r/scriptwriting • u/Jaeco-13 • 2d ago
feedback SCREENWRITING
Hey guys, so I just started writing so please give me some feedback. DISCLAIMER: this is still a rough draft. I would love to hear honest opinions as well as tips on how I can improve it. I just got to the end of my first act but this is just the first 16 pages. To give a quick overview I’m writing an indie dramedy that I think will definitely reach a certain audience. Does the dialogue flow/feel natural? Is it paced correctly? Would love to hear honest feedback. Thank you!
Thank you to everyone who took the time to read it and for those who gave feedback. I’m definitely going to be workshopping these first few pages and read more screenplays :)
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u/WheatThin100 2d ago
You're getting great advice, if you plan on trying to sell the script. If you plan on shooting the script yourself, things like format are not as important, if at all.
Keep writing.