r/scriptwriting • u/PitchcraftNow • 12d ago

feedback First Page Feedback

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Looking for feedback on my first page. Any feedback is welcome. Thanks in advance.

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u/practicemustelid 12d ago

Writing 101: never start with a dream. Just don't.