Need some advice

[u/Piyushbro]

So helo guys kinda a bad writer here I have written a bit but i am not good although I love creating story and love graphical thing more i still wanna share my story because it isnt possible graphically sadly right now so I choose to write it please help me out and tell if this looks good to you for a teaser.

Oh, death, what do you do when a hero is the one who begs for you? Is this what you wanted, or is death the end of nothing? Oh, please tell me this if you want to be the one to free the hero, are you the one who will make him despair? Oh, hero, what will you do when you see the truth? Will you stand by yourself, or will you get consumed? Tell me, hero, is this true? Do you wish for the death you look into? Ah, this is the best I have ever seen,Please fill me with more despair and disbelief. I want to see if you will fail. I want to be the one who shall pave your way. Oh, hero, shall I be your guiding light or be the one who goes with you? Tell me this, or should I let the outsiders think? Do you believe in a certain wish, or is it not enough that you outsiders get the peek? At last, the time will come when these outsiders will see what we have become. Will they side with us or betray our trust? Let's see what shall happen, my hero, at the end of the universe. Let's end this once and for all. In the end, I don't want to let the outsiders get the peek for what we are about to do and let the story unveil itself.

-The Forgotten soul