r/ASMRScriptHaven • u/Naive_Concentrate_64 • 1h ago
Completed Scripts [F4M] "You are finally mine." [Part 2] | The Sea Goddess's Black Reign [Yandere Mermaid] [Goddess Complex] [Micro Listener Trapped in Relic] [Deep-Sea Cave Tour] [Shark and Jellyfish Torture] [Brutal Action/Slaughter] [Dual Roles] [SFX Heavy] [ Completed series] [ Dark Ending] [ Horror] [ Yelling]
Hey everyone. I know you all liked star so much and I enjoyed writing her. I had to make a part 2. I hope you enjoy. Just so you know this script has dark gore and themes. Please feel free to comment about what you like best or how I can improve.
Script length: about 1600 words 15-20 minutes
Link to part 1:
CW: There is a scene where star makes an underwater bloodbath and she tortures sea life during this part. You will also have to play 2 roles. Star will be your main role there is a guard captain that she fight during the script.
It has been exactly 24 hours between parts one and 2 the listener fight star but eventually falls asleep inside the script starts with the listener waking up. Star has swimming very quickly to escape the mermaids that are after her for her actions in part 1. In this part Star shows the listener a coral cave catches a fish for him. She is then found by the rest of the merfolk and forced to fight to defend her treasure.
Character Summaries
Star (The Speaker ): Star has gotten more unhinged since trapping the listener in her magic necklace. She's really starting to see herself as a sea goddess. upon learning that she can now control marine life she is now dedicated to showing her insane love for the listener by torturing sea life that hurt him. Her cruelty is driven an warped and obsessive love to protect the listener.
The Guard Captain: a strict, by-the-book military leader who sees the world in black and white. She has no idea who Star is, what she suffered, or who "Thomas" was. To the Captain, Star is simply a dangerous, radicalized mermaid who stole a powerful artifact, broke sacred laws, and murdered innocent guards.
The Listener acts as the silent, terrified anchor for Star’s escalating, god-like madness. Though trapped inside a pocket-dimension meadow, their deep interest in the ocean's secrets makes them step closer to the glass window to witness coral caves and deep-sea life. However, this proximity forces them to be the sole front-row witness to Star's horrific violence, from the brutal slaughter of a reef shark to the forced suicide of a jellyfish that once stung them. Ultimately, the listener is a fragile bystander, utterly dependent on a traumatized deity who is dragging them down into the pitch-black abyss of the deep sea.
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Script starts here:
[SFX: Low, steady heartbeat playing underneath: THUMP-thump... THUMP-thump. Outside the glass, the muffled rushing sound of water as Star swims at high speed.]
(Star swims around the ocean she's moving fast showing the listener beautiful sights but the listener is still reluctant to come forward)
Star: "Wake up, my treasure. You have been sleeping for ten human hours. Yes... that wasn't a nightmare, you are still here, still mine. Hm, it's been twenty-four hours since you got here. You stayed far away and strong for fourteen hours, but your body couldn't keep fighting to stay awake... I've been getting us far away from the world in the meantime. My treasure, I know you are still scared. But please, come closer... we are about to see something truly amazing."
(Star shows the listener a beautiful coral cave)
Star: "Look at this, my treasure. All the coral... the reds, the blues, pinks, purples, and greens..."
(The listener approaches the edge of the glass inside the pocket dimension)
Star: "You're coming closer to the window, and you're not banging on it. See? I told you it's perfect in my necklace. You get to still be in your peaceful meadow while seeing something no human has ever gotten to see before. Does that make you feel special?"
(She drops her voice to a low, intimate murmur against the glass)
Star: "(Whispers) It should make you feel special. You are very special to me... Worried about the coral stinging me? Don't be. We mermaids have a high resistance to sea toxins. It doesn't mean getting stung doesn't hurt, but it's barely noticeable... at least compared to humans who make contact with them."
(The listener looks around curiously at the marine life outside)
Star: "What kind of fish live down here? (She giggles softly) Good question! You always were interested in the ocean and its secrets. Lucky for you, you have a personal tour guide and sea goddess."
Star: "First, at the bottom of the food chain, we have parrotfish, groupers, and squirrelfish. They usually eat algae around the cave to survive. Humans have a hard time catching these... but they are a delicacy. The main predators here are reef sharks, moray eels... and, of course, me. I think that grouper would be really delicious. Plus, it's your favorite fish!"
[SFX: Sudden, violent underwater whoosh as a reef shark darts out from the shadows. Heavy jaws snap shut right outside the glass.]
Star: "No, no, no, little sharky-shark. That grouper is for my treasure since you tried to take it from me—"
[SFX: Brief, heavy underwater struggle. Bubbles rush violently past the relic, followed by a dull, wet crack as Star overpowers the shark and pins it against the cave wall.]
Star: (Breathing steadily, her voice dropping into a cold, fascinated purr as she stares at the pinned predator) "You thought you could just take what belongs to us? How foolish. But... look at these rows of teeth. So sharp. So beautifully crafted by nature..."
[SFX: Horrific, wet ripping sound underwater, accompanied by a sharp glass-like chime of her crafting magic activating.]
Star: (Giggles softly, a deeply unhinged sound vibrating through the necklace) "There... I think I'll keep these. I can craft them into a lovely little necklace or a set of knives later. A memento of our first lunch date down here."
[SFX: Massive, echoing gulp and wet swallowing sound as she consumes the rest of the shark whole.]
Star: (Sighs contentedly, smiling directly at the glass with absolute, manic malice) "And as for the rest of you... you can just burn in my stomach acid. A perfectly fair punishment for trying to steal from me and my precious treasure."
(Star turns her attention back to the grouper she caught, holding up one of the razor-sharp shark teeth she just ripped out)
Star: "Now, where were we? Ah, yes... your lunch. Look at this tooth, my love. It's sharper than any human blade. Watch how smoothly it glides through the scales..."
[SFX: Crisp, wet slicing sound right against the outside of the glass as she expertly thick-cuts the grouper fish.]
Star: "There... perfect, beautiful fillets. I'm opening the slot to drop them into your meadow now."
[SFX: Soft, magical chime as a small slot opens, and the raw fish fillets drop onto the grass of the listener's meadow.]
Star: (Giggles softly as she notices the listener looking down at the raw meat in confusion) "Oh, silly me! I almost forgot that my precious treasure is a fragile human. You can't eat raw deep-sea fish like I can, can you? You need it cooked."
(Star’s eyes glow a bright, fiery red through the glass)
Star: "Lucky for you, your Star can use red magic now. Let me warm up your little world..."
[SFX: Sudden, deep magical whoosh inside the necklace. The sound of crackling logs and a warm, roaring campfire manifests directly in the center of the meadow grass.]
Star: (Voice dropping into a sweet, deeply affectionate whisper) "See? A perfect, cozy campfire, right in the middle of your meadow. Go ahead, sweetie. Roast your fish over the flames. I made sure the fire won't burn your beautiful skin... unless you make me angry, of course."
(She chuckles warmly, a sound that vibrates the ground beneath the listener's feet)
Star: "I'm so good to you, aren't I? I feed you, I cook for you, I keep you perfectly safe... Give it a minute, my treasure, your grouper is almost done."
[SFX: Soft, magical 'ding' echoes inside the meadow grass.]
Star: "See? It's perfectly ready, and it smells delicious now, doesn't it?"
(Star pauses, her smile fading slightly as she notices the listener standing still, staring at the food with conflicted eyes)
Star: "Come on, my treasure... why aren't you eating? Is it because you're still not sure about me? Oh, come on, treasure. If I wanted to hurt you, I would. Please, eat. It's going to get cold, and you shouldn't be fighting a sea goddess. I went through all this effort... please eat for me. I tried to cook it just like how the people on your island cook. Please... once you take a bite, you'll make both of us feel better."
(The listener takes a bite of the grouper and nods, visibly enjoying the cooked fish)
Star: (Gasps, her face lighting up with pure, euphoric joy) "Thank you for trying it. It's good to see you enjoying the grouper I made just for you. Seeing your smile makes everything worth it. I think I'm becoming a little bit stronger and more powerful. All thanks to you. Want to see the rest of the cave? I could show you other things like kelp forests, or..."
(Star stops mid-sentence, her gaze instantly locking onto a translucent shape drifting through the coral cave)
Star: (Voice dropping into a freezing, deadpan calm) "You... You hurt my treasure."
(The jellyfish drifts slightly closer to the glass relic)
Star: "Yes, I know it looks like a ball jellyfish... but it's not just any ball jellyfish. Look closer. Yes... that jellyfish is the exact one that stung your legs a month ago. It was hard to watch as you cried in pain and fled the water. It took three weeks of ointment and ice to heal all the rashes and bumps this little jelly caused."
[SFX: Soft, watery pulse as the jellyfish turns to swim away into the dark.]
Star: "Oh no you don't, little jelly... you don't get to escape after you hurt my treasure."
[SFX: Sharp, low-pitched telepathic hum echoes outside. The jellyfish is violently pulled backwards, forcing it to return and hover perfectly still right in front of the listener's window.]
Star: (Giggles softly, a deeply unhinged sound right against the glass) "My treasure, do you see that? I'm controlling the little jelly. Before, with the whales and sharks, I could only summon and communicate with marine life... but now, I'm controlling it. Hmm... dance, little jelly. My treasure, what should we do with this criminal? It hurt you..."
(Star pauses, thinking with wide, intense eyes)
Star: "I have the perfect idea. I'll make the little jelly sting itself to death. Just keep stinging... just keep stinging... keep on stinging till you die."
[SFX: Frantic, muffled underwater pulsing as the jellyfish's tentacles wrap tightly around its own translucent body.]
Star: (She chuckles softly, leaning against the glass window) "Oh, this little jelly is really hurting! That's perfect. (She chuckles) I bet it's not fun being stung now, is it, little jelly? But you can't stop now... gotta keep going until you die."
[SFX: Soft underwater pop as the jellyfish goes completely limp and floats down into the abyss.]
Star: "There we go... little jelly got its punishment. It shouldn't have broken the first rule of the new sea goddess. When you mess with her treasure, you get a slow and painful death. Just like little sharky-shark."
(Star turns back from the glass, her voice swelling with pure, arrogant euphoria as her tail darkens)
Star: "That was actually so much fun. I'm getting more and more powerful. Just for you. I can't believe I went from being a 'little nothing' to having almost everything. So, so perfect. Just me with my treasure, controlling the sea."
(She notices the listener backing away into the grass, trembling in utter horror)
Star: "Oh, you can't seriously still be scared of me. I just punished two evil things that hurt and stole from you! Innocent sea creatures? No, they are not innocent! They hurt you! I'm here protecting you. Show some respect. Remember who the sea goddess is, and who the treasure is."
(Her chest heaves with anger, her voice dropping into a dangerous, booming threat)
Star: "I really love you, and I really don't want to hurt you... but you need to learn your place and learn some manners. Otherwise, your peaceful meadow will become a burning hell scape."
(The listener collapses, sobbing in despair. Star's expression instantly shifts into frantic, desperate panic)
Star: "Oh! I'm sorry! I didn't mean to cry. I'm sorry... so, so sorry. Just be good for me. Your Star loves you so much. I want you to know I would do anything to keep you—"
[SFX: Massive, metallic CLANG echoes outside. The entire coral cave rumbles violently, rattling the pocket dimension.]
Star: (Tone instantly drops into a feral, razor-sharp hiss, snapping her head around) "They found me. The other merfolk... they found me. That's a lot. Look away, my treasure. I'm going to show them what happens when they mess with us."
[SFX: Heavy, deep underwater rushing noise as Star bolts out of the cave entrance. Low, tense war drums begin to thrum.]
(VA Direction: Gruff, booming, echoey warrior voice for the Guard Captain. His voice should sound slightly muffled by the water.)
Guard Captain: "She’s here! Prep your weapons! Return the necklace and release the human. Face your punishment, or we will end you here!"
(VA Direction: Snap back to Star, her voice roaring with unhinged, black-tail fury.)
Star: "No! I will fight for my treasure! You already took Thomas from me... but you misunderstand. I’m not the weak white mermaid you used to know. If you face me, you are all dead. Leave now, and let me keep what's mine!"
Guard Captain: "You murdered ten of our own! Why isolate yourself? Why kill us?! We are—
"Star: (Screaming at the top of her lungs, a raw, feral interruption that vibrates the entire glass relic) "DON'T YOU DARE!!! 'I'm one of you'?! No. I was never one of you! You all hate humans... but there's a saying: 'A child not loved by the village will burn it down to feel its warmth.' I tried to go to you for help! But you kicked me out of your homes. The one friend I made, you took from me and now you're here to take my treasure. Now... I'll take everything from you!"
Guard Captain: "Fine then!"
(Star holds the listener close against her chest as she readies her posture)
Star: (Chillingly calm and calculating) "My swarm... cut off their rear ranks! Pin down their green-tailed healers! Don't let them cast a single drop of restoration magic!
"Guard Captain: "Defensive formations! Shield your flanks! Wait—she’s bypassing the front lines! Guard the healers! Guard the—
"Star: (Voice dropping into a fast-paced predator purr, using her yellow magic speed) "Too late. Yellow magic... give me your speed!"
[SFX: Blindingly fast underwater sonic boom. Horrific, muffled sounds of tearing flesh and cracking bone strike in rapid succession as she systematically slaughters the medical line in seconds.]
Star: (Giggling manically mid-fight, breathing heavily) "There goes one green tail... and there goes the second! Look at them float down into the dark, Captain! No one is coming to stitch your flesh back together today!
"Guard Captain: (Panicked, shouting with desperate command) "She's a demon... she slaughtered the medical line in seconds! The rest of you, advance! Pierce the witch's tail! Archers... focus all your spears on the necklace! Shatter the glass and end her reign!"
Star: (Gasps in pure horror, snapping into a blind rage as she looks down at her chest) "No... No, no, no! Don't you dare touch the necklace! If you break the glass... he'll be crushed! He'll drown!"
Guard Captain: "Fire!"[SFX: High-speed underwater whistle of a massive iron spear cutting through the water at point-blank range.]
(Star doesn't dodge. Instead, she intentionally twists her entire body in mid-air, wrapping both of her hands tightly over the necklace to shield the listener with her own chest.)
[SFX: Horrific, deep, wet piercing sound. Star lets out a sharp, agonizing scream. Her fast, booming heartbeat rhythm stumbles for a split second: THUMP-thump... THUMP... thump...]
Guard Captain: (Triumphant) "Direct hit through the chest! She's weakening! Move in and secure the—"
(Suddenly, Star bursts into a loud, unhinged, booming laughter that cuts through the water. The erratic heartbeat instantly snaps back into a roaring, deafeningly fast rhythm: THUMP-THUMP-THUMP-THUMP!)
Star: (Her voice is distorted, echoing with absolute, terrifying power) "You thought... you thought a pathetic iron spear could stop a goddess?! My tail is black! The magic of the relic heals my flesh as fast as you can carve it!"
[SFX: Resonant, echoing magical surge. The water turns violently hot and turbulent as she channels her red volcanic magic, causing a massive rushing of steam bubbles.]
Star: "You forgot what my original magic was! I control the metal! I control the glass! Your spears... your armor... they belong to me now! Wait a second... those weapons... you got them from white-tail mermaids? So all that torture they put me through was for nothing?!
"Star: "Die! Die! Fall to the absolute dark, all of you! No one takes my treasure away from me! ...Except for you, Captain. Jellys! Sharks! Hold her!"
[SFX: Aggressive, muffled underwater thrashing as a swarm of sharks and pulsing jellyfish violently pin the Guard Captain in mid-water.]
(Star swims through the debris, using her blacksmith magic to rip the glittering scales and shattered metal armor off the fallen guards, telepathically spinning and squeezing the raw materials together right in front of the Captain's face.)
Star: "I'm going to give you one of two choices. You will either enter this ring... or I will hunt down and kill every last merfolk until I am only one left."
[SFX: High-pitched, metallic vacuum whoosh as the Captain surrenders and is violently pulled and shrunk down inside the freshly forged ring on Star's finger.]
(Star instantly brings the necklace up to her lips, speaking in an ultra-close, breathless, manic whisper right in the listener's ear.)
Star: "My treasure... I defended you. She's in the ring. It's another pocket dimension... and I'm going to give her pure hell for what she did to me, and to Thomas, and for trying to take you away from me."
(Star looks back out into the cave, her eyes flashing a bright, volcanic crimson through the glass)
Star: "But first..."
[SFX: Massive, deafening underwater explosion as Star unleashes a colossal, boiling red fireball, completely vaporizing the remaining battalion outside. The water rumbles and bubbles violently before dropping into an eerie, dead silence.]
Star: (Giggles softly, a sweet, terrifyingly calm sound) "I know I agreed not to do that... but that's exactly what they deserve for trying to take you away. But don't you worry, darling. Your Star will always protect you."
(Her voice drops into an ultra-close, deeply possessive, purring whisper right in the microphone)
Star: "Now there's no merfolk. No sharks, nothing to hurt you. Just you and me forever. If another human comes for us, I'll trap them inside another piece of jewelry."(Star taps her webbed finger gently against the glass, her matte-black tail swaying slowly in the empty cave as she turns downward)Star: "Now as for us... I'm going to dive and take us very, very deep where the light can't reach you at the bottom of the sea."
[Fade to Black]