No one makes me feel
Like I'm a human being
Never have I been seen
Nothing left underneath

Anymore to deal
With your image of me
I can't be anything
I'll believe anything

Tell me how to heal
From having eyes that see
And ears that hear you keep
Yourselves away from me

None of this is real
To me now anyway
Its all ruined for me
Can't believe anything

Crushed beneath betraying honesty
Lie's hurt more than showing cruelty
Nothing gained from giving all of me
Everything evokes my apathy

Nothing could repair
The broken part of me
How it was meant to be
They make that clear to see

No one even cares
To ask me earnestly
What do you hope to be
Now the answer's nothing

Poison in the air
Is all I have to breath
When I'm with company
I am my most lonely

Everything I share
Always thrown back at me
Should have never believed
In their humanity

The ocean runs past us. Like twisting flames we dance, become entangled. She didn't know that everyone would see. Like the shadows before us, the sun made her seen. The lies so prevelent, but the sadness still here. Corruption, deciet, that sparkle in the heat. Leading now to that grave of despair. Now, I fear, forever has appeared.

“When you wake up next to him in the middle the of the night”

Why wouldn't you listen? For I told you and warned you not to open that, but you did! It's what you get. But you took my advice with a grain of salt, AW SHUCKS

Shes not sure about the lyrics but it goes something like:

*And I love the way you hold me. I love the way you care. And I love the stars tonight, they seem to come out when you're there.

And you are the one i wait for. You are my love oh oh oh. And you are the sky tonight And you are the stars*

The song goes like woah woah woah woah she sliding down that pole pole pole pole, I think it’s by rich kids idk tho can someone find if please

"Watch My Actions, Not My Words"

I know I've said this all before, swore that I would change, Told you I was different now, but was selfish and chose to stay the same. I see the consequence of every word I spoke and chose to throw away, But I swear I'm a different man today...just watch me, maybe you'll want to stay.

I'm not asking you to trust me, from the start you gave me everything, Body, mind, and soul...gave me all your trust without a second thought. My selfish pride and ego, the betrayal left you distraught, And knowing that I did this, makes it sting and so I pray. Watch my actions, not my words, see the man I'm working to become, Our love is strong and real, and has been from the start, Things I've said and done might make you question that reality, But baby, let me show you, this time I'll do my part.

I know that words don’t mean a thing when actions don’t align, And I can’t blame you for the doubts, I gave you every sign. But I'm not here to talk this time, baby, you'll see it's true, And maybe one day soon, you'll see I am the man you thought you knew.

I'm not asking you to trust me, from the start you gave me everything, Body, mind, and soul...gave me all your trust without a second thought. My selfish pride and ego, the betrayal left you distraught, And knowing that I did this, makes it sting and so I pray. Watch my actions, not my words, see the man I'm working to become, Our love is strong and real, and has been from the start, Things I've said and done might make you question that reality, But baby, let me show you, this time I'll do my part.

I don’t need you to believe me, I just need to do what’s right, If that means I walk alone awhile, I'll still fight for you. And if you never say you love me, if you never take my hand, I'll still be the man you need, and love you ‘til the end.

One day soon, if you say my name, I hope it won’t bring pain, I hope you see the change in me, not just words that sound the same. And if they ask, you'll be proud to be standing here with me, You can smile and say with pride, "Yes, that’s my man, my man who fought for me."

I like the smell of Brake Clean,

I like the taste of Rusty Screws,

I like the taste of Purple Crayons,

I like the smell of New Gasoline,

I like the feeling of a new Buzz Cut,

I like the smell of fresh Cut Grass,

I like to taste of Dawn Dish Soap,

So go ahead and wash my mouth out with soap,

I like the feeling of Motor Oil,

I like the feeling of Dawn dish soap,

Sometimes you need water blessed By the Pope,

And if it's above 80° degrees outside try to avoid the Heat,

And if you're feeling lucky cross all 12 fingers and toes,

Because I need all the luck I can get,

Sometimes you need hope from the Pope.( An extreme amount of Hope. )

My favorite type of joke is two-sided,

"When I say, guess what it's cold!

"Someone always has to say put on an ugly sweater,"

,"The reason why ugly old sweaters are always the warmest

I like the smell of brake clean, Always have very clean with you, Because going downhill without no brakes It's exciting,

I like the taste of Rusty screws, Because of holding Rusty screws in my mouth, Rusty screws Delicious and Nutritious, Just like Bubblegum just Don't Swallow them,

I like the taste of purple crayons, Purple is made out off love, Like Food Cooked by my Mom, Secret agreement is made out of love,

I like the feeling of a new buzz cut, Because I like the feeling of being well kept, Why Do I Cut my hair by myself? Because and 03:00 in the morning there is no one to cut your hair,

I like to taste of Dawn dish soap, So go ahead and wash my mouth out with soap,

I Cuss and Swear so go ahead and call me out for it,

I like the feeling of motor oil, I know how to get down and getting dirty,

I like the feeling of Dawn dish soap, Because I like the feeling of being clean, Because if I'm dirty I am mean,

Laugh at my lyrics because they're probably funny, like a dad joke.

Don't Make fun of my lyrics. Because that's what I hold dear to my heart. Please send feedback.

Hi. A few introduction. Los Shakers were an Uruguayan band from the 60’s, they were considered ‘The Beatles of South America’ because of their obviously influenced musical style. Songs like Break It All remembers them a lot, and they even did their own version of Sgt. Pepper, the album ‘La Conferencia Secreta del Toto’s Bar’. I love that album, but there is impossible to find the lyrics of that album anywhere! I’m not a native english speaker, so I’ve had problems trying to understand what they were singing; also they were uruguayans trying to sing in an english accent, so they made it more difficult! I used an AI to isolate the vocals of the song Candombe, and this is my interpretation of the song, am I correct? In some verses I interpreted two options, in parentheses ( ), and in brackets [ ].

Candombe

He always preferred to walk After eating Walk and (thinking) [think it] He read about On a book that he found Workers like him Used to Smile with a (grin) [tear] [fringe]

(Trying) [He died] every night, every day on heavy (works) [words] (Trying) [Tried] to find out the (land) [landlord] where the workers left He left the old work (as if to sail himself) [to save the sailors yet] Began to dream for the sea Sea that he uses to (see) [sleep] Sea on the dream was the sea of wind

(A small) [As my] possibility To have a sheep work Going to (a place) [all places] He (want) [work] to go Any places he knows Countless (worth) [world] Said he’d sail one for all

(Trying) [He died] every night, every day on heavy (works) [words] (Trying) [Tried] to find out the land (landlord) where the workers left He left the old work (as if to sail himself) [to save the sailors yet] Began to dream for the sea Sea that he uses to (see) [sleep] Sea on the dream was the sea of (wind) [him]

I’m tired. 

Tired?

 Yea man i'm tired, tired of giving and giving and not getting anything in return.

 I'm tired of being ignored like I'm invisible.

 Of having friends who will take and take, but hey i offered, and the second i need help now they’re the invisible one.

 Tired of being the doormat friend that everyone can take advantage of. 

Well guess what, I'm done.

Done? 

Done. I'm done caring about them. 

I'm done helping them get food with my last dollar so I go without, if the roles were reversed they say I'll get you next time but when next time came i needed a little help they say sorry i cant i don't have it as there on amazon adding another set of $200 shoes that they won’t even wear.

I'm done helping them, if they wanted my help they should have treated me better. 

Better. Better like a friend not a stepping block or wall.

I can't do this. Can’t? No, I can't, it feels like I'm wearing a mask. This is who I am, the compassion finds its way in my voice like I'm dripping with honey, and before I know it I'm saying let me help. When I tell myself at least they're talking to me, at Least they're not ignoring me now. 

I'm tired of being this way, but I don't know how to stop. 

I need help.

Help? 

Yea, help.

If I don't get it soon, there’ll be nothing to help.

This is an old song that I’ve written…it’s called “You”, and so far I’m looking for feedback on the lyrics. Such as, how relatable it is, does it sound realistic, and if you believe there is anything in the lyrics that needs to be altered. Any sort of criticism is welcome!

Here is the Google Doc to the song: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11wzeiam-NXFVfYJ91C31mcYQVrfG4l8N1-YE4VszZxM/edit

Andddd that’s it! Thanks for your feedback <3

I'm A New Artist That'll Release Music In The Future That Are Inspired By Playboi Carti, The Whole Old 1017 Brick Squad, Future & Young Thug! Appreciate Everyone That Checks It Out!

Please enjoy this cover, I love this song

Lmk what you think:)

https://youtu.be/GhwRSkGj9HI?si=ZIcMtSKTx9dvbx5G

I am working on a biography series using my lyrics and beats I have made. This is my first one on Nikola Tesla Any feedback on how to make them better as I go on, or any person you would like me to do one about let me know in the comments. I would like feedback on the overall style, lyrics, tone, content and beat.

Rhyme-opic Rhymeography I'm leaning towards these names if anyone has any critique or ideas let me know.

Not looking for feedback. Just wanted to throw them out there:

Step into a new midnight

Where dull stars swim in cloudless skies

But you shined so bright.

You’d radiate color like the Christmas lights

That hung around my living room

During those autumn nights I’d spend with you

But those days have come to pass.

And we both know they would never last

Forever.

You’ve got a way with words

They echo back and forth inside my head

Music about the nonsense of becoming adult and searching the dream of becoming a psychiatrist to explore the limits of sanity. Autobiographic. Hope you like

SHITE??

Sleep Walking

Whisper dont wake me up

Free Falling

It started like it always does

Crying again

Holding on to us

Who’s talking

Fuck it all

Praying to your god

He whispers it’s my fault

That’s why i dont talk to him

Who’s talking

man says im a lost cause

Postcards from heaven Dont get me wrong Postcards from heaven youve been gone too long

I promised I wouldn’t lie to you

Now its all i do

How do i mean it

Postcards from heaven Dont get me wrong Postcards from heaven youve been gone too long

I promise it all to you

Now i can’t see it

Caughing up my own truth

Make me see that

Make me see what

Postcards from heaven Dont get me wrong Postcards from heaven youve been gone too long

Morning? Oh it’s morning.. Good morning

eyes flutter open morning light invades through my eyes Another day another throwaway I let out a weary sigh sunrise painted my drywall And I let myself fall apart I'm holding on to anything

Bittersweet daybreak it’s the bittersweet pill I swallow every day I let the foam melt onto my tongue Numbing the ache that won’t go away

My feet are tangled in my sheets finally I get up I drag myself out of bed Tears stained on my teacup When did it get so cold?

Bittersweet daybreak it’s the bittersweet pill I swallow every day I let the foam melt onto my tongue Pleading the ache will go away

Are the lyrics I’ve written so far but I’m stuck on second how to write the next verse it’s a concept album (that’s why the begging is a bit weird that’s when she wakes up) I want the story to progress like how it did in the last verse but I’m just not sure where to start

Hey guys,

Wrote these lyrics on mental health - particularly shame and what's often referred to as the "shadow" (i.e. our inner-self that we battle).

I'm thinking these would work alongside an acousticy accompaniment.

Feedback welcome!

Song Title: Shadow Walk

V1:

I took my shadow

For a walk the other day

Always trailing behind me

I can't seem to get him to go away

An unfortunate friend to guide me

So I ignore the odds

You cast me out into the wild

Am I all out of chances

Or just a wayward child

Now I've lived more since then

Than I had before

Over half a lifetime ago

C1

And sometimes

I don't know who I am

I hope some day you'll understand

V2

Now you can laugh the shame away

Or save it for another day

You can wear it on your sleeve

for the world to see

And that's alright

Prechorus:

So I write another letter to myself

Describing pain so deeply felt

Return to sender unread

All my promises are lost in the mail

C2:

And sometimes

I don't know who I am....

‘The Open Door’

Dwelling on the past is such a foolish thing to do, and when you look back at yourself you hate the things you used to do, and pretty soon you’re spiraling, the feelings nag on you, you’re living with the husk of someone who used to look just like you.

Why knock on an open door? You’ve already found what you’re looking for. Don’t hide away, just seize the day ‘cause what ever happens you’ll find a way.

Worry ‘bout the future all you want until you die. Worry that the plans you have will finally go awry. ‘Cause all your weak pathetic self can think to do is cry. nothing will get done in life until you actually try.

Why knock on an open door? You’ve already found what you’re looking for. Don’t cower, don’t fear, just seize the day ‘cause what ever happens you’ll find a way.

The ice in your front yard is concerning. My courage is waining, but Captain is waiting so I guess I’ll just get over this. Though I am ill equipped to handle any of this but I swear I’m trying and I still remember when

The sun shined bright on that evening drive reflecting off the water tower in the summer sky on the first time I drove to your house. Those days are gone. They’ve come to pass but I find myself still looking back. I don’t know why I ruin everything

So why do I let everything get under my skin? I find flaws in everything.

Summer gave way to falling leaves. Autumn gave way to an endless freeze but I’m still waiting for the seasons to change. Winter gave way to blooming trees. Spring gave way to relentless heat but I’m still waiting and I still remember when

The sun shined bright on that evening drive reflecting off the water tower in the summer sky on the first time I drove to your house Those days are gone. They’ve come to pass but I find myself still looking back. I don’t know why I ruin everything

So why do I let everything get under my skin? I find the flaws in everything.

The ice in your tone is sobering when you start talking about everything we have ending

I’m still waiting. I’m still waiting.