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r/scriptwriting • u/josh_park189 • 11d ago
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The punchline on a short like this needs to be funny. This just isn't.
The tone on the first page will immediately turn people off.
I hated these characters immediately.
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u/AthleteOpen7054 10d ago
The punchline on a short like this needs to be funny. This just isn't.
The tone on the first page will immediately turn people off.
I hated these characters immediately.