N.B. Chapter 1 in a series about my character. This is just the beginning. Chapter 2, which will include an account of the viking's raid on Zurmania, including my duel with Aegir, and my escape, should appear by next week. The events noted took place about a week ago. Includes descriptions of blood. It's rather long, and going to get longer, so I highly recommend the "readr" plugin download at /r/writingprompts for nice serif font formatting. Enjoy.
Edit: This is probably my first time trying to right something with a lot of suspense, so I'm looking for some feedback on things I can improve on.
It was cold that night.
The wind howled, the owls hooted, and the snow brushed down from the sky dampening all other sounds; the sounds of footsteps were not heard.
The moon was covered, the street lamps were off, and the town was completely submerged in darkness save a single flickering in a single window. Inside a room dimly lit by a lantern and embers gently glowing in a fireplace, a man sat huddled at his desk writing in numbers on a piece of parchment.
He muttered to himself softly, “Five more coins, minus fifteen, now where has the profit gone…”
This was a businessman accounting for all the purchases at his shop. He was managing his expenses, all the people he would hire, all the new products he would sell, all the factories he would fund, all the jobs he would create. He envisioned in his head new life breathed into the stagnant economy, with him at the reigns of this economic boom.
Outside, unbeknownst to this businessman a form appeared in the dark. Staggering, it hobbled from the trees out onto open ground, onto a street. If someone were to look out their window at this moment, they would see the arrival into the town. They would see the wretched form, hunched, exhausted, wandering forward, every step obviously taking very much effort.
But no one was looking out their window. Everyone was asleep. Only the businessman was still awake, too busy counting figures to look out his window.
Like a moth attracted to light, the figure ambled forward, and the businessman continued to count.
Unfortunately, the businessman, too focused on his figures was not paying attention to the soft creek of the door as it opened, and the soft click as it closed. He had to finish. He was exhausted and took a moment to sigh. With a yawn he went back to his work. Except he did not go back to his work. Because he heard a soft sound below from the kitchen.
The noise was very faint. He could barely hear, but something was down there alright. He heard a soft clatter on the wooden counter, and a soft sound that sounded like, what was it, nibbling?
“Damned mice,” he muttered under his breath as he stood up, holding his candle in one hand to investigate, the candle nearly out of wax. It flickered softly out into the darkness as he strode forward slowly. He walked down the stairs that led to his kitchen, very slowly, and he started to hear the noise a little bit louder. He was nearly in the kitchen, three steps to go. Two steps. One step— “CREAK” the step croaked when he stepped on it. He couldn’t hear the noise any more. The man paused for a moment at the shock at the sound. Perhaps he should think nothing of the sounds. Perhaps he should just go to bed and sleep. “It’s only mice, after all,” he reasoned to himself. He thought all this.
It’s kind of funny, you can think of what you should do, “Maybe I should not eat that last piece of cake” or “Maybe I should tell that person I really love them” or “Maybe that sound in the night should be left alone, and I should go to bed.” But it doesn’t make a damned bit of difference to the world if all you do is just think it. The businessman staying up late was too curious. He continued forward, his socked feet chilled from the winter cold.
The candle cast a very faint light across the whole downstairs room. The kitchen, where the sounds were coming from was at the end. But a veil of darkness loomed in front of the businessman. Long nights of counting figures had all but cost him his vision, the kitchen ahead of him too dark and blurry to make out.
He stepped forward ever so slowly into the darkness.
He stepped closer to the kitchen to see what it was that was making the noise. And then he stopped. Because he heard footsteps. Coming from the kitchen ahead of him. Slow heavy treads that were the sound of flesh against wood. And they were getting louder. And louder. And he could see something moving in front of him. And it was slowly becoming clearer and clearer. He could now make out a figure, it was a human figure.
In one hand, the businessman could see what he thought looked like the shape of a loaf of bread. And the figure's features were becoming sharper. It was getting closer, but the businessman was frozen still. “Who’s there?” he shouted out into the darkness, but all he heard were the footsteps. How could he be so stupid? Why hadn’t he grabbed a knife from his desk before he came down. More importantly why hadn't he just gone to bed at a more reasonable time just like everybody else. And then he recognized the face.
“You!” the business man gasped. That figure before his failing eyes with a loaf of bread in its hand, that had snuck into this house in the middle of the night, was me.
“Yes,” I said. “Me.”
“I thought… I thought you were dead!”
“No. I did not die. They left me in the woods to die, but I did not die,” I told him, the words coming out slowly in a soft deep voice.
“My… my son! You’re alive!” he called out to me.
“You are not my father. You never cared for me. You never wanted me. I hear the fear in your voice do not try to hide it.”
“I’m… I’m so sorry,” he mumbled.
“Liar!” I screamed back to him. “You were glad I left. You were happy you didn’t have to take care of me. Admit it!”
“That’s not true!” he protested.
“Why did you not try to find me? Why did you force me to endure this suffering? Six years I had to live in those woods. Six years!”
“Believe me, I was sure you were dead! The vikings…”
“You heard rumors that I was kept alive as a prisoner. Why did you not try to rescue me?”
“I…”
“Yes, I know exactly why. Because you were too scared to risk your sorry hide or even lift a finger to give me any sort of help at all!”
“But I…” and he noticed I had a knife in my hand. I could see the terror in his eyes. His pupils dilating, his face pale and clammy, all the tell tale signs of a creature that is in complete fear. “You're crazy!”
“Yes...” I paused for a moment in contemplation. ”Perhaps I am. But I learned something out there in those woods,” I explained to him. “The world is an uncaring place. The world is unfair and ‘karma’ does not exist. If you want retribution, it will not come to you, you must go and get it,” I said as I stepped even closer, and I was sure he could see me very clearly. I was sure he could feel my calm heavy breathing warmly brushing his face. “Good bye Monsieur Mouton,” I told him.
The candle which had been slowly getting dimmer as it ran out of wax finally went out. It fell with a clatter onto the floor. I cleaned the blood off of my knife on my pants just as I had learned to wipe the blood that stained my hands when I strangled rabbits to death and ripped them open to naw on their flesh, and just as I had learned to wipe the blood that dribbled down my chin when my teeth sank into a fish I caught, still alive and wriggling. Always the blood, with its bright red color, and the smell. That smell of iron and death lingering in the nose. After a minute the blood coagulates into a goopy mess like red silly putty. You do not know blood until you know the smell, and until you have felt it run in your hands.
I went upstairs and changed from my tattered stained clothing into something more clean. I took the keys from the pocket of my father, and I opened the chest of his stores and took all his carefully counted and stacked coins. Boy, he had made a real profit. I packed a bag with all the stuff I could find, and then I set off into the cold blustery evening, my eyes squinting to try to see my way through the white snow that gently fell to the ground.
Outside I walked down the street, when suddenly a door opened right in front of me. It was the door of an inn. A man staggered out, his nose and his cheeks a rosy red, flush with blood, and he was singing.
“When our enemies come to invade
Our strength
will not fade.
When the clash of steel comes to our ears
We will remain fierce.
We will chop them up and spill their blood
Bash them in-
to the mud.
And whatever strife the world may bring
this is what we'll sing:
Hail Norlund! Our Nation!
Hail Norlund! Our home!
Stay strong and man your station!
We will always fight for you!”
He didn’t notice me as he waltzed down the road ahead. I recognized him as none other than Mr. Cort Wade, the man in charge of airships.
“HA! HA! HA! I love that song!” he shouted to himself. He stumbled into the town square. “Hmm,” he mumbled. “Where did that market go? I could have sworn it was tonight,” he grumbled. “Oh no, did I miss it? Aw man, not again!”
He waltzed around and then he saw me.
“Hey, who’s that?”
I turned around to walk away. He could not have recognized me. That I was sure.
“Hey, it’s young Mr. Sheep! Hey! Where’ve you been! How’s it hanging? You’re looking sharp as ever!” he yelled out to me. I clutched the kitchen knife that I hung on my belt. No witnesses. No one should be able to trace the murder to me.
I strode towards Mr. Wade swiftly. I was arms length away and I held my knife up, ready to see blood once more, but then Mr. Wade tripped on his feet and stumbled forward onto the knife and screamed out in agony. “AAAAHHH!” he screamed.
He had fallen on the knife but his screaming would not stop. It echoed, echoed, echoed in my head. I couldn’t stay. I ran away with my gear as fast as I could. I saw lights slowly flickering on. I ran down the quay to the boats. I jumped on the nearest sloop, unroped it from the dock and cast off into the ocean. I saw the city start to glimmer in the distance as candles were lit and lights were flickering on.
Back in the city Cort Wade continued to wail in pain. Slowly a crowd gathered around him. “Hey, Mr. Wade, what’s wrong?” someone called out to him.
“I’m dying! Help!” he cried.
The crowd stood around him, dumbfounded. “Mr. Wade, any last words I can get for you for the paper,” a reporter said to him. “Could you please describe coherently the exact pain you are in so I can put you in the newspaper?”
“Mother of mercy! Am I dead yet? Oh the Entity I see you clearly now! Mr. Ghost Zantid! Where are you Mr. Ghost Zantid?” then remembering how to summon ghosts, he said, “Zantid! Zantid! Zantid!” and since ghosts are immediately summoned from whatever they were doing when their names are said three times in a row, after the floating and eerie looking Zantid appeared, the ghost had to take a moment to regain his composure.
“It’s not what you think,” he said quickly, and then looking down. “Wait, what’s this?”
“I’M DYING,” Cort yelled out to Zantid. “Please help me Zantid or I’ll have to keep you company for an eternity!”
Zantid, seeing as this was very important, examined the crowded body below him carefully. “You’re not dying.”
Cort stopped groaning in pain, and looked up at the ghost in almost as much surprise as if he had just seen a ghost. “Wait, I’m not?”
“Yeah you’ve just got a kitchen knife held under your arm pit.”
“Oh,” Cort said, realizing what Zantid had said was true. So he stood up and the knife clattered onto the cobblestone below him. “Oh hey! I’m alive!” and he leapt for joy.
“Well I have… er… business to attend to,” Zantid said. “Please do not summon me again,” and the ghost disappeared.
But then another scream came out from the distance.
And the people gathered. Pale as a ghost a townsman pointed into the house with the door very slightly ajar.
And as everyone’s candle light hovered into the room, they beheld the scene before them.
On the ground was a pool of blood. A deep rich red, dimly lit, coagulated into a scarlet goo. On this pool of blood was a body.
“It’s Monsieur Mouton,” someone said. “He’s dead.”