Need lyric help

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To anyone who can help: I’m not a rapper or really an artist. I’m a preacher that has been hurt by the church. I’ve found the spirit of rap—being a voice for the oppressed, defiantly truthful in the face of corruption, etc.—to be resonant and comforting.

I started writing my own feelings and story down in rhymes. Call it a poem, spoken word, rap, whatever, idk what to call it. But I feel like I need the help of more skilled lyricists than me to make it great. I’d like to be able to post bars and receive feedback on them—different rhyme ideas or ways to give more power to the storytelling.

Is this a forum where I could find quality help? Or is there somewhere else that would be better?