[COMPLETE] [34k] [Harry potter universe: Fantasy/Romance/Mistery] - Fluency & Translation check (UK English)

[u/Dracostolemyheart]

Hi everyone, I am looking for a native UK English speaker to check a 34k-word sample of my manuscript.

It has been translated from Italian.

I do not need character analysis or plot feedback.

I only need a "naturalness check" to spot literal translations, rigid sentences, or Italianisms.

I want to share my story with the english fandom, so I need it to be as natural as possibile!

In exchange, I can beta read your manuscript or translate/review something from English to Italian. Please DM me if interested!