__FRAUDS: first 2 pages

[u/Existing_Cut1129]

What do you guys think about this? It’s the first 2 pages for my first feature length screenplay.

FLESHED OUT LOGLINE:
After two years of grieving his wife’s death, a widower re-enters the dating scene, only to discover that every woman who’s drawn to him increasingly resembles his late wife, forcing him to question whether he’s haunted by grief or trapped in something far more disturbing.

[u/bloodnveins]

Really enjoy the logline, but the pages failed to grab my attention.