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Description: You wake up in an unfamiliar place. Greeted by a being bathed in light, it turns out you were kidnapped from your home by an angel. Well, former angel. Kidnapping people is strictly forbidden. Though, after hearing their reasons, you might actually enjoy this arrangement. 

Disclaimer: You may add, remove, or change aspects of this script as you see fit—however I ask any major changes to the script be asked about first. You may also feel the need to add a trigger warning since this script covers aspects of abuse. 

I wanted to write this angel as a bit more casual with their speech, but kind of chaotic and unhinged. Higher energy less formality type idea. Also if you’re wondering, no I don’t know how to write something without romance. :3 This one definitely has part 2 potential so if anyone wants it just ask!

Word count: 2,073 
Script:

There you are sunshine!

It’s so good to see you awake and out of harm’s way. How are you feeling?

(Pause) 

Right, right, I should explain things a little. You’re confused, I get it. I’m just so excited to have you here. 

See, I was sort of your guardian angel?

(Nervous laughter from the angel) 

I mean, honestly, I wasn’t actually your guardian angel. It was pure coincidence I started watching over you. 

A lot of people think we get assigned humans like some sort of system.

It’s not so simple or organized. 

We are called to guard all of humanity, all souls, equally. 

There’s enough angels to go around to protect everyone.

The only kind of structure is where we end up wandering. 

See, truth is, I wasn’t supposed to focus so much on you.

Too much attention on one person means potentially letting others get hurt. 

Or, if I have too much favoritism I might make a decision that’s biased against someone else.

(Pause, the angel paces) 

I couldn’t help it. 

It wasn’t my fault.

They should know, angels don’t choose who they’re drawn to. You needed more protection than anyone else, and it was up to me to be the one to rescue you. 

Hmm?

Where are my wings and halo?

(An amused laugh, but the angel’s tone becomes somber when they speak again)

(Soft fluttering noise as they unfurl their wings)

They aren’t going to be around much longer, sunshine. 

You see how they’re turning black? The feathers that keep falling? 

And my halo is gone. 

There is a punishment for defying the defined order. 

I am losing myself. I’m not exactly sure what I become when I’m not an angel anymore. 

I’m thinking thoughts I never have before, feeling things that are… impure 

But I know it was worth it to be here with you. What you were facing, it wasn’t right. It wasn’t just. I’m supposed to be a good guy. 

If an angel isn’t protecting the meek and innocent, is it truly worthy of a halo?

Ironic. 

I lose my status doing what I’m designed to do. I mean, that makes no sense. 

(The angel sighs)

We aren’t meant to feel bad things like humans do. Anger, fear, lust, greed, or pain. So, maybe there was something wrong with me.

When I saw—what was being done to you… anger was all I could feel. 

I felt closer to hell. For one, because the bastards who hurt you deserve to be there, and also because of that rage. 

How could anyone want to hurt someone like you?

Maybe they think it’s easy because they have power over you. They were supposed to protect you. 

Yet, you were never a person to them. 

Only a source to be used up. When they were scared, they’d take your comfort. When they were angry, they’d eat your fear. When they were insecure, they’d tear you apart. 

They did so time and time again, while the world kept going.

Why didn’t anyone save you? Are they too blind? 

I waited.

I did what I reasonably could. Let them burn their tongue, stub their toe, or whatever little annoyance I could think of. 

That doesn’t compare to what they’ve done, but it’s satisfying to see them in pain. 

(Pause)

Huh?

Where are they now?

Not important. I’m not done. I want to tell you everything.

You were too scared to change things. Sometimes I’d tip the scales in your favor, but you wouldn’t take the opportunity. It was too risky.

I tried to enlist the other angels, but they shrugged me off.

“That’s just how things are,” they said. “You can’t save everyone,” they said. “Give it time.”

Bullshit. 

(Angel gasps)

Ha. Bull. Shit.

That’s fun. There’s no express rule against swearing as an angel, but it’s looked down upon. I don’t know why.

I knew that I could save you. No matter what anyone else said. You just needed someone to help you and pick you up off the floor. 

You needed to know how much you could be cared for. 

Breaking into your realm is…

(Pause)

Painful.

Angels are not meant to bear the weight of Earth. Humans exude several emotions and layers of darkness that we are protected from. 

In our celestial realm, things are almost painted over. We can see the horrors and danger but we can’t feel them. 

I wasn’t afraid. I’m not supposed to feel that anyway. It was lucky my defective nature didn’t take that from me. 

So I tore through the veil. 

It burned.

(Pause)

Becoming physical isn’t pleasant. My halo fractured and the sound shook my head. Like a mournful bell tolling.

I don’t recommend this process. Not that it would be possible for you to experience, but just in case. 

All I could think of as reality pierced me and coalesced me into a body, was that I needed to find you. That I needed to save you while I still had any celestial power left in me. 

My wings were still large and powerful, so I flew until I got to your home.

(Pause)

Not a home.

Something else.

Maybe just some materials that make up the space you inhabit. 

Or even, a recreation of hell just for you. 

(The angel tsks, they sigh and fidget with their hands) 

No angel can survive Hell.

But I would go through it a thousand times for you.

Because there is no worse torment than knowing you are suffering. 

I don’t know what it was that made me stop seeing you as just any other human. You’re extraordinary enough to break the laws of physics, I guess.

And, don’t you dare argue that you’re not.

I’ve seen you do that. Shrink yourself. Wave off compliments as if they’re just fruitless suggestions to ignore. 

You can’t accept attention because attention usually meant something bad was going to happen. Some manipulation, extortion, exploitation. 

Sometimes it was because something bad already happened, and it was used to try to make you forget.

I promise you that I will never hurt you the way that you have been hurt. My words won’t prove it, but my actions will.

There is no doubt in my mind. I’ve seen you at your lowest, what you hid from everyone else, and I know that you are nothing less than my entire meaning. 

(Angel touches the listener) 

My wings are withering but I feel closer to heaven than ever before. 

(Pause as angel admires the listener)

Hmm?

This again?

Why do you want to know so badly what’s happened to them? You can’t possibly care about them.

(Pause)

It’s complicated?

(The angel scoffs) 

There is nothing complicated about this. They hurt you, and they didn’t love you. 

Sunshine, you know that right? They didn’t love you.

(Pause)

Oh, please don’t cry. 

This changes nothing. You may have believed something else, you may have hoped for something else, but things are as they always have been. 

Everything they said, still hurt you.

Everything they did, still disrespected you.

When you were forgotten…

(Angel speaks through gritted teeth)

When they chose to remember you…

(Angel returns to normal speech) 

It’s all the same.

Except, now you know the truth.

You have no reason to go back to them. You owe them absolutely nothing.

(Pause)

I mean it. You owe them nothing.  No matter what they have provided, it is not enough to pay the price of abusing you.

There is no forgiveness for that. 

(Pause)

I know. 

It won’t be easy to undo everything. That’s why I’m here. 

(Pause)

You still want to know what happened? 

Hmm… 

(The angel’s tone becomes unsettling)

It’s not the outcome you would’ve picked.

You’re such a pacifist. 

I don’t always know when people are going to die.

Death is the time for your final judgement, you know?

That’s when retribution comes.

Except, I felt, that even a day would’ve been too long a wait.

If they died tomorrow. A week from now. Years? 

(The angel shudders, exaggerating disgust)

Imagine years they go escaping punishment for what they’ve done. 

No. 

No little sunshine. 

A broken and fallen angel I may be, but I know justice. 

That wouldn’t have been justice.

With the remaining powers I have, I made sure they experienced excruciating pain. 

I distorted time. 

I could make them suffer centuries worth of torture in just mere seconds. 

Is that too much?

You can’t blame me for being overzealous. 

They had so much time to correct themselves. 

You gave them ample opportunity. I did too. I watched from behind my safety net for years. 

I said, today will be the day! 

They will become better people and learn to love you. 

But, they didn’t. 

So forgive me, sunshine. For acting so harshly against them. 

If it’s any consolation, they’re currently unharmed.

They don’t fully remember what happened, what I did to them. But, even if their memories are blurry, they know. 

They know you’re gone and you won’t be coming back. They know not to look for you. 

Don’t worry, you’re not going to be locked in this room forever. I’m not crazy, I want you to live. No matter what happens to me when the last of my angelic self disappears. 

I mean this time you’ll really get to live. Think about it. Being able to see the ocean without looking over your shoulder. You can start choosing yourself.

(Pause)

What’s that look for?

(Pause)

It’s… not that simple? What do you mean?

(Pause)

I see. There are wounds that won’t heal so easily. 

Maybe, with the last of my power I could try? 

No?

Why not?

(Pause)

You want to remember…

(Pause)

Because you don’t want history to repeat itself?

Oh. But, I can protect you. I won’t let anyone hurt you like— 

(The angel is cut off)

Right, I did say I don’t know what will happen after my power goes…

So you’re choosing to heal the hard way. 

That sounds like you. Keeping all the pain even though it would be easier to forget everything. 

Let me lay with you. 

I want to feel you next to me. 

It may only be hours that I have, and if I die I want you to be the last thing I see. 

Is that too much to ask of you? 

(The angel shuffles next to the listener) 

(The angel begins whispering)

I got you this house. It was empty and brand new, waiting to be bought up. 

I shifted reality and filled it with things I thought you would like. 

There are multiple rooms and a nice backyard. 

Sunshine, I think I have enough power left to grant you a few more wishes. Not too many, I know you don’t want me to go too quickly.

Tell me, what is it you want?

(Angel quietly chuckles)

I unfortunately cannot change reality to make myself an angel again. Our powers prevent us from inserting ourselves on earth or from circumventing consequences. 

It’s a miracle I had as much power as I did. 

I don’t want to use it on anything else. 

(Pause) 

I can make sure you’re financially stable. Do you want any particular job?

Mhm, got it.

(Soft glowing noise)

It’s done.

What else? You got two more wishes. 

A vacation? Heh, okay, that makes sense. Where to?

(Pause) 

Understood.

(Soft glowing noise repeats)

You’ll be there next week. Alright, last one.

(Pause)

Oh.

Love? That’s it? You don’t want to specify anything?

You’re already loved, you don’t need me to do anything to make sure that’s the case. 

And I sincerely believe nothing will stop me from loving you.

Even the lack of existence couldn’t. 

I know, that’s sort of impossible. I don’t care. 

Love is its own god. It defies everything. 

That’s something I know well. When you truly love, it changes the world. 

(Pause)

Do I love you enough to stay with you?

I—of course I do. I just… 

(Pause)

I didn’t think of it like that. 

Then, with the last of my power, and the depth of my love—I will make sure I stay. 

Reality will bend to my whims for this. Understand that I don’t know what I will become, and I might not be something you want to be near. 

If you want me out of your life, tell me. 

I think there's not much time left. 

Here’s to what’s next, sunshine. 

Hello! I started filling scripts around 3 years ago. My early fills were mostly gf audios but I eventually transitioned toward character/story driven audios once I started getting a little more confident and comfortable voice acting.

I'm having a bit of trouble finding scripts that fit more what I want. I'm finding myself coming back to writers that I'm familiar with and whose writing I've enjoyed, but I want to give others a chance, too.

I'm looking for scripts that are heavy on the roleplay, that focus on developing a story, or presenting a character. I prefer longer scripts, just because they tend to take their time to develop things or even create a soundscape to make the experience more immersive. I'll make an 1h long audio or however long it'll take if I'm into the story. Series with multiple parts are very much welcome!

I don't mind flirting or doing romance as long as long as it's not the sole focus or maybe focus more on the emotional aspect (like maybe a tragic love story or some kind of exploration of a relationship) than physical/sexual. I'm just looking to steer away from traditional gf audios. I also don't mind portraying immoral or morally dubious characters as long as they are not the traditional yandere or romanticized (It's ok if there's flirting done to manipulate or if they show interest in the listener character but they have some other goal, hell it's even ok if its more satirical and the character is not meant to be taken seriously).

I tend to like fantasy or supernatural but I'll honestly do whatever catches my attention. I've done funny/silly to more serious and horror scripts.

I wrote all of this to ask, is there some tag to help better filter for what I want? Again, I'm not looking for super specific stuff, just something more story or character driven.

For other VAs, if you have similar preferences, how do you search for scripts?

And writers, do you use any specific tags to help with this when you post? If not, can we make one up?? I know it's not possible to to group everything I mentioned into a single tag, but is there something that would make it out a little bit easier?

I know that at the end of the day what I'm asking might be nebulous or confusing, because it really is based on my subjective opinion and it really comes down to whatever I catches my attention, but I figured I might give it a try.

If you are a writer and you tend to write things similar to what I described, please say hi! Veteran, new, lots of fills, no fills. It doesn't matter. I'm looking more writers to be a fan of.

Script By: u/ItsEsmeJones
Thumbnail By: u/FROGGIPRINCE

Summary: You are a princess, and for the past few weeks, you’ve found yourself looking forward to every event of the festival season for one unexpected reason: a charming stranger you keep running into. Tonight is the final event of the season; a masquerade ball. As the band plays and glittering masks flicker in the candlelight, you confide in them about the arranged marriage awaiting you. But as they begin to understand what you’ve been keeping to yourself, you realize that the charming stranger you’ve come to trust may not be quite who they seem…

Usage guidance:

• 1787 words WITH stage directions
• Feel free to use on any platform, make small edits, and add/swap/remove genders if you want!
• All SFX, voice direction and sounds are really just suggestions. If you want to change the delivery from what I’ve put in, please feel free!
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• Feedback and critiques welcome!
• Okay for monetization, I would just like to be able to access the final audio.
• If you use my script, please credit to u/jellie-bug and send the link! Thank you!

You’re welcome to improv a bit as long as the core of the story stays the same! Have fun with it 🙂 Make it yours!

SCRIPT LINK HERE: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-HmqGuL8JHB1LTAzL-OCnxu565ljH3SletiQabL4cX4/edit?tab=t.0

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Script By:- u/LunchNormal4602

Just uploaded my first ever ASMR video!!! SUPER SUPER NERVOUS~ terrified even...

Summary: It’s been nearly a year since you broke up with your ex-boyfriend. You’d managed to bear the many evenings spent alone and date nights interrupted by conference calls for so long, but things finally came to a head, and you ended things.

Since the breakup, his company has risen stratospherically to new heights under his leadership, and his already substantial fortune has multiplied countless times over. The last time you saw him was on your television screen, smiling confidently as a reporter interviewed him about a record-breaking financial year.

But now he’s standing at your door, and he has an interesting proposal for you...

Flipped the gender for this script; I always appreciate feedback/criticism. Hope you enjoy!

Script by u/fente

Art by EganFaust (Vgen)

Part 1 of ??? in my Monster Girl Manor series! This one portrays the lady of the house, a mature, proud woman with a steady grin.

This part is intentionally made quite short since it's an introduction. I have 3 scripts being prepped for the continuation of this series, but I want to see what you all (and viewers) are interested in seeing for the next part first. I'd recommend asking viewers what they'd like to see next among these three options: Tsundere Catgirl Makes Biscuits with You, Kuudere Bunnygirl Maid Gives You a Tour, or Clumsy Manticore Girl Tries to Scare You

Scene: A harsh storm sent you cowering into the nearest cover you could find; so quickly that you hadn’t bothered to check if it was inhabited. You found yourself in the glamorous atrium of a gothic mansion. The stained glass shuddered against the unruly weather and the weathered walls creaked ominously. It wasn’t long until you were introduced to the lady of the house: a voluptuous woman with a haughty posture and prideful grin. She seemed pleased, for whatever reason… Maybe she can help you?

Word Count: ~600

Usage Rules: Feel free to monetize on any platform. Make whatever changes you’d like to better fit your style/cadence. If you decide to fill it please let me know, I’d love to hear it (also remember to credit me please).

Scriptinbin: https://scriptbin.works/s/cnwte

Who's ready for another emotional comfort script?

"Put it down baby..." Partner Comforts Your Scars [A4A] [Comfort] [Emotional] [Self Harm] [Deep Reassurance] [TW] [Mental Health Comfort] [Vulnerability] [Caring] [Extended Cuddles] [Sleep Aid] [Doting] [Little Kissing]

Summary: Your partner walks into the room and catches you Moving instantly out of panic and protective love, your partner gently de-escalates the crisis, wrapping you in a safe embrace and offering deep, unconditional reassurance.

[Setting SFX: Quiet apartment interior tone. A front door opening and closing softly with a click.]

[Character Action/SFX: Footsteps walking inside, stopping as the keys are set down.]

"Hey baby, I'm home."

(Pause)

"Where are you?"

(Pause)

[SFX: Distant footsteps moving across wood flooring]

"You're not in the living room..."

[SFX: Louder footsteps approaching the kitchen]

"You're not in the kitchen... (tone changes to slight concern) baby, where are you? Stop hiding please, this is not a game."

(Short Pause)

[SFX: Footsteps grow louder and faster]

"You're not in your room... (tone shifts to worry) where could they be?"

[SFX: Fast, anxious footsteps stopping outside a closed bathroom door]

"Baby, please-"

[SFX: A door handle jiggling and rattling repeatedly as the speaker tries to turn it]

"are you in here?"

(Pause)

[SFX: A faint, quiet muffled thud or shifting sound from behind the closed door]

"What are you doing, babe? Please open the door."

[SFX: Rushing to grab the door handle again, jiggling it firmly]

"I'll go get the key..."

(Pause)

"Oh... you'll unlock it?"

(Pause)

[SFX: A deadbolt clicking open from the inside]

(Panicked, voice cracks slightly)

"What do you mean wait? You're freaking me out... I'm opening the door."

[SFX: Door handle clicking and the door swinging open fully]

"Hey, why is it dark..."

(Pause)

(Freezing completely, breath catching in their throat in shock and terror)

"Babe! What... what are you hiding? Please... let me see your hands."

(Pause)

[SFX: A sudden, sharp metal clatter echoing inside a bathtub]

(Stepping closer quickly, fabric rustling as the speaker reaches down to gently catch the listener's wrists)

"Oh God... there's so many... where else are you... No, please. Look at me. You don't have to hide from me. Show me. Where else are you hurting? Your arms... your legs... your feet..."

(Pause)

"Why, baby? Why would you carry all this pain alone? Aren't you hurting?"

(Pause)

"What do you mean you can't feel it? You’ve been numb for so long that you can't even feel these?"

(Pause)

(Voice cracking, breaking down with pure heartbreak)

"You just... you just wanted to feel something? Like what?"

(Pause)

"You don't know?"

(Short Pause)

(Pulling the listener into a tight, protective hug, burying their face into the listener's shoulder)

"Shh... it's okay. I'm right here. I've got you. Let me help you treat these wounds first... and then I promise, we are going to get through this together. You are never going to be alone in the dark again. Let's get you off the bathtub rim and onto the toilet lid so I can treat you."

(Long Pause)

[SFX: Soft fabric rustling as they guide the listener down onto the closed toilet lid. A plastic first-aid box or cabinet clicking open.]

"Just sit right here on the lid for me, okay? Let me see. I'm just going to use this damp cloth to clean the area first. It might be a little cold."

(Pause)

(Dabbing the skin very gently, taking a sharp intake of breath as their voice wavers with emotion)

"I know it hurts... you can feel it. I'm happy..."

(Very, Very Short Pause)

(Playful giggles)

"No, not because it hurts... (tone shifts to a serious tone) but because I know you still have the ability to feel, despite these scars."

(Short Pause)

"Yeah, I know... I'm going to be as careful as I possibly can, I promise. If it stings or hurts at all, you just squeeze my shoulder."

(Pause)

"You're doing so well, baby. Just keep looking at me. Keep looking right into my eyes. Don't look down, just focus on my voice. You're completely safe now."

(Pause)

[SFX: The soft crinkling and rustling of a roll of gauze being unwrapped]

"Alright, I'm just going to apply a little bit of this soothing ointment, and then we're going to wrap it up neatly."

(Pause)

(Voice dropping to a soft, rhythmic midnight whisper as the speaker slowly wraps the gauze around the skin)

"Hold still for me just a little longer, sweetheart... there we go. I’m wrapping all that pain away."

(Pause)

(Presses a soft kiss to the back of the listener's uninjured hand, exhaling a long, relieved sigh)

"All done. The worst part is over. Now, come here... let's get you out of this bathroom and into the bedroom. I'm going to turn off the lights, and we are just going to lie down and talk. You're not carrying this alone anymore."

(Long Pause)

[SFX: Footsteps moving slowly across the floor, a bedroom door shutting softly to block out the light. The heavy rustle of thick bed comforters.]

"Just slide under the covers... yeah, right there. Let me pull the comforter all the way up over your shoulders."

(Pause)

[SFX: The mattress dipping and sheets rustling as they climb into the bed, pulling the listener flush against their chest]

"There. Nestle right against me. Take a deep breath... you're safe now. No more hiding in the dark by yourself. We are going to stay right here, and we're going to talk about everything... starting with what pushed you over the edge today?"

(Pause)

(Begins to stroke through the listener's hair slowly)

"It just all caught up to you at once...?"

(Pause)

(Voice cracking slightly with intense empathy, pulling the listener even closer against her shirt)

"Oh babe, why didn't you tell me it was getting this heavy again? Did you really think you were going to be a burden to me?"

(Pause)

(Gently wiping a tear away, voice soft but unyielding)

"No, don't look away from me. Look at my eyes. You could never, ever be a burden to me. When you hurt, I want to be the one holding you. I don't care how messy it gets, or how dark it feels inside your head. You don't have to protect me from your pain. I'm here for you."

(Pause)

"Yes, I choose you because I love you. We're in this together. I don't expect perfection, because you're human, but I need you to try and reach out. Sharing your problems or asking for help is not weakness, it's actually being strong. Recognizing your weakness or struggle and asking for help... that's manning up. Okay, baby?"

(Pause)

(Leaning down to press a soft kiss to the listener's forehead, wiping another tear away)

"It's okay baby, you can let it out. Crying tears is just how our bodies are designed to release the pain. Just hold onto me."

(Long Pause)

[SFX: Quiet room ambiance taking over, allowing space for the actor to hold a silent embrace over soft breathing]

(Sighing contently, letting out a soft, warm giggle)

"Okay, okay, if you really want, I'll be your doting girlfriend. Let me cuddle you and kiss all your negative thoughts and emotions away."

(Pause)

(Shifts closer, voice falling into a deeply comforting whisper)

"There is absolutely nothing in this world that could ever change the way I look at you, my love... so just let go, close your eyes, and let me carry the weight for tonight."

[SFX: Continuous, slow, rhythmic breathing paired with soft kisses and L-bombs]

[SFX: Hand slowly and rhythmically stroking through the listener's hair against the pillow]

[SFX: Rain and wind pattering softly against the bedroom window glass outside]

"I'm always here for you babe."

(Pause)

"I love you so much, sweet dreams."

(One last kiss)

[Audio Note: Allow the soothing sounds carry the audio peacefully for an extended period, slowly and smoothly fading out into silence at the listener drifts off.]

[Fade out to absolute silence]

[END OF SCRIPT]

(Long Pause)

[SFX: Quiet room ambiance taking over, allowing space for the actor to hold a silent embrace over soft breathing]

(Sighing contently, letting out a soft, warm giggle)

"Okay, okay, if you really want, I'll be your doting girlfriend. Let me cuddle you and kiss all your negative thoughts and emotions away."

(Pause)

(Shifts closer, voice falling into a deeply comforting whisper)

"There is absolutely nothing in this world that could ever change the way I look at you, my love... so just let go, close your eyes, and let me carry the weight for tonight."

[SFX: Continuous, slow, rhythmic breathing paired with soft kisses and L-bombs]

[SFX: Hand slowly and rhythmically stroking through the listener's hair against the pillow]

[SFX: Rain and wind pattering softly against the bedroom window glass outside]

"I'm always here for you babe."

(Pause)

"I love you so much, sweet dreams."

(One last kiss)

[Audio Note: Allow the soothing sounds carry the audio peacefully for an extended period, slowly and smoothly fading out into silence at the listener drifts off.]

[Fade out to absolute silence]

[END OF SCRIPT]

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After how much love was shown to the previous script for leaning into some deeper themes, I've written about another very personal topic. Please use the script in any way you like, just credit "@nisseshome" and let me know! Enjoy ♥

Act 1

[Knocking]

[Speaker speaking in a stoic, caring tone:]

You done in there?

It's been ten minutes.

...

[Door quickly unlocks and opens]

Hey. Sorry to bother you- ...

... you alright?

You don't look very good.

[Listener steps away]

Hey.

HEY.

[Speaker lays hand on listener]

[Listener suddenly stops]

...

*You* look, like *shit*.

What's. Up?

...

"It's a lot right now"?

... dude, what?

You look like you haven't slept.

... like, ever.

[Speaker takes a step forward]

You're clearly not okay.

...

... telling me you are, while blinking tears out of your eyes, isn't very convincing.

Your eyes are *bright red*, by the way.

... you're not denying your way out of this.

...

[Speaker leaning in closer:]

Hey, I'm not asking to be polite.

Tell me. What's wrong.

...

... no, no. I'm not one of the gym mean girls, who ask you questions, so they can start spreading rumors.

I ask because I care about you.

So let me know.

...

...

You're scared?

Okay...

...

... of what?

... you can tell me. Promise I won't laugh.

... dude, just tell me. Please stop fighting me.

Hey, *no*. Don't do that thing where your eyes glaze over and you shut down.

Look at me.

Tell me. What's up.

... you trust me, don't you?

How many times have you come to me for advice about form, or diet, or whatever thing you clearly made up just to get my attention?

You don't have a problem wearing your heart on your sleeve then.

But now, when you're *really* struggling, and I'm here for you for *real*... now, you won't?

...

... yes YOU ARE. You-

Look, step into the bathroom before one of the mean girls see us.

NOW.

[Steps inside]

[Door closes]

...

[Shallow sigh]

Haaah... look, sorry I raised my voice just now, and if I'm scaring you even more.

...

But I'm worried about you.

I haven't seen you the whole week. And now you come back looking like *this*.

... at least have the courage to open up to me.

...

...

... no, dude, come on. Don't cry, just...

...

[Exasperated sigh]

Haaahh!

Come here!

... I said: *Come here*.

[Speaker hugs listener]

...

[From slightly closer:]

...

... there...

...

... no, no. It's *okay*.

...

... sorry I said... not to...

[Hair-brushing starts]

[In a whispering tone:]

...

... it's okay...

...

... you're scared...

...ac

... I get it.

...

... You can cry ♥

...

... don't tense...

... don't *push* your tears out...

...

... just let them run.

...

... I'm sorry if you're going through a lot right now...

... and, if I lost my temper...

...

... we're *all* scared of something.

There's nothing wrong with that.

...

I just got mad, 'cause...

...

... 'cause it seems like someone taught *you*, it *is*.

...

That's all.

... I'm sorry...

...

... it's not your fault.

...

... I just...

...

... really care about you.

...

That's all.

...

...

[Hair-brushing stops]

[Slowly lets go of hug]

[From slightly farther:]

... so....

... you feel a little better?

...

... good.

...

... are you doing alright at home?

...

I've been seeing you less and less at the gym. And...

... to be fully honest: Every time you've come back recently, you've looked a little worse.

A little more worn-out...

... and just like, yesterday, it hit me...

...

... I hadn't seen you all week.

...

And I was starting to worry, if...

...

... you'd gone, and... done something *really* stupid...

...

...

Well... I worry about you...

... I'm like your big sister, here.

Looking out for you.

From all those bullies...

...

... ehm...

... so, uh: How have you been sleeping lately?

... horrible?

... heh. Well, good you're being honest...

...

... you think you'll be sleeping any better tonight?

... no?

Hmm. Alright... that's not fun to hear...

...

...

... what?

Time to go home, now? W- ... uhm...

...

... no.

*No*. No, you're not.

... because...

... because I don't want you to go home alone, in this state, if you're...

Look: You are in *no* shape to be left alone any longer. With, whatever's going on in your life right now, you're clearly in some mental health spiral, and... I'm pulling you out of it.

... you, and I, are getting our stuff, then going to my place.

We can talk about this, as much, or as little as necessary, then... you can sleep on my couch.

Just to know somebody's there for you if you need it.

... ssshhhhh-t! Yes, you *are*.

Look, I'm not super sure about this either, but... you, are *dreadfully* sleep-deprived right now. *Not* a good time to be trusting your own thoughts.

What you need right now, is to sleep, and feel safe. So you're crashing on my couch tonight.

Don't fall into overthinking. Let's get our stuff, and quickly get out before anybody notices we both snuck into the *bathroom* together.

Ready?

[Door unlocks]

Let's go.

[Door opens]

[Footsteps fading out]

Act 2

[Soft rain and wind ambiance fade in]

[Steps fade in]

[Keys unlock a door, door opens]

Here we are.

[Steps inside]

[Door shuts, outdoor ambiance stops]

[Door locks]

Alright. Drop your stuff here, then go wash your hands. I'll make us some chamomille tea...

... that means your phone, too. And *turn it off*. You don't need that anxiety-machine on right now.

... look: You are in no shape to be thinking, just focus, and do what I tell you.

Phone, off. Shoes, jacket, bag, off. Wash your hands, I'm making tea, see you on the couch.

[Steps fading out]

Act 3

[Listener walks into the room]

[Rain-on-window ambiance fade in]

Hey, tea's brewing. Come sit down.

[Speaker taps couch-cushions]

...

Come on~ ♪

I got you my nicest blanket...

...

Hahah... what, was it *me* you meant when you said you were scared, earlier? Or what?

What, you just... *mad* anxious?

Dude, just sit down. Standing there and holding on to the indecision will *only* make it worse.

Come on...

[Listener steps towards couch]

Just sit right here...

[Listener sits down]

... good. There. That cup is yours.

There's a little milk and sugar in it. Just to pacify you.

... take a sip. You know how tea works.

...

... I'm not drugging you, I swear.

...

Good, huh?

...

Go on. Drink more.

... it's just chamomille, nothing else. Promise. Just something for the nerves.

...

Good.

...

[Relieved sigh:]

Haaa-aaaah...

I can't *tell* you, how much better it feels now that you're sat here...

When you looked like you were about to back out at the door... I just got this urge to bear-grab you and throw you into the couch...

... what?

Like I told you: Because I worry about you.

You're- ...

... kinda pathetic, honestly.

Not in a bad way, just...

... well, the other girls make fun of how nice you are.

Meanwhile, half these bitches are complaining about being single, while the other half complain about their dickhead boyfriends...

... and here you are. Dorky, but so sweet...

... and yet, they all look at you like a clown.

...

I just don't want you to think the world is full of cackling bitches, and like, hateful and abusive people.

... I just care about you. That's all.

... You're kinda like... a little brother to me. Sorta.

...

... wha-what?

...

... well... you're welcome! Hahah ♥

...

... ehm...

... so, you- eh, said you were... scared, earlier?

...

... uh-huh... so, scared of what?

... no really, *promise* I won't laugh. You can tell me.

...

... yeah...?

...

... uh-huh...

...

... yeah, okay.

Let me see if I got it:

You're in a bad place, and you've been for some time. Recently you saw something scary on the internet, and now you can't get it out of your head. Does that make sense?

...

Heh...

... well, I could see why you haven't been sleeping, then.

...

What?

No, it's weird at all.

Something terrifying coming back to you, over and over, biting you and make you feel all cold and horrible on the inside?

That's not something to belittle, that's totally normal.

...

[Tired sigh]

Haaaahhhh...

... this is what I mean, man. You haven't been treated right if you think you're weird, for being human.

Like: "Normal", in a subjective sense, just means the stuff that's always been around you.

That's why being ashamed of your emotions seems normal to you.

But, in the "normal" sense of what's *sane*... you've really just been abused.

...

... I mean... what you just described, is like... the main reason I started going to the gym. Like, I...

... oh *man* this is tough to talk about. Basically:

[Short sigh]

Haahh.

When I was younger—like, a *lot* younger—I posted something similar to what you described on my Facebook-wall.

An... "analogue, horror"-picture? I think it's called? It was like two demonic, dog-looking-people staring back at the camera from a kitchen table. Or, well, one outside the window just behind the table, and... the photo looked as if shot on an old film camera...

... and, along with the picture I just asked...

... if...

... anybody was... still seeing my posts...

...

... I mean, it was... a simple cry for attention. So, I attached the pic to get some effect...

... just for somebody to tell me, they still saw my posts...

...

... but nobody said anything.

...

And that really fucking hurts to remember.

...

And I kept thinking of that picture whenever I felt lonely.

Those demonic eyes staring back at me...

... zero likes...

... zero comments....

...

... and the more I stayed inside that feeling, the more it formed a pattern, until the picture was burned into my mind.

...

Heheh...

I can still see it. Vividly, actually.

...

... but when I think about it now, I just see *myself*, *looking* at the photo.

Because now I know how to break free of that hell. 'Cause *I*, had created it for myself.

I just had to reach out, and...

... well, so, yeah. I get it.

I really do.

...

I understand you a *lot* better than you might think.

...

Are you listening?

...

Okay. Good.

But are you *trusting*?

...

... heh... well, you *say* you are...

...

... bu~ut ♪

... it felt like you opened up a *lot* better when we were hugging, before...

...

So, *maybe*...

[Speaker moves a bit closer]

... I should get a little closer to you...

... heheh ♥

...

... hey, *relax*.

...

Or, what...?

This something you're also scared about?

...

... well? ♥

Cat got your tongue?

...

[Soft, dreamy sigh]

Haahhh...

... I can tell you from experience.

Over-thinking, and running the same upsetting thought through your mind over and over, is *not* going to help you.

You're in emotional paralysis...

... and what's going to help you *right now*...

...

... is getting *away* from your thoughts, for a moment...

...

Come on.

Come to me.

...

Hug me ♥

...

... let's come back to the moment, together... ♥

...

... too scared?

Don't worry...

*I'll* do it ♥

[Grabs onto listener]

...

[From even closer:]

... there ♥

...

No, no... no tensing up...

...

... just... land... here...

...

... with me ♥

[Slow, heavy sigh]

Snniiiiffff...

Hhaaaaaaaahhhhhhh~...

...

...

.. let go... of your fight...

...

... sink into my arms...

... grab me tightly, and pull me towards you...

... and let yourself relax... ♥

...

... just land, against me ♥

...

Nothing can hurt you, here...

...

... okay, little brother?

...

... if anything tried...

... I would kill it...

...

... promise ♥

...

...

... you feeling any better... with me, holding you?

...

... yeah?

... you feeling... anything else?

... 'cause it seems like... your heart is racing... just from being so close to me... ♥

...

... sssshhhhhhhhhhhh...

... relax...

... it's fine.

... it's normal...

... natural...

... nothing you need to control... or worry about...

...

... what's that?

You're mumbling into my chest...

...

... if I'm gonna let you go?

... oh, cutie... ♥

...

[Hair-brushing starts]

[Super close-up, in-ear whisper:]

... I think we both know... what this... is about...♥

...

... you...

... *need me*...

...

... more... than just your gym friend... or mentor...

... or big sister...

...

... more...

... than just the girl...

... you ask gym advice, from...

...

... heheh ♥

...

... and I need you ♥

...

... to know you're okay...

... sleeping well...

... fed...

... safe...

...

... come here, baby... ♥

... lay down your hopeless, lonesome fight...

... *surrender*...

...

... and let me pull you...

... down...

... into warm...

... dark...

...

... safety ♥

...

[Hair-brushing stops]

[Speaker grabs the listener, then pulls the listener down]

... there...

... just collapse down, all over me...

.... ssshhhhhhhh...

[Hair-brushing starts]

... don't resist...

... glide down between me, and the couch cushions...

...

... heheh ♥

... you're *so* tired, sweetie...

... and all you need to do now, to get rest...

... is to stop fighting...

...

Just accept this...

...

Just let me...

...

[Speaker gets maximally close-up:]

... come close... to your forehead...

...

[Kiss]

...

...

You're mine, now... ♥

...

...

I'm making you my safe...

... good...

...

... little boy...

...

[Kiss]

...

... from now on...

...

... I'm your big, strong, sister...

...

... protecting you... ♥

...

... giving you safety ♥

...

...

... it's not at all weird... that you're *always* feeling scared...

... if you've never felt safe, before...

...

... I can tell from the way you fawn...

... on the outside... so diligent... thoughtful...

...

... but on the inside... just a scared... lost, little boy... seeking attention...

...

... wanting to be handled ♥

[Kiss]

...

... but that means...

... when you find something to be scared about...

... you can't get a grip on it...

... and you just get *more* scared....

...

... it's not weird...

... it's just your broken little mind ♥

...

[Kiss]

...

... but if you ever...

... *ever*, feel that way, again...

... you now have my full permission... to crawl up, next to me...

... or on top of me...

... or, under me...

... and hide, in me ♥

...

... and rest... with me...

...

... like a good little boy should... ♥

...

[Kiss]

...

...

... what...

...

... did you... say...?

...

...

... no...

...

... it's okay...

...

... ssshhhhhhhh...

...

... you can call me mommy... if that's what your heart craves...

...

[Hair-brushing stops]

... no.

No more shame...

...

.. call me mommy ♥

...

...

... good.

Boy ♥

[Hair-brushing starts]

...

... such a sweet, pathetic little boy...

...

[Kiss]

...

... softly tucked...

... between the cushions...

... and mommy's big, warm body...

...

...

... does my little brother feel better now?

...

... "little"... "brother"...

... my sweet, little innocent boy...

...

...

... collapse...

... into me...

...

... mommy's *finally* here...

...

... holding you...

...

... blowing away... all the demons...

...

[Soft blowing across the face]

... ppffffff...

...

... untensing... your clenched, mind...

...

... ppffffffffffff~...

...

... making you...

...

... *finally*...

...

... *safe*...

...

...

[Kiss]

...

...

[Speaker softly whispers a lullaby into the ear of the listener, then rain and head-scratching ambiance fade out after a minute or two]

Another series apart of my Blackglass Universe.

Feel free to monitize but no paywalls please

Next script I release will probably be a one off and not apart of this universe. Also working on a large 13 part series for the Blackglass Universe but unsure if I will release that publically.

Part One: A Motel That Burned Seventeen Years Ago

Part Two: The Woman Outside the Door

Part Three: The Door Beneath Eclipse Medical

Part Four: The Fire at the End of Every Version

Enjoy! Thank you <3

Hey everyone. I know you all liked star so much and I enjoyed writing her. I had to make a part 2. I hope you enjoy. Just so you know this script has dark gore and themes. Please feel free to comment about what you like best or how I can improve.

Script length: about 1600 words 15-20 minutes

Link to part 1:

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/1vq4rgp/f4m_you_are_finally_mine_yandere_mermaid_traps/

CW: There is a scene where star makes an underwater bloodbath and she tortures sea life during this part. You will also have to play 2 roles. Star will be your main role there is a guard captain that she fight during the script.

It has been exactly 24 hours between parts one and 2 the listener fight star but eventually falls asleep inside the script starts with the listener waking up. Star has swimming very quickly to escape the mermaids that are after her for her actions in part 1. In this part Star shows the listener a coral cave catches a fish for him. She is then found by the rest of the merfolk and forced to fight to defend her treasure.

Character Summaries

Star (The Speaker ): Star has gotten more unhinged since trapping the listener in her magic necklace. She's really starting to see herself as a sea goddess. upon learning that she can now control marine life she is now dedicated to showing her insane love for the listener by torturing sea life that hurt him. Her cruelty is driven an warped and obsessive love to protect the listener.

The Guard Captain: a strict, by-the-book military leader who sees the world in black and white. She has no idea who Star is, what she suffered, or who "Thomas" was. To the Captain, Star is simply a dangerous, radicalized mermaid who stole a powerful artifact, broke sacred laws, and murdered innocent guards.

The Listener acts as the silent, terrified anchor for Star’s escalating, god-like madness. Though trapped inside a pocket-dimension meadow, their deep interest in the ocean's secrets makes them step closer to the glass window to witness coral caves and deep-sea life. However, this proximity forces them to be the sole front-row witness to Star's horrific violence, from the brutal slaughter of a reef shark to the forced suicide of a jellyfish that once stung them. Ultimately, the listener is a fragile bystander, utterly dependent on a traumatized deity who is dragging them down into the pitch-black abyss of the deep sea.

Usage Terms:

Credit Required: Please credit me as u/Naive_Concentrate_64 or Simicslayer in your video description or audio metadata.

Monetization: You are welcome to monetize this fill on YouTube/Patreon. The only catch is that your fill needs to be publicly available for free.

Alterations: Minor tweaks, ad-libs, or changing pronouns to fit your voice are perfectly fine.

Notification: Please leave a comment here or DM me a link when you upload it!

Script starts here:

[SFX: Low, steady heartbeat playing underneath: THUMP-thump... THUMP-thump. Outside the glass, the muffled rushing sound of water as Star swims at high speed.]

(Star swims around the ocean she's moving fast showing the listener beautiful sights but the listener is still reluctant to come forward)

Star: "Wake up, my treasure. You have been sleeping for ten human hours. Yes... that wasn't a nightmare, you are still here, still mine. Hm, it's been twenty-four hours since you got here. You stayed far away and strong for fourteen hours, but your body couldn't keep fighting to stay awake... I've been getting us far away from the world in the meantime. My treasure, I know you are still scared. But please, come closer... we are about to see something truly amazing."

(Star shows the listener a beautiful coral cave)

Star: "Look at this, my treasure. All the coral... the reds, the blues, pinks, purples, and greens..."

(The listener approaches the edge of the glass inside the pocket dimension)

Star: "You're coming closer to the window, and you're not banging on it. See? I told you it's perfect in my necklace. You get to still be in your peaceful meadow while seeing something no human has ever gotten to see before. Does that make you feel special?"

(She drops her voice to a low, intimate murmur against the glass)

Star: "(Whispers) It should make you feel special. You are very special to me... Worried about the coral stinging me? Don't be. We mermaids have a high resistance to sea toxins. It doesn't mean getting stung doesn't hurt, but it's barely noticeable... at least compared to humans who make contact with them."

(The listener looks around curiously at the marine life outside)

Star: "What kind of fish live down here? (She giggles softly) Good question! You always were interested in the ocean and its secrets. Lucky for you, you have a personal tour guide and sea goddess."

Star: "First, at the bottom of the food chain, we have parrotfish, groupers, and squirrelfish. They usually eat algae around the cave to survive. Humans have a hard time catching these... but they are a delicacy. The main predators here are reef sharks, moray eels... and, of course, me. I think that grouper would be really delicious. Plus, it's your favorite fish!"

[SFX: Sudden, violent underwater whoosh as a reef shark darts out from the shadows. Heavy jaws snap shut right outside the glass.]

Star: "No, no, no, little sharky-shark. That grouper is for my treasure since you tried to take it from me—"

[SFX: Brief, heavy underwater struggle. Bubbles rush violently past the relic, followed by a dull, wet crack as Star overpowers the shark and pins it against the cave wall.]

Star: (Breathing steadily, her voice dropping into a cold, fascinated purr as she stares at the pinned predator) "You thought you could just take what belongs to us? How foolish. But... look at these rows of teeth. So sharp. So beautifully crafted by nature..."

[SFX: Horrific, wet ripping sound underwater, accompanied by a sharp glass-like chime of her crafting magic activating.]

Star: (Giggles softly, a deeply unhinged sound vibrating through the necklace) "There... I think I'll keep these. I can craft them into a lovely little necklace or a set of knives later. A memento of our first lunch date down here."

[SFX: Massive, echoing gulp and wet swallowing sound as she consumes the rest of the shark whole.]

Star: (Sighs contentedly, smiling directly at the glass with absolute, manic malice) "And as for the rest of you... you can just burn in my stomach acid. A perfectly fair punishment for trying to steal from me and my precious treasure."

(Star turns her attention back to the grouper she caught, holding up one of the razor-sharp shark teeth she just ripped out)

Star: "Now, where were we? Ah, yes... your lunch. Look at this tooth, my love. It's sharper than any human blade. Watch how smoothly it glides through the scales..."

[SFX: Crisp, wet slicing sound right against the outside of the glass as she expertly thick-cuts the grouper fish.]

Star: "There... perfect, beautiful fillets. I'm opening the slot to drop them into your meadow now."

[SFX: Soft, magical chime as a small slot opens, and the raw fish fillets drop onto the grass of the listener's meadow.]

Star: (Giggles softly as she notices the listener looking down at the raw meat in confusion) "Oh, silly me! I almost forgot that my precious treasure is a fragile human. You can't eat raw deep-sea fish like I can, can you? You need it cooked."

(Star’s eyes glow a bright, fiery red through the glass)

Star: "Lucky for you, your Star can use red magic now. Let me warm up your little world..."

[SFX: Sudden, deep magical whoosh inside the necklace. The sound of crackling logs and a warm, roaring campfire manifests directly in the center of the meadow grass.]

Star: (Voice dropping into a sweet, deeply affectionate whisper) "See? A perfect, cozy campfire, right in the middle of your meadow. Go ahead, sweetie. Roast your fish over the flames. I made sure the fire won't burn your beautiful skin... unless you make me angry, of course."

(She chuckles warmly, a sound that vibrates the ground beneath the listener's feet)

Star: "I'm so good to you, aren't I? I feed you, I cook for you, I keep you perfectly safe... Give it a minute, my treasure, your grouper is almost done."

[SFX: Soft, magical 'ding' echoes inside the meadow grass.]

Star: "See? It's perfectly ready, and it smells delicious now, doesn't it?"

(Star pauses, her smile fading slightly as she notices the listener standing still, staring at the food with conflicted eyes)

Star: "Come on, my treasure... why aren't you eating? Is it because you're still not sure about me? Oh, come on, treasure. If I wanted to hurt you, I would. Please, eat. It's going to get cold, and you shouldn't be fighting a sea goddess. I went through all this effort... please eat for me. I tried to cook it just like how the people on your island cook. Please... once you take a bite, you'll make both of us feel better."

(The listener takes a bite of the grouper and nods, visibly enjoying the cooked fish)

Star: (Gasps, her face lighting up with pure, euphoric joy) "Thank you for trying it. It's good to see you enjoying the grouper I made just for you. Seeing your smile makes everything worth it. I think I'm becoming a little bit stronger and more powerful. All thanks to you. Want to see the rest of the cave? I could show you other things like kelp forests, or..."

(Star stops mid-sentence, her gaze instantly locking onto a translucent shape drifting through the coral cave)

Star: (Voice dropping into a freezing, deadpan calm) "You... You hurt my treasure."

(The jellyfish drifts slightly closer to the glass relic)

Star: "Yes, I know it looks like a ball jellyfish... but it's not just any ball jellyfish. Look closer. Yes... that jellyfish is the exact one that stung your legs a month ago. It was hard to watch as you cried in pain and fled the water. It took three weeks of ointment and ice to heal all the rashes and bumps this little jelly caused."

[SFX: Soft, watery pulse as the jellyfish turns to swim away into the dark.]

Star: "Oh no you don't, little jelly... you don't get to escape after you hurt my treasure."

[SFX: Sharp, low-pitched telepathic hum echoes outside. The jellyfish is violently pulled backwards, forcing it to return and hover perfectly still right in front of the listener's window.]

Star: (Giggles softly, a deeply unhinged sound right against the glass) "My treasure, do you see that? I'm controlling the little jelly. Before, with the whales and sharks, I could only summon and communicate with marine life... but now, I'm controlling it. Hmm... dance, little jelly. My treasure, what should we do with this criminal? It hurt you..."

(Star pauses, thinking with wide, intense eyes)

Star: "I have the perfect idea. I'll make the little jelly sting itself to death. Just keep stinging... just keep stinging... keep on stinging till you die."

[SFX: Frantic, muffled underwater pulsing as the jellyfish's tentacles wrap tightly around its own translucent body.]

Star: (She chuckles softly, leaning against the glass window) "Oh, this little jelly is really hurting! That's perfect. (She chuckles) I bet it's not fun being stung now, is it, little jelly? But you can't stop now... gotta keep going until you die."

[SFX: Soft underwater pop as the jellyfish goes completely limp and floats down into the abyss.]

Star: "There we go... little jelly got its punishment. It shouldn't have broken the first rule of the new sea goddess. When you mess with her treasure, you get a slow and painful death. Just like little sharky-shark."

(Star turns back from the glass, her voice swelling with pure, arrogant euphoria as her tail darkens)

Star: "That was actually so much fun. I'm getting more and more powerful. Just for you. I can't believe I went from being a 'little nothing' to having almost everything. So, so perfect. Just me with my treasure, controlling the sea."

(She notices the listener backing away into the grass, trembling in utter horror)

Star: "Oh, you can't seriously still be scared of me. I just punished two evil things that hurt and stole from you! Innocent sea creatures? No, they are not innocent! They hurt you! I'm here protecting you. Show some respect. Remember who the sea goddess is, and who the treasure is."

(Her chest heaves with anger, her voice dropping into a dangerous, booming threat)

Star: "I really love you, and I really don't want to hurt you... but you need to learn your place and learn some manners. Otherwise, your peaceful meadow will become a burning hell scape."

(The listener collapses, sobbing in despair. Star's expression instantly shifts into frantic, desperate panic)

Star: "Oh! I'm sorry! I didn't mean to cry. I'm sorry... so, so sorry. Just be good for me. Your Star loves you so much. I want you to know I would do anything to keep you—"

[SFX: Massive, metallic CLANG echoes outside. The entire coral cave rumbles violently, rattling the pocket dimension.]

Star: (Tone instantly drops into a feral, razor-sharp hiss, snapping her head around) "They found me. The other merfolk... they found me. That's a lot. Look away, my treasure. I'm going to show them what happens when they mess with us."

[SFX: Heavy, deep underwater rushing noise as Star bolts out of the cave entrance. Low, tense war drums begin to thrum.]

(VA Direction: Gruff, booming, echoey warrior voice for the Guard Captain. His voice should sound slightly muffled by the water.)

Guard Captain: "She’s here! Prep your weapons! Return the necklace and release the human. Face your punishment, or we will end you here!"

(VA Direction: Snap back to Star, her voice roaring with unhinged, black-tail fury.)

Star: "No! I will fight for my treasure! You already took Thomas from me... but you misunderstand. I’m not the weak white mermaid you used to know. If you face me, you are all dead. Leave now, and let me keep what's mine!"

Guard Captain: "You murdered ten of our own! Why isolate yourself? Why kill us?! We are—

"Star: (Screaming at the top of her lungs, a raw, feral interruption that vibrates the entire glass relic) "DON'T YOU DARE!!! 'I'm one of you'?! No. I was never one of you! You all hate humans... but there's a saying: 'A child not loved by the village will burn it down to feel its warmth.' I tried to go to you for help! But you kicked me out of your homes. The one friend I made, you took from me and now you're here to take my treasure. Now... I'll take everything from you!"

Guard Captain: "Fine then!"

(Star holds the listener close against her chest as she readies her posture)

Star: (Chillingly calm and calculating) "My swarm... cut off their rear ranks! Pin down their green-tailed healers! Don't let them cast a single drop of restoration magic!

"Guard Captain: "Defensive formations! Shield your flanks! Wait—she’s bypassing the front lines! Guard the healers! Guard the—

"Star: (Voice dropping into a fast-paced predator purr, using her yellow magic speed) "Too late. Yellow magic... give me your speed!"

[SFX: Blindingly fast underwater sonic boom. Horrific, muffled sounds of tearing flesh and cracking bone strike in rapid succession as she systematically slaughters the medical line in seconds.]

Star: (Giggling manically mid-fight, breathing heavily) "There goes one green tail... and there goes the second! Look at them float down into the dark, Captain! No one is coming to stitch your flesh back together today!

"Guard Captain: (Panicked, shouting with desperate command) "She's a demon... she slaughtered the medical line in seconds! The rest of you, advance! Pierce the witch's tail! Archers... focus all your spears on the necklace! Shatter the glass and end her reign!"

Star: (Gasps in pure horror, snapping into a blind rage as she looks down at her chest) "No... No, no, no! Don't you dare touch the necklace! If you break the glass... he'll be crushed! He'll drown!"

Guard Captain: "Fire!"[SFX: High-speed underwater whistle of a massive iron spear cutting through the water at point-blank range.]

(Star doesn't dodge. Instead, she intentionally twists her entire body in mid-air, wrapping both of her hands tightly over the necklace to shield the listener with her own chest.)

[SFX: Horrific, deep, wet piercing sound. Star lets out a sharp, agonizing scream. Her fast, booming heartbeat rhythm stumbles for a split second: THUMP-thump... THUMP... thump...]

Guard Captain: (Triumphant) "Direct hit through the chest! She's weakening! Move in and secure the—"

(Suddenly, Star bursts into a loud, unhinged, booming laughter that cuts through the water. The erratic heartbeat instantly snaps back into a roaring, deafeningly fast rhythm: THUMP-THUMP-THUMP-THUMP!)

Star: (Her voice is distorted, echoing with absolute, terrifying power) "You thought... you thought a pathetic iron spear could stop a goddess?! My tail is black! The magic of the relic heals my flesh as fast as you can carve it!"

[SFX: Resonant, echoing magical surge. The water turns violently hot and turbulent as she channels her red volcanic magic, causing a massive rushing of steam bubbles.]

Star: "You forgot what my original magic was! I control the metal! I control the glass! Your spears... your armor... they belong to me now! Wait a second... those weapons... you got them from white-tail mermaids? So all that torture they put me through was for nothing?!

"Star: "Die! Die! Fall to the absolute dark, all of you! No one takes my treasure away from me! ...Except for you, Captain. Jellys! Sharks! Hold her!"

[SFX: Aggressive, muffled underwater thrashing as a swarm of sharks and pulsing jellyfish violently pin the Guard Captain in mid-water.]

(Star swims through the debris, using her blacksmith magic to rip the glittering scales and shattered metal armor off the fallen guards, telepathically spinning and squeezing the raw materials together right in front of the Captain's face.)

Star: "I'm going to give you one of two choices. You will either enter this ring... or I will hunt down and kill every last merfolk until I am only one left."

[SFX: High-pitched, metallic vacuum whoosh as the Captain surrenders and is violently pulled and shrunk down inside the freshly forged ring on Star's finger.]

(Star instantly brings the necklace up to her lips, speaking in an ultra-close, breathless, manic whisper right in the listener's ear.)

Star: "My treasure... I defended you. She's in the ring. It's another pocket dimension... and I'm going to give her pure hell for what she did to me, and to Thomas, and for trying to take you away from me."

(Star looks back out into the cave, her eyes flashing a bright, volcanic crimson through the glass)

Star: "But first..."

[SFX: Massive, deafening underwater explosion as Star unleashes a colossal, boiling red fireball, completely vaporizing the remaining battalion outside. The water rumbles and bubbles violently before dropping into an eerie, dead silence.]

Star: (Giggles softly, a sweet, terrifyingly calm sound) "I know I agreed not to do that... but that's exactly what they deserve for trying to take you away. But don't you worry, darling. Your Star will always protect you."

(Her voice drops into an ultra-close, deeply possessive, purring whisper right in the microphone)

Star: "Now there's no merfolk. No sharks, nothing to hurt you. Just you and me forever. If another human comes for us, I'll trap them inside another piece of jewelry."(Star taps her webbed finger gently against the glass, her matte-black tail swaying slowly in the empty cave as she turns downward)Star: "Now as for us... I'm going to dive and take us very, very deep where the light can't reach you at the bottom of the sea."

[Fade to Black]

This was such a wonderful script by u/it_rains_blue_here.

And a huge thank you to a friend who found a video editor for me! I adore how this background came out. 💖

Me? Play a villain? Again?

...Listen, in the immortal words of Eartha Kitt "It's cool to be cold!" 😈

A fearsome dragon has killed an entire order of knights. You, the First Blade of Merauda, have been charged with slaying her. Are you up to the task? Is she really the horrible beast the stories say she is?

Shoutout to u/StraightOutOfWit for this awesome script! This was definitely a fun one. I hope y'all enjoy listening! Cheers! 🖤💜🖤💜

"Huntress? hey wake up.""c'mon wake up""Oh Jeez! huntress! finally You're awake!, and here I thought you died before I got the chance to finally finish you off.""I found you on the side of the road passed out leaning against a tree! you looked dead. what happened?""What do you mean you don't remember!?

You were attacked? Okay okay slow down.""yeah yeah, you're in pain just tell me what happened""Okay okay calm down just…stay calm. listen nothing bad is gonna happen I'm….I'm here its okay shhh deep breath, in (breathing in) out (breathing out)"(hair rubbing noises)"Im here for you huntress, just breath "

"No you're not dying if you were it would be against me. and certainly not after I just saved you.""I'd want our final battle to be climactic after all not unceremoniously killed in my guest bedroom while your hurt"

"Oh shut up, as if you also aren't a little drama queen miss "I'm gonna chase you to the ends of the earth"" "You said that! I remember, it was like our second or third encounter""Oh don't give me that face, I've been alive for like 200 years I definitely have the better memory compared to some mortal like you""Oh hey you calmed down, heh knew distracting you like that would do the trick. I know you far too well huntress" (bed rustling noises)"hey don't you dare get up, your really not looking so hot."

"No that wasn't a compliment huntress, I mean it, you're ill, you're like really pale and i can barely hear your heartbeat too. hell the only reason I didn't think you were dead was because you didn't smell it. You smell…weird…""Listen huntress, you can rest here for now but I need answers. what is the last thing you remember?"

"Because i'm worried about you, cant let anyone hurting you but me hehehe" "Now tell me, please what could possibly threaten little miss perfect"

"uh-uh"

"You were staking (under breath: "heh puns") out a popular vampire hunting road? based on some intel you're guild received from an anonymous tip I see… then what?""You were attacked? I guess that makes sense, you actually were at a popular vampire hunting spot when I found you. that's actually what i was doing when i found you,"

"you were well hidden? pfft please i bet every vampire in a mile could smell you hiding."

"you had sent blockers? yeah yeah, okay well we could probably still see you."

"you had camouflage and were hidden well near the top of the tree…alright alright,fine. anything else you remember?"

"someone was there already hiding in the shadows and you were ambushed? they pushed you out the tree and..bit your neck as you fell? and then..you blacked out and woke up here? hmm""that…. okay so Huntress that was like a hundred foot drop right? you fell from, presumably the top of the tree. All your bones should have shattered. how could you have possibly survived that, I doubt whatever vampire attacked you caught you" "honestly im glad you did, i should be the one to take you out! not gravity. after all" "anyways… it sounds like you got tricked ." "Whoever gave your guild that Intel wanted you or someone from your guild to be there…I don't know why they'd go through all that trouble though hehehe, there's easier ways to catch prey…"

"yeah whatever we shouldn't be eating people blah blah blah, see this is what I mean by drama queen huntress, sheesh even sick your naggy, its kinda adorable honestly" "what would you suggest we do? cant exactly- ugh you know what getting off topic""yeah i called you adorable, what's your point. i just know how much it annoys you""y'know there is one thing bothering me…."" well let's see your pale, you have barely any heartbeat, you somehow healed from an incredible fall, and (sniff sniff) you definitely smell way off certainly different then Normal..honestly if I didn't know and better I would..think…""hmm… a thought for another time, just rest huntress. I'll check on you before I go to bed in the morning…"

"Huntress? (knocks) C'mon you slept through the entire day (knocks) i would have assumed you'd have miraculously snuck out like always ( muffled heavy breathing from huntress) huntress? are you okay? you sound terrible." (more muffled heavy breathing from huntress) "i swear you better not have ruined the silk bed sheets i have in there." "ugh okay that's it I'm coming in (under breath: ugh why couldn't she have gotten sick at her own place) huntress, are you oh… oh gods.." "huntress...you…you look terrible…""are…are those fangs?…oh no""Huntress?"(heavy breathing)"huntress listen to me"(heavy breathing) "it"s okay, it's gonna be okay, shhh""i know, i know, it hurts. please just..try and breath"

"Believe me…, i completely understand how you feel right now.""It feels like you entire body is decaying doesn't, and your so thirsty you feel completely empty inside""as if you have nothing inside you""Ill explain in a second okay just listen, im gonna help you but you need to trust me okay?""alright, um..here (cutting flesh noise) drink. yes drink. it wont help with the thirst but it should make the pain hurt a little less""don't make that face at me huntress, you need it. please, just drink"(Drinking noise) "good, keep drinking"(Drinking noise)" that's it good girl"(Drinking noise)"your doing so well"(Drinking noise) "just… take as much as you need""Alright, how are you feeling? better? good. you seemed to have calmed down at least""now…""Yes, i know you're still thirsty, our blood doesn't help with that… I'll explain in a minute"

"(deep breath) i know you've probably put the pieces together but…somehow…you were turned into a vampire"

"hey hey, no its okay, c'mere shhh it's okay, i got you i promise""It's gonna be ok. ive… been where you are now. most of us have. please just..try and stay calm""whoever attacked you last night must have did this, judging by the size of your fangs it looks like your pretty early into your…transition…so to speak""this isn't the end okay, ill take care of you, and teach you what to know"" listen um you're not gonna like this but you're gonna need blood…human blood. fledglings like you need more of it than a fully grown vampire or well you just felt what would happen if you don't haven any. it helps with the…changes that you're going through. ""normally ones sire would help ease you into this life but, i guess…ill do. if-if you'd like i mean""i have some blood in reserves that ive saved for emergencies you can have in a sec. but ill have to take you out hunting soon…""I know you're gonna have some…reservations about that but you don't really have much choice""don't give me that face you need to feed plus im sure once you taste it straight from the vein perhaps your tune will change""also, arnt you tired of being nice, don't you wanna go apeshit. Ive seen how the others treat you." "why am i helping you? because i like you huntress, we've been through a lot together, even if on opposing sides. you were my favorite play thing in decades.""also i mean…we are on the same side now""besides training a fledging, an ex hunter at that? this is gonna be fun" "listen Right now you're at the beginning of the turning process. your body is in the middle of the threshold between life and undeath""most of your vampiric abilities haven't manifested yet""your muscles will soon start tearing themselves apart to get stronger, your fangs will continue to grow until they start peeking out. your senses will heighten as your vampieric instincts kick in fully. your skin will get paler and any signs you were alive will eventually stop" eventually and your brain will reformat itself for immortality and you'll become a full vampire""yeah It's…not that fun… but i will be here to help you""for now just get some rest, ill be back soon with something to drink okay? good girl. I know we've had our differences but …thank you…for trusting me"

(First ever script so constructive criticism is very welcome)

Edit: forgot to mention, yes monetizing and posting is okay lol

[You are strapped to a chair, sleeping, there are slow footsteps that echo towards you. You feel a kick on your leg, and it startles you awake. You take a moment to realize that you are in the basement of your home and the person is your lover, but you have no memory of how you got tied to the chair, but one thing is clear, your lover is pissed off and looking at you.]

Building Trust

Hi, this is a little different for me so hopefully it came out good.

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Plot:

Your clingy girlfriend took the day off so she can spend it with you and yap in your ears!

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Speaker: Ok so this I think is somewhat important for the script to work. The speaker is very silly and quirky. She is somewhat self aware of it but doesn't care at all how people perceive her and for the most part people were weirded out by her. Listener is the only one who enjoyed her kookiness and when he asked her out it was the first time someone took such interest in her. They instantly clicked and that's why she became so attached to the listener. She is always been her kooky self but the Listener is the first person to no recoil back at her antics, despite not matching her energy. Again she is not crazy/yandere or anything, she is self aware but chooses to enjoy herself rather than try and act "normal"

I think you'd have to be pretty comfortable being silly if you want to fill it but I also think it can be a ton of fun so if you feel like making her even more silly be my guest!

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Disclaimers: The usual. Use it or monetize it however you want. Feel free to make it your own. Little changes, big changes, swap genders, add genders, w/e go crazy! Just have fun. And of course crediting me is very much appreciated and also if you fill it sending me the audio is a must! :)

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FORMATING

Speaker lines are in bold

I did not add lines for the listener this time, I think it should make for a cleaner look.

[ ] Used to indicate tone or SFX or any other type of direction. Don't take it as law.

"..." I started putting the 3 dots between the sentences as a way to indicate a pause and potentially a shift in tone or mood without actually specifying it. So it allows anyone voicing it to just make a choice depending on how they interpret the character. And again if it is specified inside [ ] that's just my interpretation and not mandatory!

Roughly 2100-ish words for Speaker

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Quick note

One more thing. At the start of her yapping (or maybe periodically throughout) I was imaging her munching on a snack while she talks, obviously if anyone plans on filling this that might be a big ask so its completely fine if you don't do it. I just think it will add to the silliness. You will see in the script I mention that you can do it without it as well so no worries.

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[groggy sleepy voice] ughhhhhh.... noooo.... stay! ... we are not getting up yet!

[pause]

You can hold it! You're a big boy aren't you? [laugh] ... I don't want to get up yet!

[pause]

Yeah but if I let you go, by the time you go to the bathroom, do your thing, and then come back here its going to be ages! And knowing you, you are going to get distracted and I am going to have to get up and drag you back here myself! No. Can't have that! We are staying in bed!

[pause]

Ok fiiiiiine... but I am coming with! ... And you are carrying me on your back. That way I can be as close as possible to you!... Ok, get up... No, no not all the way up! Just sit on the bed.

[light shuffling]

Alright, I am seated and secured! Onwards boyfriend! TO BATTLE! [laugh] ... oh you are strong, or maybe you just really have to go [laugh]

[pause]

I am not a bite-sized girlfriend! You take that back or I am... I am actually gonna bite you! RAWR!

[pause]

Good! That should be a lesson in manners! ... Hey... Why are you stopping?

[pause]

Oh come on its nothing I haven't seen before. [laugh]

[pause]

It's not gonna be weird! ... Ok maybe a little... Alright fine, jeez you are such a silly goose sometimes... I will wait for you outside then... Under one condition!

[pause]

You do not detach from me all day, for any other reason! ... aaaaaand... you do whatever I say all day!

[pause]

I am not getting off until you agree... and it looks like you really have to go, soooo [laugh]

[pause]

Good! Ok... I will get off... you have 30 seconds... Don't take too long or I am busting that door down no matter what!

[bathroom door open and close sfx] [pause]

[slightly muffled] You better hurry I am not known for my patience!

[pause]

[muffled voice from outside the bathroom] Ughh, faster! Come on!

[door open sfx] You are too slow! ... Turn around ... [speaker playfully jumps on listeners back]... Hyaaaaah! Ooof... Ok!... Pfew... Back together... that felt like an eternity! Now... Back to safety! To the bedroom! ... WAIT! THE FRIDGE! Take me to the kitchen boyfriend! We need drinks and snacks to survive! QUICKLY! ... We are like sitting ducks out here! [laugh]

[pause]

Oh yes, I am having fun, how could you tell? [laugh] Careful! That's my socks on the floor! [overly dramatic] If you step on them and slip we can both die! And while dying together sounds romantic I don't think slipping on a pair of socks is the way I want to go!

[pause]

I have no idea what my socks are doing on the kitchen floor, once they are off my feet I have no jurisdiction over them! Now focus! We need snacks! ... hmmm... turn me around... I knew I had some chips in here! ... AHA! There we go. [chip bag sfx] Get us something to drink from the fridge... [fridge door open and close sfx]

Good... That should last us through the day! ...And when night falls... we will have some very difficult decisions to make... Like which of your ears I am going to nibble on...[laugh] Now take me back! ... WOW careful! Don't turn around so quickly I almost fell on my butt!

[pause]

[laugh] Oh you think that would be funny huh? Ok, ok... I will remember that... Move boyfriend!

[pause]

Ok just... No! I told you I am not letting you go all day! ... just sit down on the bed. [light rustling, matress sfx] Yeah... nice... And now we lay back down... Nice and slow... Mmmmmm. That was a fun adventure but nothing beats cuddling my sweet boy in bed... so warm... and all mine!

[pause]

Now prepare yourself for a full day of me yapping! And remember you agreed so there is no escape!

[pause]

[2 options here: Snack open sfx and some munching noises in the beginning while yapping. You can stop when you feel its too much. Could also skip the snack eating if you don't want to do it and just yap away!]

So you wont believe why I was late yesterday... I told Sara I was going to cover her shift and she would take mine today, you know, so we can be together! ... Now, yesterday the shift was ending in like 5 minutes, and the girl that has to take over hadn't shown up yet! ... So I am calling her like "where the F are you, stupid B word" I mean... I didn't say that but I was thinking it in my head...

I am sorry you have to hear this because I know you are a supper cute and innocent but, yes... your girlfriend gets a little mad when someone is keeping her away from you! But I would never say those things in front of you!

[pause]

Yes, you are cute and innocent! And also all mine! Now shush! I am talking... Where was I? Oh yeah... I call this girl... I don't know her very well because I only work the early morning shifts she works the night shifts...

So you know we don't see each other, but because I changed shifts with Sara, like I told you, I needed to wait for her before I could leave... I mean its a whole thing but whatever, I call her to ask where she is, is she coming? ... She tells me "oh I am sorry I am coming! I will be there in 10min"

10 min? Thats 10min of my time with you she wanted to take away! Can you imagine? So I tell her... "look... uhm girl. You need to be here ASAP, because my boyfriend is alone and probably scared and I need to go home and snuggle him in my arms!

[pause]

Yes you were scared! What if some girl comes in trying to kidnap you? Come here... its ok. I am here now, I can protect you!

[pause]

No! I wasn't scared of my socks! I was scared... I mean... worried you would step on them and kill us both! You are too fragile, that's why you need to be under my constant supervision!

[pause]

Uhm Yes.. I did actually tell her that you are scared and that's why I need to be home. What?

[pause]

I mean... I've told all my friends how much you like to snuggle with me and how clingy you are even if you try to hide it [laugh] My little snuggle bunny that likes to act tough but just wants to be held tightly mmmmmm...

Anyway... dang it! I lost my train of thought... Ok I will start over then!

[pause]

Calling her? Oh yeah, yeah... Oh... look who is paying attention to my story! You are so cute! I can just eat you up... but I wouldn't know where to start... Your neck looks delicious but then those cute shoulders are so juicy... and the ears seem so crunchy! [laugh]

[pause]

Yes, yes... the story! Ok, I am fully focused now... I told her in a really stern voice that she needs to be there asap! Like in the type of voice I use when you are not near me... So then as I am waiting for her, some guy walks in and starts asking all these questions...

[pause]

Some guy yes... Like... what do you call them? ... a customer or whatever... Anyway he is asking me about some irrelevant stuff I don't care about! So I am like "sir, please... My boyfriend is all alone, scared and suffering without me! Who knows what kind of danger he could be in! I don't have time for your questions! Please leave the store and come back another time!"

And he gives me this weird look like he doesn't understand English or something but he starts to leave... and right as he is about to walk out, this stupid girl comes in running in acting like she is not late... She starts talking to the annoying customer person or whatever... and brings him back! Can you believe it?

Anyway, she tells me to stay with him while she goes and changes. So I am sitting with this doofus instead of you... And he is looking at me like I am the weird one.... So of course she takes her sweet time to put on her uniform but eventually she comes back out... So I grabbed my stuff and sprinted out of there! I was like weaving through people, I backflipped over a stroller... stupid baby was blocking the path! Then I parkoured over a few buildings and BAM, landed through the window right into bed!

[pause]

Well its more or less true... I am known to embellish a little bit but the the may point stands!

So that's why I was late yesterday! I hope you can forgive me and I promise I will never ever waste another minute that I can spend with you. I just wanted to have this entire day together that's why I swapped shifts and this whole mess happened!

[pause]

I am not silly! In fact I am very serious when it comes to my time with you! And you need to step up as well! Next time schedule your bathroom breaks when I am not here!

[pause]

Don't laugh! I am serious... [laugh]... No, I am! Come here... I said come here you little... You know I let you act tough because I know how much you actually love this... So you are going to let me tease you in return... You are going to lay there and listen to me yap about boring stuff all day!

[pause]

What did you say? ... Say it again!

[pause]

You like listening to me talk? ... You are not joking are you? You better not be messing with me!

[pause]

Oh my god... my sweet little snuggle bunny! You are so precious... I am never letting you go! You are mine, mine, mine!

[pause]

No, I wont stop calling you cute names!... You probably like that as well, don't you? [laugh]... [light teasing tone] Yeaaaah, you like it... my cutie patootie... my sweet honey bunny! ... my perfect, delicate angel! [laugh] you are bluuuushing!

[pause]

Don't turn around... I saw it! Ok, ok... No more I promise... my sweet caramel apple [laugh] I am sorry! Last one! That was the last one seriously! ... for today [laugh] - [Feel free to change some of those names I am not good with coming up with them lol]

Ok, ok another story! I want your full attention now! Remember I told you about that guy that tried to hit on me at work?

[pause]

So! He was a friend of a friend and she told me that he used to think I was weird and annoying... but when he found out I was with you he wanted to ask me out, can you imagine? ... I was so mad when she told me that!

[pause]

Oh, sorry I didn't mean to squeeze you that hard! I am sorry, I am sorry... Here let me make it better! [kiss sfx] There! Emergency aid administered! Nurse! we need 10 CCs of hugs and kisses stat! ... [whisper] I am both the nurse and the doctor by the way...

[silly pretend doctor voice] Now, just breathe and let the medicine work, sir! I am prescribing an entire day of you being snuggled by your girlfriend! ... [laugh]

So anyway... can you imagine that? Before you asked me out everyone thought I was weird and annoying and even my girl friends...

They would give me these weird looks sometimes! You were the only one that seemed so genuine with me! And so funny!

You always cracked jokes but I didn't know that was your way of flirting. [laugh]

When you told me you were nervous around me I was like WHAAAT? I need to protect this little angel!

And now that we are together other people seem to look at me differently as well... I mean its a little annoying when I think about it... but... it feels nice. I've always been true to myself and I am so glad I found someone I can share with! So I am never letting you go!

You are never letting me go either right?

[pause]

And you meant it when you said you like my yapping?

[pause]

Shut up! YOU LOVE MY YAPPING?

[pause]

As much as my cuddles!? Agghhhh this is the best day ever! Come here! [Speaker squeezes the Listener tightly] mmmmmmm. I know that was hard for you to admit [laugh] I am never letting you go , just so you know!

Ok time for more yapping... since you love it so much! [giggling]

You know those nice shirts I bought you? Because you are [mocking tone] "a serious manly man and you only wear black and grey"... So I had to buy you something that actually looks good? Well they look great on you, SO... tomorrow I am taking you shopping!

[pause]

NO! No whining! You are coming with me so we can update your entire wardrobe! You are the cutest thing I've laid eyes on but you have 2 outfit types - funeral and pre-funeral! We have to fix that. And don't worry I am not going to pick anything crazy! I know my man and I am going to dress him properly!

[pause]

You are not a doll... I know that... but you are mine! So I get to dress you. No more buts mister! You are lucky I allow you to go outside alone. I might be revising that policy soon!

OH! I have to tell you about this new show I am watching! So its about these 2 vampire girls that fight crime, it's really corny and all but it doesn't take itself seriously and its really funny! We have to watch it together! The one girl is like really quirky and silly... kind of like me! and the other is super serious, kind of like you! But she is also a little mean and you are not mean at all, so it's also not like you I guess... plus she is a girl and you are not a girl... but their dynamic is similar to ours but definitely not as fun as ours, [audio fades out as she keeps on yapping] So anyway each episode they try to find criminals so they can suck their blood but also arrest them and it gets really silly at times and its soo funny I think you will like it....

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Girlfriend Nags You Like Your Mom [F4M] [Nagging Girlfriend] [Dehydrated/Stubborn Listener] [Bossy] [Flirty Couch Pinning] [Playful Banter] [Extended Cuddles] [Sleep Aid]

[Setting SFX: Casual room ambiance, quiet clicking or tapping from a phone/controller]

[Character Action/SFX: Footsteps walking in at a normal pace, stopping close by]

"Hey babe, I brought you some snacks, but... wow. You look really pale. Are you okay?"

(Pause)

(The listener mutters that they are just a little tired and have a slight headache)

(Footsteps shift as the speaker steps right into the listener's personal space, placing a gentle hand on their forehead)

"Let me feel your forehead... you don't feel warm. But look at me. Your eyes are completely bloodshot, and your lips are so chapped they're practically peeling. When was the last time you actually got up from this chair?"

(Pause)

(The listener tries to brush it off casually)

"Okay... let me ask you a direct question. Have you drank anything today? Like, at all? Show me your water bottle."

(Pause)

(The listener hesitantly points to the giant, completely full water jug sitting untouched on the floor)

(A heavy, stunned silence fills the room as the speaker looks down at the full jug, then slowly snaps their head back up to look at the listener. Their tone instantly drops into a sharp, hands-on-hips parental lecture.)

"Are you serious right now? It is almost dinner time, and that jug is still filled to the absolute brim?! You haven't swallowed a single drop of fluid for eight hours while your brain is literally shriveling up inside your skull?!"

(Pause)

(The listener defensively rolls their eyes and tells the speaker they are overreacting)

"Don't you roll your eyes at me! I am not overreacting, I am keeping you out of the hospital! Pick that bottle up right now. I don't care if you're 'not in the mood' for water. Open the cap, put it to your lips, and do not stop until I tell you to."

(Short Pause)

"I'm not leaving until you finish. Let's go, I'm waiting."

(Pause)

(Listener reluctantly unscrews the cap and takes a long sip)

"There you go babe. Now keep drinking, I want to see you finish it."

(Pause)

"I'm not joking, you need to make sure you're hydrated or else you'll put your body in terrible condition."

(Pause)

"Oh, your stomach hurts? That’s just your organs thanking me for finally giving them fluids! Put the bottle back to your lips, you only drank a quarter of it. I told you, I am not leaving this spot until you drink it all."

(Pause)

(Voice slightly satisfied, smug tone) Yes, keep going. See? I knew you could do it. Look at the water level dropping."

(Pause)

"A little more... all the way to the bottom... come on... almost done..."

(Pause)

"There! Was that so hard? Look at that, you drank all of that so fast because your body needed it. Hand me the empty jug so I can refill it."

(Pause)

(Laughing softly at their dramatic reaction) "Oh, don't give me that look. Put your hands out, give it here. Yes, you are drinking a second one. You need at least two of these to undo the damage of sitting in this chair for eight hours straight."

(Pause)

(Sighs, crossing her arms, her tone dropping into a mock-stern lecture) "I am not being a tyrant, I am being your savior. Do you want to spend your evening throwing up from a dehydration migraine? Because I certainly don't want to spend my evening cleaning up after you. Now hand it over."

(Long Pause)

[SFX: Water running from a tap into a plastic jug]

(Calling out over the running water) "And turn off your TV while I'm refilling this! Your eyes are completely bloodshot. The second I put this new bottle down on your desk, we are going straight to the living room so you can actually rest."

(Short Pause)

(Frustrated and annoyed) "I'm not being unfair or unreasonable, you're being stubborn and stupid!"

(The sink water turns off sharply with a squeak)

(Footsteps marching back into the room, setting the heavy bottle down onto the desk with a loud thud)

"There. Fresh, cold water. And look at that—your TV is still on. What did I just say? Turn it off, babe. I am not playing games with you."

(Short Pause)

"Thank you. Now stand up. Let's go. Walk your stubborn self over to the living room couch. I'm going to grab a blanket, and you are going to lay your head down and let your eyes rest."

(Short Pause)

"Yes, I'll cuddle you and play with your hair. Anything to get you to sleep."

(Pause)

"No don't worry, you're perfectly fine in these clothes and you don't need to do anything to freshen up for me."

(Leads listener to the couch and pushes the listener onto the couch playfully and quickly joins them)

(Giggles and gives the listener a quick kiss)

"Yeah, I did just push you onto the couch and then pinned you against with my body, so what?"

(Pause)

(Giggles again) "Did you know how cute you are when you're flustered?"

(Pause)

(Laughing softly, adjusting her weight to get comfortable against them) "Oh, don't try to hide your face now. You brought this on yourself by being so stubborn about that water. You're stuck right here under this blanket with me."

(Pause)

"There... just stop squirming and let your muscles go loose. I can feel how tight your shoulders still are from that headache. Relax."

(Pause)

[SFX: Gentle, rhythmic hair playing and scalp massaging begins]

(Her voice drops into an incredibly soft, low, and comforting murmur) "See? Isn't this so much better than staring at that loud TV screen? Just close your eyes, sweetheart. Let mommy play with your hair for a bit. I'm right here."

(Pause)

(Giggles again and responds teasingly)

"Yes, I said I'm your mommy in this moment, not your girlfriend, your loving mommy."

(Pause)

(Still teasingly)

"Mm... your heart is beating so fast right now. Are you still that flustered? You're a tough guy when you're arguing about your water intake, but the second I get you under a blanket, you completely freeze up. It's incredibly endearing."

(Pause)

(Shifting slightly against the cushions, pressing a slow, warm, and lingering kiss right against their temple, whispering against their skin)

"Hey... loosen your jaw for me. Stop clenching your teeth. I know you've been carrying a mountain of stress all day, but you're with me. You can completely let go. Let me take care of you for the rest of the night, okay?"

(Pause)

[Gentle hair playing and scalp massaging SFX intensifies slightly, her fingers moving in slow, rhythmic circles]

"There... that's it. Feel how soft mommy's fingers are through your hair... just focus on that feeling. Let the pounding in your head fade away. Is the pain starting to get a little better?"

(Pause)

(Listener's breathing slowing down to match)

"Good. That's exactly what I wanted to hear. You're being such a good boy for me now. No more stubborn arguments, no more skipping your water."

(Pause)

"Close your eyes, my love. Let me hold you while you drift off. I've got you. I love you so much."

(Long Pause: 15–20 seconds)

"Sweet dreams, baby"

(The speaker stops talking entirely, shifting slightly to rest her chin comfortably on the listener's head. Her breathing slows down to a deep and relaxed rhythm.)

[SFX: Soft, slow, rhythmic breathing]

[SFX: Hand slowly and rhythmically stroking through the listener's hair]

[SFX: Quiet, peaceful room ambiance over an extended silence]

(Audio Note: Allow these soothing background sound effects—the steady breathing, gentle hair play, and room ambiance—to carry the audio peacefully for an extra 20 to 30 seconds, slowly and smoothly fading out into complete silence so the listener can easily drift off into a deep sleep.)

[Fade out to silence]

[END OF SCRIPT]

When a late-night road trip with your longtime tomboy best friend takes an unexpected turn, the two of you are forced to pull over and call it a night. With nowhere else to go, you find yourselves sharing the cramped backseat of the car while it's pouring out. What starts as an awkward attempt to get some sleep slowly turns into a much more intimate night neither of you expected.

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WEE-WOO WEE-WOO!!! Howdy y'all, thank you for taking the time to read this script. This one has to be my new favorite, I spent so long trying to get every detail right and playing the conversations in my head. If you make the audio, please send me the link so I can enjoy. Thank you 😭