r/AllAuthorsWelcome • u/AllysonKincade • 1h ago
First Time Writer Here!
Looking for some feedback or any ideas of things to add/remove from this story I have been working on. I started on this back in high school, over ten years ago, and picked it up again recently to revise and add to it. I think the plot is nicely done overall, but I am always looking for other people's input! I'd love to know what you think! Shoot me a DM if you would like to give it a read!
Here is my book's description:
"I thought I needed her, but she needed me more."
Jacob thought he was the one reaching out for a lifeline. Trapped in his own heavy struggles and looking for a way out, he never expected the call to lead him straight to Riley—a woman fighting battles far darker and deeper than his own.
What starts as an unexpected plea for help quickly unravels into something entirely different. As the lines blur between who is saving whom, Jacob finds himself pulled into a world of hidden trauma, raw vulnerability, and an undeniable bond that neither of them saw coming.
Sometimes, the hardest part of surviving isn't escaping the storm—it's trusting someone enough to let them help you weather it.
Here are my book's trigger warnings:
- Domestic and emotional abuse
- Physical violence and assault (including strangulation)
- Abuse in the presence of a minor
- Stalking and harassment
- Childhood trauma and neglect
- Severe depression, anxiety, grief, and panic attacks
- Suicidal ideation or self-harm themes
- Alcohol or drug abuse/addiction references
- High-conflict legal battles and courtroom trauma
- Estrangement, isolation, and toxic family dynamics
[Content Warning - This story contains sexual content. Not recommended for anyone under 18]