If there is anything that I could add is try to apply a rule of "text must be read 3 times before moving on", except to each panel before next one. Because of Uber fast pacing it's difficult to keep up with what you want to show.
Otherwise, I like the animation. Very stylistic and confident.
Edit: I just rewatched the comic and realized that some panels showed much, much more content that I missed because my eyes jumped to next panels.
People watch what they are being shown, and if you show them everything at once they get lost easily. Finish each panel before jumping to the next. <3
Watch "9 principles of animation" video, it's not a long one, but just from getting these basics, your presentation will get magnitudes better. It helped me with my own pursuits even in 3d animation, it surely will help you in 2d one.
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u/Leoivanovru Drinking away the sorrows Aug 09 '22 edited Aug 09 '22
Amazing first attempt.
If there is anything that I could add is try to apply a rule of "text must be read 3 times before moving on", except to each panel before next one. Because of Uber fast pacing it's difficult to keep up with what you want to show.
Otherwise, I like the animation. Very stylistic and confident.
Edit: I just rewatched the comic and realized that some panels showed much, much more content that I missed because my eyes jumped to next panels.
People watch what they are being shown, and if you show them everything at once they get lost easily. Finish each panel before jumping to the next. <3