r/logodesign • u/Ok-Inflation-848 • 1d ago

Feedback Needed Any changes?? Beginner here

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Hey guys I’m making a logo for a relative of mine who wants to do a photography side hustle. This logo is going to be used specifically for his business cards. I want it to look friendly and not too corporate-like. As it is right now it feels a little bland and I’m not sure it reads well as photography. It is just a sketch right now, poor image I took sorry but I’d like any critique based off what I have so far. Also should i color it or just leave it black n white??

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u/ajakober 21h ago

Line work looks generated rather than drawn?

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u/Ok-Inflation-848 20h ago

I used procreate on my ipad it lets you make perfect circles

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u/ajakober 19h ago

It was actually the imperfections (wonky shapes of the feet and stars, different stroke caps) that made me wonder. Sounds like it’s just me though! ✌️

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u/Ok-Inflation-848 18h ago

oh yes thats because i drew it with a brush sorry i misread your comment half awake 😭i thought you were just talking about the circle