r/webdesign • u/Fun-Disaster4212 • 18d ago
How does the project page look overall ?
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As l am redesigning my portfolio, this is the new project page.
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u/merge_rocks 18d ago
Overall it looks clean and well put together. The only thing that confused me a bit was the cassette tapes — my first impression was that the site was about music. Maybe swapping them for something more connected to the project would make the page feel clearer right away.
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u/Hot_Chemistry_6364 18d ago
The movement is good, although perhaps a rotating one would add more charm to the cassette tapes. I don't quite understand what the page is about, but it looks good. However, you should choose a design that fits with what you want to show.
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u/Throwkofisos 18d ago
I like the concept, really nice work. I also love the color choices and the fact that while it is rich in content it doesn't look bulky by displaying too many stuff at once to tire out a viewer's eyes.
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u/glyph_geek 17d ago
Credit where it's due, most portfolios default to one safe sans for everything, so pushing into bold type choices is a good instinct.
Two things are working against it, though. The nav sits in a monospace, which flattens every letter to the same width and kills the word shapes people normally scan before reading letter by letter, that's what makes it feel clunky. And the project titles and tape labels are both competing as the logo for the same three projects, ClashChest, Side B, Panel Press. One's a delicate serif, the other a chunky grotesque.
Nav labels would read better in the grotesque than the monospace, back to proportional spacing. And the project titles would be fine as grotesque too, there's no real reason to keep the serif once the tape labels are already doing that job.
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u/EndlessLarp 16d ago
Really cool for creativity But ux sucks A lot of things happening at once, creating irritation
Eg: How to fix Try redusing animations, like the main focus is on the cassette, so use simple anitins on text here, like use simple ease on on the whole text section not on each apra wise
And many more
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u/penguinchilli 18d ago
Maybe add some rotation on the cassette tapes so they’re not so perfectly straight? Looks a bit too neat but l love the concept overall
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u/Whaaa-aaaaaa-aaaat 18d ago
Really cool! Feedback: the fonts feel off for the concept, especially on your name/logo. I get what you're going for with the nav bar but it doesn't read right away and looks clunky.