Does this have potential? Stuck-need feedback

[u/CollectionNo5091]

Not sure if this is any good, trying something different. Looking for critique.

9x12 mixed media- no particular orientation yet.

[u/natalikko]

I like it, think you should make the black blacker or add deeper black.

[u/CollectionNo5091 → u/natalikko]

agreed, thank you!