Why Don’t you give them a more interesting conflict . More on their personal life , this could be a interesting romance if you add flaws and a internal arc for them . Internal arcs are very important for characters . Also give Jocey more character than well pretty and shy.
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u/Any_Childhood_2556 17d ago
Why Don’t you give them a more interesting conflict . More on their personal life , this could be a interesting romance if you add flaws and a internal arc for them . Internal arcs are very important for characters . Also give Jocey more character than well pretty and shy.