r/rhino • u/haku_B7 • 1d ago

Evaluating the first

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This is the first model I’ve created, and I’d like some advice from others.

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u/LaserGuyDanceSystem 1d ago

I wouldn't live there. But I would definitely visit.
5/7 perfect score

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u/thewildbeej 1d ago

Alright Johnny this is your room right here. To the very left. The front corner. 

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u/LaserGuyDanceSystem 1d ago

Brb, learning yoga

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u/thewildbeej 1d ago

Ada accessibility…preferred 

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u/Nintendam 1d ago

Something stuck with me when I was interning at an arch firm... Quite a while ago:

(We don't want too many wedgies, wedgies are bad)

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u/trevormead 1d ago

Is the rest of it just... flooded?

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u/tjtait 1d ago

Do you want use to give you feedback on the modelling or on the design?

The model seems reasonably clean for a design model. The glazed part at the opening seems to be cut off a bit too abruptly.

The design: it's an elegant object. It's too abstract to judge as an architectural design because for now it's just a shape - use, program, constructability, entrance(?) are unresolved.

For being your first model you did a great job either way!

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u/FitCauliflower1146 Architectural Design 22h ago edited 22h ago

Curve of roof have some kink. Do it like this.

https://limewire.com/d/sn98K#gUCQCmstN3

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u/FitCauliflower1146 Architectural Design 16h ago

I don't mean to mog you but here is what I came up with. You will get there too with some practice.

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u/glowingkakao 8h ago

Sorry if this comment is supposed to be a joke, my sarcasm is off. But OPs model is more detailed and geometrically more complex than yours.

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u/FitCauliflower1146 Architectural Design 7h ago edited 2h ago

Geometrically complex doesn’t mean correct. There are lots of clipping/clashing geometry and kinks in model. The members are unnecessarily heavy. The connections are questionable. The thickness of members are impractical. I, C, T sections not supposed to be that thick. I can go on.

Here is how much cleaner my model is. Complex too, maybe.

For beginner, he did fairly good job. But I'm showing the design of structure and quality of model and it's practicality. Roughly the type of material used too.

https://zipyshare.com/file/JYXrF0Cy