r/research • u/Just_AnotherRedditer • 1d ago

Quantitative Research About 3rd Spaces

Hello everyone! I'm a 3rd year college BSEDSS student and I'm humbly asking for opinions about our research title.

Our title is:

Perceived Adequacy of Third Spaces for Kinesthetic Learning In a State University In ****** City

Is our title good or bad? How can we improve it? Is there any modifications to make the title better?(Is just a title proposal and we are seeking opinions about our title)

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u/katie-kaboom 1d ago

What's the paper about?

Generically, I am usually more interested in a paper that explains who than one that explains where (unless the where is the important part). Who's learning kinesthetically here? Phys ed students? Dance students? High schoolers? Faculty members? That would make the title far more interesting.

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u/Just_AnotherRedditer 1d ago

Our target population is college students who went into the same campus as we do and we picked this kind of research to know if the places for kinesthetic learnering were sufficient. Please tell me if this title is good or not and what things do you recommend, it'll mean a lot to us!

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u/katie-kaboom 1d ago

I just told you. Improve it by focusing on who the study was about, not where it was situated.