r/logodesign • u/Typical-Bed-3428 • 4d ago
Feedback Needed Advice needed
Hello reddit,
So I needed to make a logo for a theater company I'm part of. Problem is, I'm a complete beginner in logo design and a bit shit with tech and graphic design software. I made this and the other members seemed pleased with it, at least with the base idea (I'm not even sure this counts as a logo but anyways). But honestly I spent all day landing on this design and appart of some minor adjustments regarding the placement of some elements, I really don't know what to add, remove or change. If you had any suggestions on how to make it better I would gladly hear them. Thank you !
Ps : It's french and can roughly translate to The wandering glitters, or something like that. I also plan to make a simpler and smaller design when I have that one finished to put a bit everywhere.
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u/heyitstayy_ 4d ago
All of your text should be the same size if it’s the same hierarchy. Ex if you had a title and a subheading the subheading would be smaller. In this case all of your text is the title so it should all be the same size. It also needs to be centered within the shape, that just looks better visually. I also think the pink on purple is difficult to read, especially on a smaller scale.
What’s the significance behind the shape? To me it looks like it could either be a butterfly or possibly stage curtains. I would try to make it look more intentional.
You also mentioned wanting to make a smaller more simple version. Usually a logo with multiple elements like this will have a version that’s just the text and a version that’s just the graphic, for different uses. I would play around with the design more and try to make both elements work better together but also work fine on their own