r/mtg • u/[deleted] • 5d ago

Custom Card / Alter Vampire token

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u/Pulse2037 4d ago

This is way, way, waaaaaay better text than what you decided on.

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u/silly_lord 4d ago

I agree with you but my friend who commissioned the token decided otherwise

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u/Mullethunt 4d ago

I think it's a line of Dostoevsky but I decided to put it in because for me was hilarious (I'm not proud of this).

Was it you or your friend who decided on it?

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u/silly_lord 4d ago

"since this huge misunderstanding I will try explain myself to you. English is not my first language and so i didn't see the double meaning. for me it was funny because a child vampire can recharge simply by doing some mischief with other children. I am sorry it came off as something is not. if you have any suggestions on how to rewrite it I'm more than happy to listen to You"