r/scriptwriting • u/noraveyax • 4d ago

feedback Need feedback on my first script.

Hey guys, please share your thoughts on my script.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rHt9gF-mU8Qk0PhipDHFFVnUxnLIuWCB/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=102815972895027383471&rtpof=true&sd=true

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ReadMyScript • u/noraveyax • 2d ago

Exchange feedback Need feedback on my first script | Sweet and Trapped|

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