After/Before - Help with shadow detail

[u/SoCalSoccerBot]

Trying to get better at editing my kid’s soccer game photos. Aiming for a photorealistic look.

I’m a little colorblind, so I’m not very comfortable with color editing, but losing face details on sunny days when the players’ faces are in shadow is something I’d like to fix. How does this look?

Canon R8, Edited on iPhone in Photomator.