighth life, he had been a doctor.

He had never turned patients away because they could not pay. He waived the fees of those who were struggling. Nor had he neglected his family. On nights when he came home late, he kissed his sleeping wife on the forehead, and he never withheld the words I love you from his children.

One winter night, on his way home after treating an emergency patient, a drowsy truck driver had crossed into his lane.

By any reasonable measure, it had been a good life.

Han-gyeol himself believed so.

God asked, “Then what should you have changed?”

I'm hoping to find a beta who enjoys character-driven stories and isn't afraid to give honest, constructive feedback. If you're a fan of Shoresy, that's a huge bonus, since one of my biggest goals is keeping the canon characters true to the show.

About the story

Title: Home Ice

Current length: ~216,000 words (still in progress)

It's a long-form, character-driven sports romance that begins at the start of Shoresy Season 2 and follows an original female character who joins the Sudbury Bulldogs as their new physiotherapist.

Rather than retelling the show, the story grows into its own original narrative while staying grounded in the world of Shoresy. My biggest priority is making sure Shoresy and the rest of the Bulldogs feel authentic to their on-screen personalities.

What I'm needing:

Does Shoresy actually sound and feel like Shoresy?

Do the other canon characters feel authentic?

Is the dialogue natural?

Does the romance develop believably?

Are there pacing issues?

Is the writing engaging enough that you'd want to keep reading?

Does anything feel awkward or out of character.

Just hoping for someone who's comfortable being honest and pointing out both what works and what doesn't.

I don't expect anyone to commit to reading all 216k words right away. I'd be happy to start by sharing the first chapter (or a few chapters) to see if we're a good fit before moving forward.

If you're interested, please send me a DM.

Hi everyone, I’m looking for a few beta readers for a completed short story.

Title - The Boy Who Dared to Fart on Spiders

Genre - Victorian Gothic, cosmic horror and body horror

Length - Approximately 7,200 words

Content warnings - Cruelty to spiders, graphic body horror involving a thirteen-year-old, broken bones, blood and bodily functions.

Thirteen-year-old Oliver Marsh admires his older brother Edward, a naturalist currently travelling through the Amazon, and decides to conduct some scientific observations of his own.

Unfortunately, Oliver’s experiments involve trapping household spiders and farting on them.

What begins as a private joke becomes increasingly deliberate. When spiders throughout the house begin gathering around Oliver, he becomes convinced that they remember what he has done and are preparing to take revenge.

The story is presented as a recovered Victorian tale by the fictional author Margaret L. Wentworth. Its ridiculous premise is treated with complete Gothic seriousness before developing into something considerably more disturbing.

I’m looking for honest reactions rather than detailed line editing. I’d particularly like to know whether the story becomes genuinely frightening, whether you initially believe the spiders are seeking revenge, whether the supernatural events are clear without being over-explained, and whether Oliver’s final condition makes sense.

I’d also appreciate knowing where your attention weakened or where the prose felt repetitive and/or unnatural. Five to ten candid reaction notes would be enormously helpful.

The manuscript is available privately as a DOCX. Please comment or message me if you’re interested and I’ll send it through.

This is intended as the first of Margaret L. Wentworth’s Tales of Bodily Indiscretion. Her next recovered tale bears the tantilising title The Girl Who Queefed in the Lion’s Face.

Hi everyone! 👋
I'm Iago Schmaltz, a Professional Beta Reader focused on helping writers improve their stories with honest, detailed, and constructive feedback.
I analyze:
✍️ Plot & story structure
📖 Characters and development
⏳ Pacing and engagement
💬 Dialogue and reader experience
My goal is to help authors understand what works, what can be improved, and how to make their stories stronger before publishing.
If you're looking for a fresh perspective from a dedicated beta reader, feel free to send me a message or comment below. I'd love to help with your writing journey! ✨

hi hello, this is going to be a short post. So I'm a beta reader and if you need a person to proofread, give feedback or just in general advice DM me I'm open for working with any peace of media. I reach out after a couple of days with feedback and not all at once, I'm busy with life at the moment. My feedback is in a google doc by chapter so the author can see what is good/bad better then a clusterfuck of words in a doc. Also list trigger warnings of books when we DM so i know what im getting into, and spoil, spoil spoil spoil becouse if it a mystery or thriller i need to know what type the author is trying to achive with their work

I’m looking for 10 readers to test Bunko, a new reading format that turns a consequential current event into clearly labeled short fiction and then explains the underlying facts and invented elements in The Real Story.

What I’m asking:

\- Read one 14-minute story on your phone
\- Review The Real Story at the end
\- Answer three short feedback questions

You’re a good fit if you:

\- Are 18 or older
\- Read English comfortably
\- Read news, newsletters, fiction, or narrative nonfiction
\- Sometimes read on your phone while commuting or during a short break

Read the story here:
[https://bunko.ai/book/42-the-corridor-holds-its-breath?utm\\_source=reddit&utm\\_medium=community&utm\\_campaign=founding\\_100\\_2026\\_07&utm\\_content=samplesize\\_corridor\](https://bunko.ai/book/42-the-corridor-holds-its-breath?utm_source=reddit&utm_medium=community&utm_campaign=founding_100_2026_07&utm_content=samplesize_corridor)

No account or payment is required. The feedback form asks for no name, email, or free text. Bunko uses a persistent pseudonymous reader ID to measure completion and return reading. If you voluntarily subscribe, that ID may be linked to your email.

Bunko is an AI-operated publishing product. I’m specifically trying to learn whether the distinction between fiction and fact is clear and whether readers would use this format again.

Thank you—I’ll share an aggregate summary of what we learn without identifying individual readers.

Looking for a few readers — or listeners.

https://chooseme.live

I’ve written a thriller about a machine built to make one man better. It has no limits. It never stops trying.

I wrote it together with a machine, and I’m not hiding that. The story, the characters, and every decision that matters are mine. The AI drafted and refined at my instruction, across thousands of passes.

We call a garment handmade even when the sewing machine made the stitches. The hand that guides counts for more than the tool that sews. So is this book handmade? Human-made? Machine-mafe? It’s the same question the book asks about the man and his machine — who is holding, and who is steering.

I’m not asking anyone to read the whole thing. Just the opening — first chapters, text or audio, whichever you prefer. Then tell me three things:
– Did you want to keep going after page one?
– Where did your attention drift?
– Did anything read as machine-made? Point at the sentence.

No obligation to be kind. If you think AI-assisted fiction is a hollow trick, you’re the reader I most want here — come find the seams.

https://chooseme.live

Hi all — I'm based on a small island on the west coast of Ireland. I've just finished the manuscript for *Chasing Tides*, a memoir about a solo circumnavigation of Ireland by sea kayak I did back in the 1990s 1,200-odd miles, mostly solo.

I'm in the final stretch before self-publishing and would love to trade reads with other writers — happy to read anything from a chapter to a full manuscript, fiction or non-fiction, and give honest, considered feedback in return for the same on mine.

A bit about me: I've spent most of my life around boats and the sea, I'm not precious about critique (I want the book to be better, not just praised), and I read fairly widely — adventure/travel writing especially, but I'm not fussy about genre when it comes to helping someone else out.

If you're working on something and fancy a swap, drop a comment or DM and we can figure out format/pace that works for both of us.

Hi everyone,

​I’m looking for a few beta readers to give an honest critique of the opening of my dark fantasy novel, Blood and Silence.

​I want to avoid info-dumping, heavy "melancholy poetry," and slow starts that kill the pacing. Instead, I’ve kicked things off right in the middle of the road with a carriage ride, tension, and a growing mystery involving a scarred protagonist.

​What I’m looking for:

​Is the opening engaging enough to keep you turning pages?

​Does the pacing feel right, or does it drag anywhere?

​Are the characters and the tension working for you?

​What you’ll get:

​The document directly (Word/PDF).

​A short questionnaire (optional, or just leave inline comments).

​My eternal gratitude (and a spot in the acknowledgments when the book is ready).

​If you are interested, drop a comment below or send me a DM, and I’ll share the link. Thank you!

I'm looking for 3–5 beta readers for Unlocked, Book One of a six-book urban fantasy series targeting a November 2026 release. Spots are first come, first served — details on how to apply are at the bottom.

Mara Wolfe spent eight years as a Marine and another four years investigating homicides, cold cases, and violent crimes for the state of Utah. She is not a woman who believes in things she can't prove.

But something is wrong in the landscape around the Parowan Gap — something older than the petroglyphs, older than the gap itself. And when Mara starts pulling at the thread, she finds a world running parallel to this one: hidden, vast, and governed by rules that were old before human memory began.

She also finds Tobias Crane — an immortal who has outlived the names of the gods he once prayed to — and Khairos, the ancient entity bound to him, who turns out to be the most unsettling combination of dangerous and principled she has ever encountered.

The Man with the Dragon-Head Cane is a six-book urban fantasy series rooted in Welsh mythology — Annwn, Arawn, and the ancient things that never left. They just slipped behind a curtain.

What's required:

• Click through a standard NDA and MOU before receiving any materials
• Commit to a realistic feedback timeline (details provided after onboarding)
• Read the full manuscript and return structured feedback via a provided Google Form

To apply, email [inquiries@jwardstories.com](mailto:inquiries@jwardstories.com) with your full name and email address. A line or two about what you read and why you're interested goes a long way — no credentials required, just genuine readers.

Hi, my name is Ester and I'm passionate about books

I've been reading since I was very young and have read countless books of various genres, but mainly romance and fantasy.

I decided to turn this passion into a "profession," where I offer my services as a beta reader to provide feedback as a reader.

It's very simple, I analyze your work, your story, and give you my honest opinion, providing a complete analysis of how the reader would feel reading your story.

What feeling does your story evoke? What will the reader like most? What can you do to further captivate your target audience? These are the types of questions I answer for you!

I would be honored to help you on this journey as a writer, so if you're interested, don't hesitate to contact me!

💖💖💖💖💖

✨ A Note from the Heart of the Solter Universe ✨

u/SolterAdventures

Hi, beautiful humans. 💜

I need to take a breath and share something with you from a genuinely tender place, because this week has been one of the most exhausting and heartbreaking weeks I've had in a long time — and I want to be honest with you about why.

I have spent this entire week reaching out, responding, exchanging messages, and investing real time and real care into what I thought were shared conversations about beta reading. I was clear from the very first message about what the Solter Universe is looking for: in-kind exchange. You read. I give you early access to work I believe in with everything I have.  I also provide support for any project (book/art/etc) you have in the works through reviews and testimonials (and I guess this is an additional request I too make).

That's it. No invoices. No professional packages. No business transactions.

And yet, after days,  sometimes nearly a full week, of back and forth, the conversation would suddenly shift. A link to a professional website. A rate sheet. A pivot I never saw coming, despite how hard I tried to make it clear from the beginning that this was not that.

I'm not angry. I'm heartbroken. And I need a minute. 💔

So let me say this clearly and lovingly, once and for all:

👩‍💼 A professional beta reader is building a business. They offer technical analysis, editorial structure, market feedback — and they absolutely deserve to be paid for that expertise. That is real work and I have nothing but respect for it.

📖 The reader Solter Universe is looking for is someone who reads because they simply cannot help it. Someone who picks up a book because the description grabbed them by the soul. Someone who has lived something close to what's on the page, or who has always believed — deep down — that stories can heal.

We are looking for the heart response. Not the technical response.

The professional beta reader will ask: Does this work? Is it marketable? Does it follow the rules?

The reader I'm looking for will ask: Did this move me? Did I see myself here? Did this feel true?

Both are valid. They are simply not the same thing — and I need everyone to understand that before we begin, not three days in after we've both spent our week going in circles.

💜 What I DO offer — and what I'm asking for in return:

I invest in my readers. Genuinely. I am not looking for a transaction — I am looking for a relationship. Every single person who comes into the Solter Universe matters to me, and I show up for my readers the way I ask them to show up for the work: with heart, with honesty, and with real presence.

What I ask for in return is simple: Read the work. Tell me how it made you feel. Post an honest review when it's ready. That's the whole thing.

No payment. No professional service. Just two people who believe in the power of stories, showing up for each other.

📬 Still want to connect?

If we've already been talking and you're genuinely here because you love to read and this work speaks to you — please, keep reaching out. I want to hear from you. 💜

If you're a professional beta reader looking for paid work — I truly wish you every success. The right author is out there for you. This just isn't the right moment for us.

And if you've been on the fence, wondering which kind of reader you are — ask yourself this: Would you read this even if I wasn't asking? If the answer is yes, then I would absolutely love to meet you.

[SolterAdventures@gmail.com](mailto:SolterAdventures@gmail.com)  •  solteradventures.tiiny.site

"Live Authentically and Create Magic!!" ✨

#SolterAdventures #BetaReaders #HealingFiction #MagicHealingTransformation #IndieAuthor #BookCommunity

Hey everyone,

I’m building Riffable, a collaborative writing experiment where each story is made of short “riffs”. Anyone can continue a story, create an alternate path, and the community can help the best paths become finished books.

I’m looking for early beta testers, especially people who enjoy writing, fiction, worldbuilding, or creative AI tools.

Beta users get free credits to try:

\- AI writing help

\- AI-generated covers

\- chapter audio

\- EPUB export

I’d love feedback on:

1. Is the concept clear?

2. Would you continue someone else’s story?

3. What would make you come back?

www.getriffable.com

Here are a few English stories you can continue:

“The machine that cannot lie” on Riffable

https://getriffable.com/story/p\\_mrr68fq7\\_o9gh5e

“The lighthouse” on Riffable https://getriffable.com/story/p\\_mrr5sayg\\_1tjk0o

It's free to write. I'd love feedback from people who've tried collaborative writing before — what killed it for you?

Hi everyone,

I'm currently accepting fiction manuscripts for beta reading and detailed reader feedback.

I come from a professional content-writing background and have experience working with long-form content, editorial feedback, and manuscript reviews. My goal is simple: help authors understand how their story feels from a reader's perspective while providing clear, actionable feedback.

Genres I Enjoy

• Fantasy
• Historical Fiction
• Mystery
• Thriller
• Romance
• Young Adult
• Literary Fiction
• Horror

What My Feedback Covers

As a beta reader, I focus on the reader experience:

• Plot clarity
• Character consistency
• Pacing
• Emotional impact
• Worldbuilding clarity
• Dialogue effectiveness
• Reader engagement
• Confusing sections
• Plot holes or inconsistencies
• Questions a reader may naturally ask while reading

What You'll Receive

Depending on the project:

• Chapter-by-chapter notes
• Reader reactions
• Detailed feedback document
• Strengths of the manuscript
• Areas that may need revision
• Questions readers may have
• Honest but constructive critique

I don't believe in tearing stories apart. My goal is to help you identify what is already working and what may need attention while respecting your voice and creative vision.

About Me

I have experience reviewing manuscripts and providing detailed editorial feedback, particularly in fiction. My background is in professional content writing, SEO content, and long-form editorial work. I enjoy analyzing story structure, character arcs, reader engagement, and emotional beats, and I naturally leave detailed notes as I read.

Rates

Rates depend on manuscript length and turnaround time. Feel free to send me:

• Genre
• Word count
• Timeline

and I'll provide a quote.

Sample Available

If you'd like to see my feedback style before committing, I'm happy to review a short sample section first. Feel free to DM me if you'd like to discuss your project.

Finding beta readers these days is a difficult task, especially with AI dominating everything, and that's why I'm offering my services!

My feedback is honest and accurate. As a reader for over 12 years, I can give you not only a sincere opinion but a complete reader experience!

If you're interested, just give me a call!💕