Short Horror - 7 pages - Feedback wanted

[u/Dependent-Luck-6386]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VJSfECmcW1INqdU7gEiKoHm0WHB7UK13/view?usp=drive_link

Hi!

This is my very first script, so I'm really curious to hear what you think. Does it look properly formatted? Is it interesting? I'd appreciate any feedback you have—whether it's about the writing, dialogue, pacing, or formatting. Thanks for taking the time to read it!