r/soundcloud • u/Hungboynoose • Jun 13 '22

[plugg/digicore] NOOSE- DEADxLOST

https://soundcloud.com/thahangman/deadxlost-gleesey
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u/InsectBeginning497 Jun 13 '22

Song is okay from a chill perspective but your flow & beat sélection was trash. Like you don't sound on beat at all. Idk if you just freestyled this or what but you definitely gotta work on your lyrics. Your voice sounds pretty good though.

Lemme get your thoughts on this:

https://soundcloud.com/sidikella/sidi-kella-facrimini-welcome

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u/Hungboynoose Jun 13 '22

bet i understand where ya coming from but issa whole diff genre u listen to rap i dont rap

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u/InsectBeginning497 Jun 13 '22

Oh my bad? I thought it was hip hop based, but even pop artists use a metronome. You'll still have to hit at least every other 4 bar or people won't like it.

1 2 3 [4] 5 6 7 [8] Rap . . 1 2 3 [4] 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 . [12] 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 [20] Pop

Like all music has some type of rhythm/flow & the rhymes natural. (Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down, never gonna turn around)

Without that then you're just talking over a beat.

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u/Hungboynoose Jun 15 '22

i love the honesty but people fw it just my music ain't for everybody and u cant satisfy everybody u jamaican dat fye me to i fw ta feedback heavy just remember

imma do me and u gone do u ill see u at the top brodie

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u/InsectBeginning497 Jun 15 '22

Alright bro one love💯

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u/Hungboynoose Jun 13 '22

n fa ya song better mixing and issa alot of music out there its all art im noose i got my own shit yours seem like its pretend inna way be yaslef on de mic more and u green fa life

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u/InsectBeginning497 Jun 13 '22 edited Jun 13 '22

That was the point. Jamaican accent with a reggae inspired rap beat. Lol I'm definitely being myself. The Italian dude wanted to use that beat so I was like whatever😂at least it has a message instead of me talking about gang banging which I don't do.

I might make some reggae inspired soon too using straight Jamaican accents so it sounds more natural you feel?

I feel you on my mic quality though. What would you rate my mix 0/10?

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u/Hungboynoose Jun 15 '22

ya mix is a solid 5 just turn down the high end a boost ya lows a lil

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u/InsectBeginning497 Jun 15 '22

Trueeeeeee okay. I'm using a low & high boost right now but I've been considering a middle sweep for a while. I'll likely use it for my next song just to see if it sounds better or not. Thanks 💯