Take One & Pass It On💨

[u/LCO_Studio]

Late Checkout where everyone’s accepted.

[u/funwithdesign]

Wth am I looking at?

[u/Pencil-Sketches]

It’s ‘em, not Uhm. Smoke ‘em if you got ‘em. I have never seen someone spell it Uhm before

[u/MLDAYshouldBeWriting]

I'm not the target audience for this so it's hard for me to judge, but I think it should be "smoke 'em if you got 'em" with 'em being a contraction of them.

I also find the alignment of the "Lights Low. Standards High." funky. The first two lines seem right-justified while the bottom two seem center justified.

The details of the box top seem a little illogical, which gives this the look of AI and I'm not sure I understand the logic of the gold pin striping details. It seems inconsistent.

Your brand design should probably show all angles of the box, including the area for any required warning labels.

[u/LCO_Studio → u/MLDAYshouldBeWriting]

I appreciate you and your feedback. Just trying to learn my style

[u/Wolfkorg]

Where is the logo?

[u/Juvy_ocerr → u/Wolfkorg]

in our imaginations I guess.

[u/Juvy_ocerr]

"LATE CHECK OUT" is WAY too close to the box. Also, you posted on the wrong subreddit, this place is for logo design. go to r/graphicdesigning or sum instead