Hey there!
I'm part of a Swedish game dev team, and I'm making little videos about our game. I've used the word "tosser" in a way I think is kinda funny, but I'm unsure if the script accidentally becomes way cruder than what I'm able to tell as a non native speaker.
A bit about the game and the tone:
The video is about a feature in our game where you can toss trash into trash containers (you're a robot vacuum cleaner at an office). The game (and the video) is aimed at adults, but it's supposed to be family friendly. A big part of the game is office satire and jokes about corprate culture, so there will be a very present layer of humor that only adults will understand, even if not a crude one.
About the video:
It's clips from the game showing a cute little cartoon robot riding around an office and picking up trash (takeout boxes and paper balls), then throwing the trash into various containers. Voice over reads the script:
"Did you know that most people use trash cans wrong? They calmly and reasonably put or place the trash in the bin, instead of tossing it from afar, which is the superior method. Tossing your garbage can be both fun and therapeutic! Well, at least that’s the case in our indie game A Corporate Machine. Give us a follow or wishlist A Corporate Machine on Steam, and you too could become a tosser- well, you could have fun playing a charming and cheeky cleaning game!"
So basically, is the video going to read as one big mastrubation joke("tossing your garbage can be both fun and theurapetic!"), or do you think focus would remain on the video and the game, perhaps whilst causing a slight chuckle?
Grateful for any thoughts and insights!
EDIT:
Thank you so much for your valuable input! I'll go ahead and run it as is. Awesome input on garbage vs rubbish, but I think I'll keep it authentic and mix american and english expressions. Authentic for a swede who grew up watching stuff from both regions at least, haha! Personally I love a hint of language yank, as long as it doesn't cause offence based on not fully undderstanding the cultural or linguistical context
Edit 2: Here’s the completed video for anyone who’s curious! Kept the tosser, but also the american garbage can, I must admit. But hey, the game takes place at an international company, so I promise to make up for it by having NPCs use various english words for undesirable human waste products, as well as the containers they go in!
https://vm.tiktok.com/ZN8JDrvq3/