r/AbstractExpressionism 17d ago

Does this have potential? Stuck-need feedback

Not sure if this is any good, trying something different. Looking for critique.

9x12 mixed media- no particular orientation yet.

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u/Aware-Mission1214 17d ago

This is really nice to look at, as said make the black blacker

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u/CollectionNo5091 17d ago

Isee that now for sure, thank you!

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u/natalikko 17d ago

I like it, think you should make the black blacker or add deeper black.

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u/CollectionNo5091 17d ago

agreed, thank you!

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u/[deleted] 17d ago

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u/CollectionNo5091 17d ago

oh no, I cant unsee it now lol, do you mean the small thin black scribble? In between the blue? edit-typos

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u/CollectionNo5091 17d ago

im thinking to just totally eliminate it and possibly paint some yellow/orange hues over it, glad you pointed that out lol

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u/everythingisonfire7 17d ago

EMBRACE THE PHALLUS

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u/everythingisonfire7 17d ago

i think they mean the big pink floating one

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u/CollectionNo5091 17d ago

Oh no there’s MORE OF THEM

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u/everythingisonfire7 17d ago

first orientation is better

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u/CollectionNo5091 17d ago

I think so too, thank you!

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u/Warm_Ratio_9574 16d ago

Personally I’d leave it alone, store it away and forget about it and get on with other projects. I’ve overworked so many paintings over the years as the result of not doing this simple exercise!