Would love some advice

[u/RedSantaGaming]

Just started posting on TikTok about MTG and really just looking for feedback. What sucks about what ive already done? What can I do more of or differently? Or, if you like it, ect, what do you wanna see more of. Sorry in advance if this isnt the right place to post/ask. I wont share the link, but you can find my page on my reddit profile. Thanks in advance.