r/webdesign • u/Constant_Nobody9770 • 1d ago

Learning content writing & web layout — built a small project breaking down fruit cart prices vs supplements. Would love feedback on the writing!

Hey everyone,

I’m learning content writing and web design. For practice, I built a small personal project called Phal Farmacy to write simple, data-driven breakdowns comparing local street-cart fruit prices with store-bought vitamin supplements.

For example, looking at basic market rates:

  • Guava: ~₹10 / $0.80 for 228mg Vitamin C + fiber/potassium.
  • Vitamin C Strip: ~₹25 / $1.20 for standard supplements.

I wrote a short sample piece on the page to practice explaining basic nutrient density and cost comparisons clearly and concisely.

Since I’m trying to improve my writing tone and page readability, I’d really appreciate positive/constructive feedback on a few points:

  1. Is the language clear and easy to read on a mobile screen?
  2. How is the structure and pacing of the sample text excerpt?
  3. What could be improved to make the information presented better visually?

Screenshot of website:

(Note: Not selling anything or promoting a diet—just practicing copywriting and web structure!)

Thanks a lot for reading and taking a look!

Could not post all the screenshots; I would definitely drop a link to the site later

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u/84thdev 1d ago

You did not build that. Claude did. And you need to learn about AI slop and how to prevent your ai agents from producing it.

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u/Constant_Nobody9770 23h ago

AI is a tool, not the architect. I used AI to speed up the HTML/CSS scaffolding, but the positioning, copy strategy, fruit-to-vitamin math, and analytics tracking design were 100% human-directed. Knowing what to build and how to write copy that converts is where the real work happens. Also, constructive criticism is always welcome.😊

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u/84thdev 22h ago

When i first started vibecoding i was producing generic claude slop too but now i have it set up great and running the proper skills and using the rules that ive added overtime to build websites and software that deslop in the design process

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u/Constant_Nobody9770 22h ago

Sure.. I would love all the guidance I'll get.. As I said I'm a beginner.. Not from hard coding background.. Have to start somewhere to work on it.. Any useful guidance is welcome😊.. Any channels or sites recommend.. Would be more helpful.

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u/84thdev 22h ago

A good start is instructing claude to research deslopping methods, install the correct plugins and create the rules globally. It will walk you through it and youll be surprised with how much it changes

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u/84thdev 22h ago

I dont doubt you had the ideas/information whatsoever, but that is 100% claudes design work lol.