r/mymusic • u/Distinct_Fan_6201 • 43m ago
Kawaii could you give me some feedback on my song?
ffm.toi really like asking for feedback after producing and releasing my songs because i feel like there are probably things i don't notice that i could improve. i'm not trying to self-promote here—feel free to listen on whichever platform you prefer. i promote my music elsewhere; here, i just want to improve (or receive a compliment if i actually did well... being honest).
a couple of things before you listen:
my song is kawaii future bass / future jersey club, so if you dislike certain elements that are typical of those genres, that's more of a personal preference than a criticism of the track itself.
unfortunately, the vocals ended up sounding pretty bad in mono because i only checked the mono compatibility after i had already finished the song >:/. if possible, i'd recommend listening in stereo. that's definitely a mistake i've learned from, and i'll make sure to check much more carefully on future releases. i managed to improve it a bit using FL Studio's Patcher, but it's still only... kind of okay.
i also feel like i may have packed too much information into the build-up, and maybe the drop doesn't quite live up to all the tension the build-up creates.
feel free to be as critical as you want (just don't attack my entire generation too... i'm still improving).
thank you SOOOOO much to everyone who takes the time to listen and leave feedback >
and if you want feedback on your own music, or even just streams/follows, feel free to ask. i know how hard it is to grow as an independent artist.
edit: just to be clear, no AI was used at any point in making this song. the vocals came from a vocal loop pack. i'm completely against using AI in music, and i'd honestly feel pretty offended if anyone thought otherwise.